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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update.👏.update the next one soon dear😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Fabulous update dear

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Posted: 12 years ago
NT may have done this cause Geet has always got more importance than her.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 4
nice part...
is it really NT doing this or shes the victim?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wht is dis naintara upto...why she mixed sleeping pills in geet's milk...why she was dancing in dat room...everything sooo mysterious...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
So she is Naintara.. But is she psychic or deliberately doing it? Nice update.
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Posted: 12 years ago

The Palace of secrets Part 5


NT:Jeeju….
Maan:Tell me…
NT:No..
M:Then how come the sleeping pills be here?Somebody has used it.I am sure that no one else has used it.Otherwise they would not have woken up when I screamed.Only Geet is sleeping without knowing anything.
NT:Then Geet must have put it by herself.
M:Why should she?She never uses sleeping pills to sleep.It must be your ded only.
NT:Why are you suspecting me always?
M:Others are so innocent that they will believe your fake innocent face.But you can't fool me easily.Tell me the truth.
NT shed tears: Actually Geet had head ache.She said she does'nt feel that she can sleep.If she does'nt sleep at night,she will be very weak in the morning.She does'nt like taking sleeping pills.So I put sleeping pills in her milk without her knowledge.I did that to help her to have a peaceful sleep.I did'nt do it with any bad intention.
M:I know that you are lying.
NT:No.Believe me.
M:You only put oil on the step.Right?
NT:That was my carelessness.At night after the dance practice,to remove my face make up I took oil upstairs.The bottle got tilted and one or two drops of oil fell down.I did'nt take it seriously.So I did'nt bother to wipe it.I never thought that it will lead to your accident.
M:Then why did you hide it from us?
NT:I was scared whether I will be misunderstood by others.Believe me jeeju.I never had any bad intention to hurt you and Geet.
M:Don't think I believed you blindly.I know that you are after us.But I can't understand the reason.But I will find out the reason and expose you in front of everyone.
NT got scared.

Morning….
Geet woke up.
Seeing Maan near her she smiled:Good Morning Maan.I slept for a long time.I don't know why.
M:That's the effect of sleeping pills.
G:Sleeping pills?
M:Did you tell Naintara that you have head ache?
G:No.I was perfectly alright.
M:She said you told her that you have head ache.So she put sleeping pills in your milk to help you to have a good sleep.
G:What?
Geet was shocked.
M:Geet…what dadu said was right.There was the tinkle of anklets and unsual sounds from that room.I heard it.
Geet was shocked:Maan!
She got scared.
M:But don't worry.It was nothing supernatural like dadu thought.It was Naintara's trick.
G:What?
Maan told her everything.
Geet was shocked.
M:Naintara pretends to be innocent.She says that she never had any bad intention.
Geet felt upset:Maan…she may be telling the truth.I don't think Naintara can go to that extent.Why should she do that?She does'nt have to be angry with us.
M:Geet…you are very innocent.That's why you are believing everyone blindly.Naintara has a clear mind.I will find out that.I will find out why she is doing this.


In the evening….
Everyone including Maan was down.
Geet ran down screaming:Maan!
Everyone was shocked.Maan ran towards Geet and held her.
M:Geet!What happened?
G:I went to that room.I heard somebody's foot steps.I saw a shadow.I got scared.
M:Such a silly thing.
Naintara came downstairs.
Everyone stared at her.
M:Naintara…you were on top?
NT:Actually my anklet went missing.So I went to that room to see if Madhubalaji's anklet is there.Geet had come there.She saw my shadow and got scared unnecessarily.Before I could come before her she ran out.
Geet was relieved:Oh!It was you?
Everyone smiled.
Ganga:If you want anklet,you buy a new one.Don't be stingy.Don't go to that room unnecessarily and scare others.
NT:Sorry…
Sahil:And never go there to have dance practice.
NT:Ok dad.

Naintara was standing outside.Maan went near her:I know that you had a very bad intention while hiding inside that room when Geet entered the room.I am warning you...if anything happens to my Geet...I won't leave you.
He went away.She became upset.

At night….
Nobody except Geet slept.They were busy making preparations to celebrate Geet's birthday.
M:Before Geet wakes up we have to finish decorating this palace.
Rano:Sure damadji.
They heard music and the tinkle of anklet.
They were shocked.
Maan got irritated:This Naintara started dancing again.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey is this like bhool bhulaiya where the heoine only was doing all this and others thought it was someone else
it just that came to mind when i read this
or maybe am just thinking too much here right
well lets see what else happens next
am sure there is more to it than meets the eye
cheers for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing story to read
thanks for the pm

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