Beauty,chapter 9-pg141,Nxt thread-152 - Page 29

loved it...somewhere in his story he will definately going to describe geet...
she gave her share of halwa to him...

Amazing 👏 😳

Superb update

part 4
awesome part...
OMG shes really so sweet and lovely...
and Maan seems to be more poetic and now this...
is Geet falling for Maan?
hope not...
cont soon dear...

Originally posted by: palindrome

I think i should make a separate post for all your comments for this story..The way you understand the situations and deduce the characters is commendable...You read as beautifully as much you write...Glad to have a such wonderful "writer" and "reader"...

Thank you dear….It is you as a writer that you inspire such powerful thoughts. I think we have one thing in common. We both love those very commonly found sensibilities which if you see are visible in day to day life

Originally posted by: Cloud9.

I would comment on the individual updates later but is it only me or anyone else felt that there is more to the story what Maan wrote. Yes the beauty is described, and it might be Sameera's, but I didn't find a devotion to the character sketched by Maan. You see like poets might write when they're smitten by a beauty. Those lines didn't depict his fascination. He sounded like a mere observer to me and I have a feeling that his story might have a character which might be a muse of "Geet" as well.

I think you are bang on. Will "Geet" enter the story or not I am not sure but Maan the keen observer is yet to write this story and fully describe how he perceives "Sameera"…the one who lacks inner beauty…and the only one which matters.

Originally posted by: palindrome

Very good observation...👍🏼

Your cryptic reply is making me curious and giving me hopes😆

so lovely and beautiful. geet is truly a gem for cooking lunch for so many people since early in the morning. hope to get another awesome update soon

as usual awesome

Geet is vry kind prsn...
She cooked food fr stf members n plus she kept dessrt fr nathulal ji too...
Seriously aise koi hota nhi...
Loved maans poem
Bt sad dat it ws written on sam...
Geet j??
Cont soon

such a brilliant concept and you write so well
please do pm me when you update !

Awesome especialy that poem and she wrote note to her hubby with lipstick thats romantic and she wrote "pls dont wait" thats very nice it shows her love and concern in her request. Frankly speaking i cant expres my feelings for geet. U know iam not that expressive iam not able to put in words. If i want to discribe G i wil say she is godness maynt beautyful angel like sameera.

Palin, i swear to god that i wrote lambe wala comment 2 times and each time it got an error. Upar se net ka panga. But jab tak mein yaha ka kaam nahi khatam kar leti, tab tak mein kahi comment nahi karungi.