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Posted: 12 years ago
I would comment on the individual updates later but is it only me or anyone else felt that there is more to the story what Maan wrote. Yes the beauty is described, and it might be Sameera's, but I didn't find a devotion to the character sketched by Maan. You see like poets might write when they're smitten by a beauty. Those lines didn't depict his fascination. He sounded like a mere observer to me and I have a feeling that his story might have a character which might be a muse of "Geet" as well.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mollycoddle

ok i have to come clean with my feelings for this ff, which though are very immature,{Why immature??after reading the part below ,i would say you are as beautiful at heart as much geet..Not every person is sensitive enough to evoke such feelings just by reading about a character from a random story..} but cant help feeling a pang while reading this update...
every time i read the update, the character geet, just manages to make me feel so small, with her selfless acts, innocence...i feel my heart break when i read abut her, and feel a rush of emotions, just wanting to go and hug her and keep her away from this cruel world...
when i read the tasha-geet scene, i didnt feel any anger towards tasha...coz this world is selfish and she is being no different, its just G doesnt belong to this world...{Exactly...}

i just recollect one line from the song from cocktail, main hoon hi nahi iss duniya ki...{šŸ‘šŸ¼}

and then when she reads that crushed paper , my eyes tear up...as much as she may try to keep herself away from the matters of the heart, but she is slowly and surely falling for M...and with sameera into picture, i am curious to know , will maan though being a noble man , able to see beyond a beautiful face...i feel as if there is more to sameera's character...she seems to be a layered character...{Keep reading to know more about sameera..}
i am gonna wait and watch and keep a pack of tissues nearby, as i am becoming a crybaby when i read the updates of this ff😭{Plz plz plz don't cry...I never mean to make my readers cry...}

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Cloud9.

I would comment on the individual updates later but is it only me or anyone else felt that there is more to the story what Maan wrote. Yes the beauty is described, and it might be Sameera's, but I didn't find a devotion to the character sketched by Maan. You see like poets might write when they're smitten by a beauty. Those lines didn't depict his fascination. He sounded like a mere observer to me and I have a feeling that his story might have a character which might be a muse of "Geet" as well.


Very good observation...šŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: alfik

one way i would like to defend Tasha here...i am imagining her as the same in show...she was not cunning like sasha in the show...she was just a show off but good at heart...now why am i defending her because somewhat even am like that u can say 'jhalli' even i sometimes dont understand that i should help her/him or i shouldn't demand for such treats...i just mean that there can be two aspects over here

1) she really dint intentionally do that or 2)she saw that Geet needed help but yet she ignored on purpose...i hope you understand what i mean please dont take my words in a wrong way...
and lastly i thought she wont get the 'crushed paper' this time coz Maan will keep it to himself as he is describing Sameera's beauty in that...but alas she got and may be there is something hidden in his writings...

I am understanding your POV..
Look if tasha would regret later on knowing that she did not help geet when she needed,then she is not bad...She is good at heart😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
I did not realize how much I was waiting for the poetry. Lovely story. Enjoying it. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow he seems to be progressing from poetry to stories
guess his muse may be beautiful but is she that on the inside as well
well so geet made birthday treat for her colleagues huh
and she got up so early just to do the same when she could have given them a treat from the office canteen
and that is the difference between geet and rest of the girls
odd isnt it the way he said to the canteen cook why she would do what she did and his answer was very appropriate naa
so maan you didnt see geet and you were wondering if you were early because she usually is before time
he is right in saying she doesnt belong from this time she should have been better in another time where her kindness couldnt be taken advantage of right
cheers for pm
getting idea of what geet and maan are like together but what about maans life who does he have
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Posted: 12 years ago
i dont know how to praise your work each time i feel short of words !
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing beautiful and jakaaasss update ..!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its her birthday...bechari chhutti to dur, birthday pe bhi dusron k liye khana bana rahi hai!
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Maan actually double checking if he was early...
He wanted to help her to carry that bag!
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Jaane anjane he is oberving her very kneely...uske khule lambe baal...uske shampoo ki smell...he is intrested in her every moove...he thinks that she is not from this cruel world!
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He even noticed that she has stop 2 floor befor n followd her...and he is angry on tasha for not helping geet...(why he is geting affacted that much??
Kyun itni parwah??)
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Geets polite words...
(kisi bhi baat ko kahne ka tarika bahut maayne rakhta hai!
...sumtimes if the way or manner is not right, it didnt convey wat we actually want it to!)
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Maan babu is on investigethon...why these tifins?? How much time would it take??
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"Coz she is Geet"--unique piece!
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And he wished her!
"u didnt invite me"
"sumthing left for me"
(he is so comfertable with her)
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He enjoyd that deliciaus halwa...aur uska share bhi mang raha hai...
...per usne toh bina kahe pahle hi apna share de diya!
(i feel kuchh ehsaas toh maan ke dil me bhi hai...aur shayad wo unse anjan bhi nahi hai!)
...
His writing 'beauty' is inspired by sameera...
..."god has bestowed every form of "phyical beauty" upon her."
...
"and she herself was very well aware of this fact"
"she admire herself in the mirror"
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"i am going for the party n would be late tonight...please dont wait for me."
(wat i feel reading this...is that he is also going to diffrenciate in "physical beauty" nd "inner/real beauty"...just felt that!)
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Geet is happy that she will read his writing-a story!
But his subject/inspiration paind her.
...(ye ishq hai...ishq hai...aur kuchh bhi nahi)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Palin, you won't believe. Me, after reading it like total love sick puppy, gave a lamba comment but at the time of posting, it got an error. You know na, me on phone's web browser aajkal. And even my family is calling for dinner. Moreover, i can't write simply anything. So, kal the first thing will be a lamba comment for such a update.

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