Beauty,chapter 9-pg141,Nxt thread-152 - Page 27

"Society is filled with such people who are expert in giving fake hugs but not a hand of true help when needed"....so true...luvd d line yaar👏

brilliant - no no...that will not be a word enough to describe the way you expressed Geet's inner beauty. Once again from holding on to burden of her freinds' expectations and happiness to her effect on a chef...one thing still stood out in the whole description for me. In the end when she said that final share was for nathu lal ji.

aww...!
Poor geet baby...!

Maan...story writer..!

but what was the inner meaning in that story...??

Awesome...blowsome update.

Continue the next chapter very soon.

Love,

Zahran.

ok i have to come clean with my feelings for this ff, which though are very immature, but cant help feeling a pang while reading this update...
every time i read the update, the character geet, just manages to make me feel so small, with her selfless acts, innocence...i feel my heart break when i read abut her, and feel a rush of emotions, just wanting to go and hug her and keep her away from this cruel world...
when i read the tasha-geet scene, i didnt feel any anger towards tasha...coz this world is selfish and she is being no different, its just G doesnt belong to this world...

i just recollect one line from the song from cocktail, main hoon hi nahi iss duniya ki...

and then when she reads that crushed paper , my eyes tear up...as much as she may try to keep herself away from the matters of the heart, but she is slowly and surely falling for M...and with sameera into picture, i am curious to know , will maan though being a noble man , able to see beyond a beautiful face...i feel as if there is more to sameera's character...she seems to be a layered character...
i am gonna wait and watch and keep a pack of tissues nearby, as i am becoming a crybaby when i read the updates of this ff😭

awww samira is the muse for maan and he has immense respect for geet loved the update 😊

geet is pure innocence and only thinks about others when will she start thinking about herself i wonder 😕

one way i would like to defend Tasha here...i am imagining her as the same in show...she was not cunning like sasha in the show...she was just a show off but good at heart...now why am i defending her because somewhat even am like that u can say 'jhalli' even i sometimes dont understand that i should help her/him or i shouldn't demand for such treats...i just mean that there can be two aspects over here

Originally posted by: Diva7

"Society is filled with such people who are expert in giving fake hugs but not a hand of true help when needed"....so true...luvd d line yaar👏

lykd it when he cross checked d time... Is geet HMT???😆

"sight of boss carrying "bag" for his secretary"🤣...Maan babu achcha kiya nai uthaya, par i imagined it bohot mazedar nazara tha😆

aha inhaling d aroma of geet😉 which was mixture of d fragrance of shampoo n dhaba😆 evn m smelling d food u know na now a days my senses r doing overwork whenevr its comes to yummy food😆{Tomorrow navratras are ending,i would pray to Goddess Durga for your good health..hope you would eat your favorite foods very soon..😊}

frst we saw a poet maan now a stalker maan😆...gud goin

i luvd it when he asked, if anything left fr him..aww how cutie pie he is

u know frst i was dissapointed dat... oh no she's late so no crushed paper n there will be no writing...bt at d end we finally got our today's piece of "crushed paper" n i luvd it...wow praising a woman in such a beautiful way...{It was the toughest part to write for me,i wish i could really make maan write these portions for me...😆}i hope sameera will nvr gt dis piece of "crushed paper" {Don't worry dear sameera would never get that crushed papers as they are in geet's custody now...😃}otherwise yaha luv triangle ho jayega😆...waise bhi chances r vry bright😉

all in one fabulous chapter😛{Thank you sho much...🤗}

Originally posted by: ritzy09

brilliant - no no...that will not be a word enough to describe the way you expressed Geet's inner beauty. Once again from holding on to burden of her freinds' expectations and happiness to her effect on a chef...one thing still stood out in the whole description for me. In the end when she said that final share was for nathu lal ji.

it was beyond brilliance. One, she does not believe in buttering her boss who just asked her for halwa. Her clear heart is beyond all these impressions. Second, for her a person be it MD or a night shift worker - both have same dignity and her relationship with both is important. It was a true revelation moment which exposes her heart.

Another thing which festered in my mind was the observation power of Maan. Just as he summarised Tasha, I have full faith that he has summarised Sameera as well. Stroy which he penned down is just the starting. He may have noticed and given words to his muse but I have this hope and faith that he has also noticed the lack of depth and emotions in those blue orbs as well.

Story is yet to end...some more crumpled sheets later, I trust Maan to penn down character sketch of Sameera beautifully and truthfilly...

Res res res, Oh bloody hell my hands are itching... aargh.

Originally posted by: Temporary99

aww...!
Poor geet baby...!

Maan...story writer..!

but what was the inner meaning in that story...??

Awesome...blowsome update.

Continue the next chapter very soon.

Love,

Zahran.