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Posted: 12 years ago
This one part has really left me short of words to express what I feel right now! All I can say at the moment is I feel pain for both of them. They're both suffering and they're probably equally accountable for it. Whatever Geet is agreeing for isn't giving a good feeling..! 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
My heart just bleeds for both of them... Maan feels as though if he says the right words, the old Geet whom he fell so deeply in love with will come running back into his arms - that's where the song fits in with his thoughts, in my opinion.

And as for Geet, well the song accompanies the sense of loss that she feels from her husband - as if he can never become the person that he used to be...

I'm sensing that Geet recognises that Maan will never be his former self, yet Maan is still hanging onto a thread for hope of the former Geet.

P.S. the song is so heart rendering - feel the pain, feel the heartache, cry into thy tissues everyone!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13

This one part has really left me short of words to express what I feel right now! All I can say at the moment is I feel pain for both of them. They're both suffering and they're probably equally accountable for it. Whatever Geet is agreeing for isn't giving a good feeling..! 😕



We as humans are very keen to play the judge, even with the best of intentions. We need to hold someone just that little bit more accountable. But who can you blame when nobody is right and nobody is wrong? When there is no proof that there has even been a crime committed?

Emotions are tricky...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: walkintomylifex

My heart just bleeds for both of them... Maan feels as though if he says the right words, the old Geet whom he fell so deeply in love with will come running back into his arms - that's where the song fits in with his thoughts, in my opinion.


And as for Geet, well the song accompanies the sense of loss that she feels from her husband - as if he can never become the person that he used to be...

I'm sensing that Geet recognises that Maan will never be his former self, yet Maan is still hanging onto a thread for hope of the former Geet.

P.S. the song is so heart rendering - feel the pain, feel the heartache, cry into thy tissues everyone!



I think Maan has yet to grasp the extent of the...hmm...damage? You're right - it's as if he thinks this is an extended quarrel, that she's just angry and so being reserved from him. He has yet to realise that there's been a little more brewing in their relationship and in Geet's heart than falling into a routine and no longer having a 'spark', whatever that is.

They're at different points and they don't know how to find a middle ground or even convey that to each other.

P.S. The song left me stunned. I have a new favourite from the Talaash album every day!
Edited by kaamchorni - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
So now d tables have turned and its Maan who wants Geet to be back in his life but i guess (as it looks) its too late.Geet cud feel the defeat of Maan's ego even in his "sigh" too,but the poor soul is so hurt that she is not ready to give another chance to Maan.And in rage she has decided to go away fm Maan,to Darjeeling.Work is jst an alibi for her to save herself fm getting more hurt.

But it hurts to see them drift apart.I dont know wats in store for us but like a simple reader,i wud luv to see d hero persue d heroine to get her d love of his life.

But i think u have rather interesting ways to do things.So i shall be waiting for that.

BTW,Zarina,why was Geet having a cutting chai,in place of her bed tea,did i miss smthing ???? If yes then pls mention,or it was jst another of accidental creations??? 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

So now d tables have turned and its Maan who wants Geet to be back in his life but i guess (as it looks) its too late.Geet cud feel the defeat of Maan's ego even in his "sigh" too,but the poor soul is so hurt that she is not ready to give another chance to Maan.And in rage she has decided to go away fm Maan,to Darjeeling.Work is jst an alibi for her to save herself fm getting more hurt.

But it hurts to see them drift apart.I dont know wats in store for us but like a simple reader,i wud luv to see d hero persue d heroine to get her d love of his life.

But i think u have rather interesting ways to do things.So i shall be waiting for that.

BTW,Zarina,why was Geet having a cutting chai,in place of her bed tea,did i miss smthing ???? If yes then pls mention,or it was jst another of accidental creations??? 😉



You've read Geet like a book and I think it's time that Maan made an effort to do the same. But as many of you have pointed out before, ego has become a factor in the relationship.

You noticed! I was wondering who it would be 😆 Actually, I had begun to type up a note about it earlier but decided to wait and see if it caught anyone's attention. I'm going to break one of my cardinal rules and give information about the story outside of the chapters:
Geet had originally chosen the green tea but after the less than happy end to the night, something stronger was needed. She, like me, is one of those people who fuel their anxiety and sleeplessness rather than trying to soothe it. Plus, Maan had pretty much ruined her mood for both coffee and green tea with his comments on her indecisiveness.
I was going to incorporate this in to the chapter but it seemed extremely out of place so I let it be.

Edited by kaamchorni - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
His nightmare maybe has put some sense in him that he needs her & in d other side Geet going away from him...hope they realize they still love each other before it is too late
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Posted: 12 years ago
He wants her back...
She had decided to leave{move away from} him..
and song says.."Lakh duniya kahe tum nahin ho..tum yahin ho..tum yahin ho.."
Can it be more painful????
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Cloud9.

All the disappointment I felt over Maan disappeared. His one line was his undoing. And it also showed for me, that he was shackled and he had his own reasons probably. And the silent tears Geet cried, trust me made my heart go out for the girl. Is it possible to feel for two people who are against each other, and well they aren't against each other in real sense...may be just... ah never mind.
The song just completed and heightened the feel. Zarin, can I kis your hands for typing such a beautiful piece?
Oh that song went to my playlist now!

I also feel they are not against each other..Its just they are not able to be "together"..and chapter 12 showed their helplessness...
Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kaamchorni



You've read Geet like a book and I think it's time that Maan made an effort to do the same. But as many of you have pointed out before, ego has become a factor in the relationship.

You noticed! I was wondering who it would be 😆 Actually, I had begun to type up a note about it earlier but decided to wait and see if it caught anyone's attention. I'm going to break one of my cardinal rules and give information about the story outside of the chapters:
Geet had originally chosen the green tea but after the less than happy end to the night, something stronger was needed. She, like me, is one of those people who fuel their anxiety and sleeplessness rather than trying to soothe it. Plus, Maan had pretty much ruined her mood for both coffee and green tea with his comments on her indecisiveness.
I was going to incorporate this in to the chapter but it seemed extremely out of place so I let it be.




After reading 12 chapters,i've kind of understood that if u've penned down smthng its not there without any reason.Thats why "d cutting chai" caught my attention.Yippe i m happy that i noticed it.

And thanx a ton 4 breaking ur rule for us.
Edited by sweetsampa39 - 12 years ago

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