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Posted: 11 years ago


so Maan left Khurana empire...why...

and where he is and if he left then how he asked Dev to see overseas projects...

Maan never came to bring Geet back...does he know that she is in Darjeeling...

Dev is in Darjeeling...and he saw a woman tried to save her but she fell into the river...

in one part when Geet came back to guest-house then she came face-to face with a person...who was he...Dev?...

u have concentrated this story now on Dev only...I wonder whether it is Maan-Geet story or Dev...

very interesting update...

waiting for next part...


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Posted: 11 years ago
N with that slippd my heart to stomach...
Waise KAAMS ... Ummm...story s mkng me lil impatient ...
U c... DEV hs nt gvn vry fond memory to b relishd ...
I wnt to cnfess here dt I hv strd skippng bits in the chaptrs... I hope u get my point..dnt chop the stry in ny way... I jst mean leave ur nautanki of lazyness n gve updates sooner wth a topping of MAANEET..

Love

SANJH
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am cheating on Gehraiyan with a short story and if anyone would like to read it, you can find it here: Smoke and Mirrors.

I keep the emphasis on short; rest assured, Gehraiyan will not suffer due to the other story.

- Z
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6



so Maan left Khurana empire...why...

and where he is and if he left then how he asked Dev to see overseas projects...

Maan never came to bring Geet back...does he know that she is in Darjeeling...

Dev is in Darjeeling...and he saw a woman tried to save her but she fell into the river...

in one part when Geet came back to guest-house then she came face-to face with a person...who was he...Dev?...

u have concentrated this story now on Dev only...I wonder whether it is Maan-Geet story or Dev...

very interesting update...

waiting for next part...




I think there's been a bit of a confusion and I'll attempt to clear it up:
  • Maan does not work in the Khurana Empire - he works under a man named Mr. Bulani.
  • Maan was the one Geet came face to face with in Darjeeling. He did not come to bring her back but actually came for work.
  • Dev has been called by Maan to assist him in this work.
  • Where Dev is thinking about Maan leaving the Khurana Empire, he was reflecting on the past, years ago. Why he left... we don't yet know.
  • As for this being a Maan-Geet story or Dev's one... I never said it would be either 😉

Hope that helps a little bit.

Edited by kaamchorni - 6 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjh89

N with that slippd my heart to stomach...
Waise KAAMS ... Ummm...story s mkng me lil impatient ...
U c... DEV hs nt gvn vry fond memory to b relishd ...
I wnt to cnfess here dt I hv strd skippng bits in the chaptrs... I hope u get my point..dnt chop the stry in ny way... I jst mean leave ur nautanki of lazyness n gve updates sooner wth a topping of MAANEET..

Love

SANJH



Hey Sanjh,

Can't say my laziness is to blame here - I've been very busy. Spare time to write updates is a luxury I can rarely afford these days. And I definitely don't intend to make promises I can't keep so I'll get this out of the way now: I can't promise the number of Geet-Maan scenes will increase. I have never said that Gehraiyan was a Maaneet story and I stand by that. But as it is, most of the chapters have been based on either Geet or Maan, if not both...

Give my Dev some time... he is not the same as the show's Dev and I personally don't think he's shaping up to be too bad (could be writer's bias, mind). See if he can change your mind.
Edited by kaamchorni - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
[Music Selection]

The Hero and the Fool

A lot happened in those next eight seconds.

In fact, he would later reflect on how those few seconds of his life stretched until it made him feel as if he hadn't moved at all... that if anything had happened to the woman, he would be the one to blame...

He looked at his hand in shock, unable to believe that the woman had quite literally slipped through his fingers.

Her ring fell from his palm and rolled dangerously close to the cliff's edge. He quickly put a foot over it and slipped it into his pocket before it travelled any further.

With a heavenward sigh and a quiet, self-damning curse, he looked down at the water.

"F**k."

He couldn't do this. He was too high off the ground. It was too terrifying, too much for him. He couldn't do it.

Except...

The memory of her large, fear-filled eyes just seconds before she fell returned to him. A second later, he was already jumping into the river.

The water was ice cold and kicked at him like sharp needles. He had never been a particularly strong swimmer - having always preferred to keep his feet firmly on the ground - and it took everything he had to fight his way to the surface. Even then, the tide instantly pushed him back underwater.

His mouth opened and closed in a desperate attempt to breathe as the salty water burned his eyes. With all that was happening, it should have been obvious to him, an instantaneous realisation that kicked his reflexes into gear. Instead it came to him like a holy revelation...

He was drowning.

The thought threw everything into focus and suddenly, the water became all too clear. His senses sharpened and panic began bubbling in him too quickly to control. He frantically kicked at the water, attempting to break its surface, but soon, a sweet lethargy swept through his limbs and dulled his movements.

He was drowning...

It wasn't too bad. In fact, when he embraced the water's calm, he felt more content than he could ever remember feeling.

This world was just borrowed time, after all...


* * *


Ami chini go chini tomare

Ogo bideshini

Tumi thako shindhu pare

Ogo bideshini

Ogo bideshini...


Whispers of a woman's voice enveloped him. He smiled drowsily. She sung with comfort and familiarity, a lilting voice that hummed as if she was cooking on a Sunday afternoon or tracing patterns onto her lover's back.


Ami chini go chini tomare

Ogo bideshini...


His smile froze. Finally, after all this time, his body became alert to the danger around him. His eyes snapped open while his limbs flailed clumsily in an attempt to get out of the water.

How long had he been down here? How close was he to death?

A sudden burst of energy shot through him and he used it as an opportunity to furiously kick himself upwards. After so many wasted attempts, the water relented and finally allowed him to swim up to the open air.

Salt water poured out of his nose and mouth; he frantically gasped for breath and tried to ignore the searing pain. His lungs, meanwhile, screamed in agony while his heart hammered angrily in his chest.

Somewhere on the river bank, as his eyes began to adjust to the sunlight that suddenly assailed him, he saw the outline of a woman walking away.

Edited by kaamchorni - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
He..he.. See... Dev Khurana s a signaturd fool!! Always want to do gud but evntually turns out to b fool... Alrght... I shuldn't b unreasnably harsh... He, no doubt showed bravery instd of chikening out... Dt ws really gud... Bt d climax took d cake... I actually laughd.. Btwn... KAAMS, cookng nd tracng pattrn on lover's back... Hmmm... A vry opposite scenario.. For same song... Bt may b its the serenty of the song and satisfaction in bth activities tht they b framed in one sequence... Ds part ws my favrte...indeed... Love sanjh
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful!
Except for the word I can't come up with anything. The music piece, the scene, his reflex action...everything...made me speechless.

For a person who is afraid of heights, to jump off the cliff into the river down...damn woman I still have goosebumps.

By the title itself I got to know what the update is all about, yet... the description, only made the picture painted before my eye so vividly that now when I close my eyes I swear I can see him putting his foot on the ring, stopping its movement and the silhouette of the woman who was walking away leaving a wet trail with her...


You make me speechless Z!


PS: This music piece would haunt me to death.
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Posted: 11 years ago
bengali song...gr8...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Is the woman a ghost? 😕 Coz first she was struggling to save herself to fall frm the cliff,then she fell and when Dev too jumped after her and after so much struggle got to the bank,he cud see her walking away!!!!
Or that walking woman was smbdy else??
Then,when he was drowing he cud hear sm woman singing "Aami chini go chini tomaare ogo bideshini"[Beautiful song]
Its really giving a haunted feel.


Where is Maaneet???
Missing them.

Great part.

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