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-eiya-

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Posted: 12 years ago

awww luv s so cute...loving it..do continue soon..

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Hanishadevi

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Posted: 12 years ago

such a lovely update...poor geet..her life is full of pain..pls cont soon.

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shri12

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Posted: 12 years ago

Cute part
maan flirtish talks wit geet
maan and luv are tring to get shruti attention wow
waiting for next

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priyal12

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Posted: 12 years ago

my favourite os
very nice part love it so much
waiting desperately for next part
update soon PLEASE

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maanluver

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Posted: 12 years ago

that was such a cute update di

geet is so tensed listening to the condition of her niece

she has no one else in the world other than her

ya she has her bhabhi but she is in coma

n here shruti is suffering so much

but when Maan is there y to fear

woh sab theek kardenge

maan knows geet's needs some tym alone

to cry freely n let her pain out

but is this pain so small to flow out in the form of tears

maan's flirty talks with geet

oops sorry geetika 😆

trying to make her smile again

dekho geet dekho maan kya bol raha hai

itne chote luv ko pyaar hogaya

n yahan maan ki feelings ki koi kadar hi nahi hai very bad geetika🤣

it worked at least she smiled a little

luv knows that shruti is in pain

it must be unbearable for a little child like her

to go through so much pain

maan n luv trying to gain her attention

cindrella princess was so sweet

update soon di

waiting eagerly

muahhh

luvvv yaaa

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prachi sinha

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Posted: 12 years ago

cute n lovely part liked it

nd feeling sad for that lil angel

chalo maan use jaldi theek kar do nd geet ki smile v wapash aa jaegi

dii mujhe pm karna plzzz

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chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

awww he was trying to make her feel better aint that just sweet of him
and it worked for a while
bless he really cant stop calling her geetika right
and then messing with her
so geet has to make sure she is able to be strong for her little neice
as shruti only has her now
well her mom but she isnt able to come right
cant wait for more of this
see ya again soon with this then

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Neeraj

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Posted: 12 years ago

Cute lettle update suhaana😉😉👏

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Alicia thelwell

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing story
thanks for the pm

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vandana73

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Posted: 12 years ago

well done waiting for more

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