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Posted: 12 years ago
#91


Maan Geet ko humesha chedta rehta hai...always teasing her...

poor Shruti...she is suffering...

may God save her...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
wow.. oh no shruti is a heart patient.. i hope maan can cure her.. love luv and maan talk.. cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
still waiting for update u said u will update daily
but heres no update
I am:-(
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON
AS USUAL WAITING DESPERATELY
Continue Soon...Didi
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: 7sanjiri

still waiting for update u said u will update daily
but heres no update
I am:-(
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON
AS USUAL WAITING DESPERATELY
Continue Soon...Didi



sorry sweety i m updating LOVE LIFE daily...

so its update will be a bit late
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
Really wanna knw hw will maan treat her n hw wil he make geet to tell him her story,her pain
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
awesome
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liked a lot
continue soon
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happy new year😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
awesome update
poor geet feeling bad for her
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99




A COMMITMENT

PART 4


maan : so luv who is this beautiful princess he asked to luv

Luv : the cindrella princess Shruti...

maan: aww so whats the cindrella princess doing

maan said looking at shruti..

luv:not playing with luv...

maan looked at both of them… though they were not talking to each other but still both were known with the feelings and innocent emotions that they were carrying in their heart….. friends are such important part of your life that actually makes you loose yourself with them … they will share your hurt and makes you smile with their own way … that's called a friend ..and may be that's why a friend is consider someone whom you can easily fall in love with…..

maan looked at shruti and them at geet he knew that she is seeing them from the glass of the door… but he couldn't say anything.. neither he can call her nor he can leave his patient like this and go…shruti's medical condition needs to be stabilized before she is been operated upon…

maan ; so princess doesn't talk to her doc…

shruti looked at maan from the corner of her eyes… her eyes were blank like hiding something missing something… she was aloof and all alone like doesn't want to consider anything.. her hands were softly and gently caressing the hair of her Barbie doll..maan was very intently noticing everything .. her gestures were clearly telling that she was feeling alone and lonely….

Well this was bound to happen when the baby neither had her father nor mother to support her.. no matter how many relatives were there but no one can fulfill the need of a mother's caressing and the need for her lap ..the warmth and comfort that only a father can provide….

Shruti: no… she clearly denied… all hurt shuti…. Dlad hota hai….

Geet had tears in her eyes .. she knew how her baby was suffering … she still remember the day when her sweetie niece was born… she was on cloud nine just because she was a BUA now…. Her niece will call her bua… she was the one who actually fought with everyone just because her shruti will cry if someone will disturb her sleep… she was the apple of geet's eye…..


Maan smiled and assured the cindrella princess…..



Maan: aww.. but I wont hurt you.. you see I am your geetu's friend I wont hurt you…. And baby I will tell all your monster pains to leave you ..warna LUV will punch it… kyun luv….



Luv immediately agreed ..



Luv: haan I will give a BIGG punch..sachhi….



Geet left to her duty seeing maan going easy with kids.. he was actually appearing like one of them… even shruti's was mingling with maan which was hard to believe….



Shruti: phil dard nahi hoga na….



Maan : bilkul nahi.. acha okk so who wanna be friends with me ….



LUV: me…



Shruti: but you are geetu's fliend…. Then how can you be shuti's…. that was a million dollar question that maan has to make her understand…..



Maan: hmm..ye to hai.. so your geetu wont like if I will be your friend.. shruti nodded ….



Maan : ok so be my BFF…. Mera matlab hai best friend forever …. Phir toh your geetu wont have a problem na…



Shruti smiling …: nai…



Maan raising his hand for a formal handshake….



Maan: so BFF ….



Shruti: folever….



The rest of the day maan interacted , chatted with both the kids… he knew the main reson for shruti's aloofness was TIME… geet was not able to give her sufficient time that she needs and may be this is the reason that her response towards the treatment is a bit slow….

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Later in the evening…



Shruti had been discharged since her condition was now stable and still there are some tests that is needed to be performed before the final operation.. so geet was to take shruti … but there an emergency came ..and like always geet needed to stay but she had promised a full day with shruti but now her commitment towards her work needs her…





Maan whose duty was over was going home but how can he without saying a bye to his geetika and his BFF..so he went to shruti's ward… but heard a cute conversation where geet was trying to make shruti understand ….



Geet was kneeling in front of her niece and was giving her all kinds of mouth watering bribes just to make her understand….



Geet: please na shruti you know geetu needs to stay here…. Baby please maan jao… okk you want to go home so bua called sneha (geet's friend).. aap jaante ho na .. she will take care of you…



Shruti just made a face and got up from the bed with her Barbie and went to the second bed which was also empty since luv was given a discharge …..



Geet came near shruti again…



Geet: phir tomorrow I will come and we will have your favorite choco , strawberry icecream… new Barbie.. this time cindrella… and what ever you will say baby…..



Again when there were no effect of her hard efforts maan decided to let his geetika know his charm on the kids….



Maan : hey Bff…..



Shruti didn't take a second to come into maan's arms.. well that was a complete surprise , shock ..she was astonished beyond limits…. Her mouth was open making a O shape and maan just chuckled seeing her stunned position and winked at her…..



Maan: hey geetika what's up…. Why are you troubling my bff….



Geet raised her eyebrow..asking " what the hell is this bff now…"



Maan : relax its best friend forever.. he said looking at shruti who in turn gave an angry glare to geet…..



Geet was irritated first by her sudden duty when her baby needs her .. she had to broke the promise just because she needs to assist an operation and secondly him.. and his GEETIKA….



Maan : you know what you need a break geetika and for my bff I am taking her … kyun shruti will come with me… maan asked shruti and she instantly nodded …



A child needed a love to be felt deeply and warmth that could make her fall asleep that she was getting unknowingly from maan…. Geet tried to protest but maan with his one eye gesture stopped her….. assuring her to BELIEVE HIM at least this time…..



Geet : but….



Maan: believe me geetika …..



Saying so they left …..

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow nyc part
maan n shruti are bff
nd maan gonna to take care of her bff
waiting for next

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