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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
ok...

but i had a feeling that sameera and geet were connected in some sense
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
superb
a very different story
loved Maan's new avtaar
continue soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thannks dear...
waiting for the twist😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 1




Location :

Planet-Earth

Country-India

City-New Delhi

Khuraana Mension

Time- 7:00 am IST


A Handsome young man seemed too much in hurry.Climbed downstairs and rushed toward main entrance


" Maan Betay aap itni subha subha kahan ja rahay hai ? Even without having breakfast" a female voice back called hi.He rooted to spot.Turned his face toard lady grinning ear to ear.She is non other then the elegant lady Mrs Savitri Devi Khuraana.

'Oh Daddi Maa hum kitna bhi chup chup kar jaaney ki koshish karry.Aap humko pakad hi latti hai ' came near to her and grabbed her shoulders.

'I m not ur Daddi but ur mother too.Dr Khuraana understood.U may b smartest and wisest man on this earth.But ur this smartness is not for me okey.'...rolling hand over his cheek she said ...'Aap to wahi ha mare chote se Maan hai.Aur agar bacha bina kush khaye bahar jaa raha ho to Maan ko kaise chain aayega'

'Its true I can never me that much smart as u r' he laughed


'Okey now jokes apart.Breakfast is ready lets go.Actually I over heard ur convo on phone last nite that u r planning for a meeting early this morning.'


'Oh My super smart Daddi Maa plz forgive me today .I don hav lil time for BF I hav to pic Sameera' making baby face he said


'Then yeh baat hai apko Sam k liye jaana hai jaldi' she teased

'Daddi Maa I m telling u don pull my leg okey.I m not going for Sam but I hav to pick her. We hav to attend a meeting with Dr Martin.He is leaving US by 11.So he requested to met us' he gav explanation checking his tab


'Maan that's fine but hav ur breakfast first every thing is ready' dragging him she said

Maan never got surprised that how Daddi arranged all things so fast coz this was Daddi's habit from many years .Daddi knew what her boys want..when ever want ...She was everything to Maan n Dev 15 years back one major incident changed their lives snatching their parents.He had his breakfast in hurry and left.

Maan picked Sam as they had meeting with Dr Martin at 8: 30


In the conference room of Indian Space Research Center Dr Martin was waiting for them

'Hello Doc . I was waiting for u matter is serious' Dr Martin jumped from chair finding Maan in front

'Ya so that's reason .We r here to discuss what to do next' Maan said

' Dr Martin its 100% clear from my calculations n observations we r in danger' he dropped bomb on him straight

'But Dr Khuraana do you think we r able to fight with them ?' he was much upset

' Dr Martin all of us think.Whether we r able to face them or not ? Ya we r but real question is how ? I can provide u way n u all hav to walk on it only then it is possible.' leaving his chair Maan said

'That's why Dr Khuraana NASA wants u there but u r not ready.U want to work from here '

'Dr. Martin why all want me there ? In US I can work from here.it is not war of one human , one country to other , to prove themselves much advanced n powerful .But this is war for humans u got it to save humanity our existence in this universe' He became hyper ' We hav to fight with species who r much advanced then us.We humans hav to keep our personal conflicts aside to save humanity to sav our planet other wise within one year every thing will b over fir na koi US rahega na India, no one ll b here to prove domination'

Dr Martin was speechless n. He had no other option as he was the adviser too to American President the most powerful person on this earth but talking to most powerful brain on this earth without whom this humanity on this earth gonna b finished

They decided to arrange a high profile meeting next weekvwhere Indian authorities n other higher authorities of this world were gonna discuss all matters.

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16 Light years away from our solar system on Planet Rohakash

Karon was also discussing his plan in his court with other court members this was obvious Neytiri was also there as She was heiress to her father's throne

Note :4 me this is difficult to create new words n sighs for Rohakshi language n its difficult for u all to understand too so we gonna use our language here

'After resent wins I m really really happy n my urge to conquer universe is growing day by day n my target is solar planets especially earth coz life is only on earth n to conquer plant having no lif is easy but to conquer a planet which has life is difficult.' Rohaksh Karon laughed ' But I want to fight with humans lets see upto which level they can go.I will compel them to surrender n they will come to us on bent knees n we ll make then our slaves' with such a power and powerful force Karon turned out to b Megalomaniac.He thought only he was the powerful person


Tin Tin ( His commander in chief): ' But my lord to win earth is not a easy task coz humans have such a weapon k humare sari advanced technique fail ho jayegi'

'Kya keh rahey ho tum .Rohakshins k samne kadde honna to kya woh log hamari taraf dekh bhi nahi saktay. to kaya hai aisa unke pass' he burst on his commander in chief

'My lord one of top earth scientists Dr. Khuraan has invented such a weapon that they can easily face us that is called G-Gun which works on earth's gravitational force.That is able to make a very strong shield of gravity around earth k usko par karna mushkil nahi na mumkin hai even our advanced space crafts can't do this job that gun will destroy all ' tintin said hesitatingly

'But my father has this dream then we will hav to find other way' Neytiri intervened

'Ek rasta hai.Is sab ki jarrh hai Dr Maan Singh Khuraana agar who he na rahay' Tin tin suggested

Jinta ( adviser n chief of space missions) :' Per yeh itna aasaan nahi.Dr Khuraana ko khatam karke bhi mushibat khatam nahi ho jayegi .Becoz we don know how many people know about this project G Gun.Dr Khuraana ne G-Gun k trail main humare 3 space craft udda diye thay jise unko patta chal gaya humare plan k barre..aur humko patta chal gaya k humans can face us' he warned correcting tintin's mistake

'To aab kya ho sakta hai' sad Karon

' Humko chup kar baar karna hoga kissi ko earth per jaakar unkey beech rehkar sabh jaanana hoga .Especially Dr.Khuraana is our target unke sath reh kar he pata chal sakta hai what they r upto' Jinta said

'Jinta who ll go to earth than ? ' amazed Tintin said

'Main batata hu kon jayega ?' smile came to Karon's lips

Everybody looked towards each other in surprise that who was going to earth Karon gonna send whom ?

'My daughter Rohakshi Neytiri and this is chance for her to prove a deserving heiress 'he pointed Neytiri

' Me father' surprised Neytiri

'Ha aap Rohakshi aap jayogi unka plan patta lagga kar Dr Khuraana ka kaam tamaam karma hai aapko' he grabbed daughter from shoulders

' I can't go against ur wish.If u want me to go I ll.tell me what to do' determined Neytiri said

'Rohaksi u can do this Ya this is hard task but u can start with ease.' Jinta boosted her

' How sidhay sidhay batayo' frustrated Neytiri said

'NASA is chief space association on earth and NASA space shuttle is the way jo aap ko Dr Khuraana tak lay k jayega' Jinta disclosed


he continued ' Unke space station Meer main kush technical problems aa gayi hai so they will send astronauts from earth to fix that problem .Meer tak ja kar unko space shuttle say bahar aana padega during their space walk aap easily unki body main ja sakti hai n be a part of that person's body koi b yeh nahi jaan paeya k kuch galat ho rahha hai even their security system ll not detect'

'Main unki body main jaa kar kaya karungi'

'Jaise he woh wapis jayegay on earth then u can leave that person's body n easily u will b on earth.This is our main aim after that you know what to do ?' Jinta laughed aloud

'Main samjh gayi aggay kaya karna hai.Dr Maan Singh Khuraana wait n watch I m coming for you' she placed hands on waist and said with determination



For non science readers it is bore I think plz bear me.If u find interesting comment and hit lik



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Sonia

Edited by Jass.KN - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
toh maan ko phasane k liye geet ja rahi hai...kahin khud phansk na rahe jaye...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Loved the alien land beaware maan ur princess is coming hayee too gud
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Note :4 me this is difficult to create new words n sighs for Rohakshi language n its difficult for u all to understand too so we gonna use our language here...

ha ha ha right...absolutely right...tum to likh bhi lo Rohakshin language but how can we understand...😆

I have read this part earlier also but I was feeling same excitement to read now again...I was getting goosebumps...

so Neytiri is coming to earth to get information and to finish MSK...

par woh nahin jaante ki MSK ke jaadu se to Rohakshin kanya bhi nahin bach sakti...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
update dadi maan bond maan humanity and geet coming for maan wow



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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Nice geet ka target hai maan magar kya pata kon kis ka target banega loved it great start dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
nice update...
princess geet chali earth pe ab dekhna hai kon kiska terget banta hai...

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