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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
waiting for the next one eagerly
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nice update

me waiting f0r next

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Posted: 12 years ago
hi dear i have pressed like for all the updates...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
emotional , part
feel sad for geet
without any fault she is suffering
y maan can't know the truth first and from where that parineeta came and how could dadi forcing her decision on maan like this
blackmailing huh
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Posted: 12 years ago
pls continue soon and pls continue this FF
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi thanks 4 da pm bt read pt 36 already n commented! update soon
Edited by khwaishfan - 12 years ago
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PART 37:


Maan: enuf geet wats all this?? Pagal ho gayi ho?? Kya tamasha laga rakha hai tumne yaha?? U are drunk?? Teen din kaha thi tum??


Geet: none of ur concern Mr. khurana stay away from me I hate u!!! wait a min its like u were missing me on ur bed right??


Geet!!! maan raised his hand bt stopped mid way..... I was worried for u dammit tum aise soch bhi kaise sakti ho?? He asked holding geet's arms firmly to which geet laughed


Maan: tum hass rahi ho?? Maine aisa bhi kya joke kiya geet... joke?? Yeh joke hi toh hai na maan?? u can only worry abt my body which u want to have all the time. Bus hum dono ke beech yehi ek rishta reh gaya hai na?? geet again laughed. Bt maan knew she is not in her senses. He decided to take her home and talk to her after she gets into her senses later. Geet protested... chodo mujhe maan I don't want to come with u, he was abt to say something wen heer came ... Chod do usse maan, she is not in her senses tum usse kal baat karlena


Maan: par heer ... par var kuch nahi I told u she will come with me tonight tum kal baat karlo, saying this heer took geet along with her to the car and made her sit in it


Geet: di mujhe apni flat mein jaana hai. I am not going to come anywhere not even to ur house thik hai, geet rested her head on heer's shoulder


Wen geet and heer entered the new flat, heer was a way too shocked ...geet yeh tu kaha leke aayi hai?? I mean this is not the place where u and meera used to stay


Geet: haan di meera chali gayi bohut pehle yash ke saath rehne yeh hum dono ka secret tha... wat?? Heer cudnt believe geet hid such thing from her!!! meera left u and u were staying all alone?? Ek baar bhi mujhse nahi kaha?? She shook geet


Geet: di kya main aapki godh mein so sakti hoon?? Bohut din ho gaye thik se soke woh maan haina sone nahi deta tha, phir maine yaha shift bhi karli phir bhi mujhe tang karta hai sapne mein aake!!!



Heer sensed things went beyond the control and she understood the hidden meaning of wat geet was saying and doing till now... geet tune iss liye toh nahi piya ki maan's engagement is fixed with parineeta?? Geet did not reply, she was searching for something busily. Heer followed her, kya dhoond rahi ho gudiya?? She asked


Geet: di woh pills nahi mil rahe maine yahi toh rakhi thi she said still searching for them and then wen she opened the cupboard, heer's eyes widened a rack full of birth control pills a strip was completely empty. Still geet was crushing a pill wen heer stopped her... iski koi jaroorat nahi hai geet heer said trying to take the pills from her hand bt geet started to protest... Nahi di ill get pregnant aap nahi jaanti how much I need these all the time bt heer closed her eyes ... geet bola na abhi iski jaroorat nahi hai maan abhi tere paas nahi aayega


Geet: nahi aayega?? Kyun nahi aayega?? Her heart almost stopped beating thinking of the reason, iska matlab he got bored of me?? Now he will go to that pa... nahi di maan aisa nahi kar sakta main abhi call karke kehti hoon unse mere paas aane ko thik hai?? geet was abt to go to search for her cell while heer stopped her


Heer: kabse chal raha hai yeh sab tum dono ke beech mein?? While geet sunk on the ground not at all paying heed to heer's question '.. di maan se kaho na ki woh mere paas aaye main kuch bhi karne ke liye tayyar hoon bus mujhe maan chahiye she cried bitterly


Heer: hosh mein aa geet, hosh mein aa kya bol rahi hai?? she shook geet trying to get her back to normal world


Geet: mujhe hosh mein nahi aana hai di agar aagayi toh maan se dur ho jaongi I love him I love him so much. Pyar peh yakeen uth gaya phir bhi main kaise keh sakti hoon ki I love him di?? She asked innocently. Till now geet was blabbering everything in drunken state bt she cud voice out things which she can neva in a drunken state


For the whole night geet slept in the lap of heer bt for heer sleep was far behind left somewhere... how cud u maan?? how cud u just do this with her??


As the mrng rays entered the room heer got a phone call from prem, she slowly adjusted geet's head on the pillow and left to talk to him. She decided to leave back home thinking of talking to geet later.


Wen geet woke up she found maan starting at her, she got panicked looking at him who was sleeping beside her and sat on the bed


Geet: aap yaha?? She questioned maan with anger ... haan main yaha kyun nahi aa sakta tumhare paas?? He tried being logical


Geet: nahi aa sakte now u are getting engaged to somebody else its not good chale jaye yaha se... she answered with a chocked voice. Bt that ignited him, he harshly pushed geet on the bed... Kya kaha tumne?? So u believe that ill marry that parineeta hai na??


Geet: kyun nahi maan u had great time with me ab shaadi usse karenge toh aapke business ke liye hi acha hoga aur ... the next she found maan's lips on hers and then began undressing, he made love to her yet again madly. After an hr geet laid under maan all naked gathering herself from his passion. She did not want to say anything, she cupped his face ... maan kuch boliye?? Wat is running in ur mind. Agar aap kuch kahenge nahi toh mujhe pata kaise chalega?? Yeh bematlab ka gussa kis baat ka?? Aisa kya hua jo aap mujhse chupa rahe hai?? I cant take all this now I am tired plz kuch kahiye geet screamed out her pain bt maan was still busy with her body, u want to know wats in my mind right?? Toh suno I am going to marry parineeta for daadi lekin tum bhi mere saath rahogi aise hi. Tumhe jo chahiye woh milega mujhse anything u want. I promise tumhe kisi bhi cheez ki kami nahi hogi akhir main tumhare bhai ke jaise toh nahi ban sakta na ki use and throw after getting satisfied, geet got alarmed wat is he saying?? Maan held geet's hair in fist... Ur brother has used my sister for a week bt ull stay with me all ur life this way. Geet pushed maan and got up... maan yeh aap kya keh rahe ho??



Maan smirked kya hua geet sachai kadvi lagi?? And then maan told wateva has happened with his sister coz of arjun. Geet cudnt do much than crying on her fate


Geet: mera bhai aisa nahi kar sakta maan I cant accept the fact she yelled issi liye u were being so indifferent?? How cud u think so low?? All the time u were taking revenge on my arjun sleeping with me and now u want me to be ur keep?? Acha hua mujhe bataya lekin I can neva be the woman u want me to be she gave her final word


Precap: the talk continues and the painful separation!!! Maan realizes his mistake bt too late


Girls I am trying to finish the past as fast as I can par jaldi nahi ho raha issi liye I am trying to give updates soon bt promise past will finish in probably 2 or 3 updates!!! plz leave ur comments they mean a lot to me plz!!!

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Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
dear really Maan has lost his brain.
first he uses her day n night for his revenge.and now Geet chaligayi ye tho, he is behind her asking the reason why she left. Yaar i am really confused kya maan ko ye bi nahi patha how hurt she is now.can't he think once.
i really don't no what is in his mind.
he has lost his thinking capacity,..
and the way Geet told heer about their staying..her taking pills now too..how she said Maan doesn't allow her to sleep was really heart wrenching..
omg ye maan phir se aagaya, and giving her a open invitation to become his keep..
kitna asani se kehdiya inhone he will marry pari and he will also keep Geet and will give what ever she wants..
and he thinks that he is doing some aisaan to geet..
Yaar i am again telling U i want Maan's repent to be a long one..it should be double what she suffered now..
finally the truth is out.. omg ye end kyu huva,can't wait for next part dear..
and the update was beautifully written.. everything..i just loved it.. Thank u
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
this story is making me sad i feel sorry for geet
i hope maan get it so bad that he wolud not look at an other gril for the rest of his life
thanks for the pm
Edited by Alicia2001 - 12 years ago

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