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PART 13
"This time we are going to apply a different strategy- One which he can never imagine of..." PV said while Maan and Geet had already thought about that.
"But what we can do Mom to kill and evade off that ********" Annie said. She was very much determined to finish off Dev. She still couldnt forget those dark days of torture.
"First we have to attack on his weakness. Thats the only way he can be defeated!" It was Geet who suggested.
"Annie I am sorry but do you know any such weakness...!" Maan felt extremely guilty to ask his sister about such a thing about the monster who almost destroyed his sister's life.
Annie controlled her fears and the memories of that place and denied knowing any such thing as she didnt know any weakness of Dev as far as she could remember.
"Its alright Annie... " Geet hugged her.
"What can be the possible weaknesses Maan ?" Geet probed.
"Well it wont be fire because if it had been we could have already destroyed him...!"
"Neither can it be ice... !" Geet completed his thoughts.
"Something related to dark..." Maan thought.
In midst of this PV had already slipped away to her room.
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"It is my duty to protect the planets but how can I plan to kill my own son in my own hands..." PV cried out. Dev was her son whom she had abandoned when he was born thinking it to be a dead baby. Thus KV thought him to be an orphan while all this while PV was away in earth to hide her identity.
She was in dilemma now. Whether to follow her duty and protect her son?
Whenever she confronted Annie she couldnt meet her eyes with her. She felt guilty. How could her son fall this low? Though Annie wasn't her real daughter still she cared for her as a mother.
She sat on the floor rather floating all heart broken .
"Mom?"
PV jumped up and turned to find Annie giving her a questioning look.
"What happened?"
PV immediately wiped her tears and said , "Nothing! Come'on you should rest dear!"
She made Annie lie on the bed and patted her head.
"Mom! You are worried about something? Is it about..." She gritted her teeth.
PV forcefully smiled shaking her head for a no.
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"Yes thats the only way - the combination..." Maan exclaimed. He finally got the way.
"Sordo!! You need to bring something from Earth..."
"But What master! Why Earth?" He had this dazed look on his face.
"Sordo We absolutely have NO time !" Maan spoke sternly.
"But Master you know na I get so lost in the beauty..."
"SHUT UP SORDO! I dont have time to hear your nonsense !Bring it now! " Maan ordered and Sordo went away in no time.
"He is such a ..."
"Dweeb!" Geet completed. Both laughed hearing Sordo's foolish querries.
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Maan summoned all the soldiers.
"My dear fellow beings... We have less time in our hands to finish off the destroyer... We need to work together and not fail this time! Are you all ready to put all your efforts into it?"

"YES MASTER!" Came a huge uproar.
"Now here we have our plan of action... "
"We all have to protect each other as much as we can..." Maan discussed his plan of action.
"... and there he will be finished off if everything goes as per our plan!!" Maan said as everybody affirmed his plan. He looked out for Geet who gave him a nod in assurance .
"Where did PV go?" He wondered.
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Geet and Annie were having their energy drinks to recharge themselves for the war.

"Geet'.What is this plant for'.?" Annie asked curiously as Geet noticed the numerous buds finally. She was shocked at first but then smiled gleefully.

'Dev You're dead!!'

"Annie Let the war begin''" Annie looked on confused as Geet grabbed the buds.

"What are these buds for Geet???"

"These are those weapons which will finish off Dev forever Annie... Do you know about these?"

"No..."

"QV told me when I had first visited this place after Coming from Earth Annie...!"

"Really????? Now That s the weakness! Then what about the plan PMM prepared! ?"

"We are going to follow the plan but the course is going to be different!!" It was Maan who answered this time. He had overheard their conversation.

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KV looked at the light source. It had become dim.

"The watchkeepers would be out now..."

He had slowly regained his strength after being out of the cosmic effect of Dev's powers.

He produced a cooling effect lulling almost all to sleep while Dev was still unknown due to his overconfidence of victory. He stealthily made his way out.

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"My Slaves! Here we are going to celebrate the doom of the so called good aliens!!" Dev laughed horrendously while silence prevailed. The slaves had almost lost hopes of their release. Saying so he produced another ball of cosmic energy wasting it .

"We now are ready to face the enemy!" Dev spoke as the slaves were bound to follow him in order to save their lives.

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"Here it is Master..." Sordo gave and huffed.

"I hope Sordo you didnt get any beauty perhaps?" Maan questioned with his frosty nose look.

"Nnn nooo Master!" He stuttered.

"Good!!!"

"Geet pull up the ice... Sordo when i signal throw this whole thing into the ball!!" He ordered.

Maan prepared a ball of fire with the Supernova scale , "SUPERNOVA!" Immediately Geet made a cover of the fire ball with her ice mounting the whole ice cover . Maan signalled and immediately Sordo threw the powder into it.

The ball took a purple blackish colour which was exactly the colour of the castle of Dev or rather Galactus.

The whole ball turned into ash as Maan and Geet collected them into several bottles.

"The Doom of Dev is here!" Maan pronounced.

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Maan, Geet, Annie and PV along with the army and Sordo stood up infront of Dev as he approached ready for the war unknown to the fact that another help was on the way.

The soldiers made a circle like structure covering them and moved towards the approaching army.

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Edited by Miss.Mars - 12 years ago
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haan yep yep...
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itna slow nahi chalega...
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