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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 24



Maan went out. He was burning in anger. His body was stiffed. He could kill anyone with his one grave look. Guard was shocked hearing gunshot and then seeing maan. He looked maan baffled.



" zinda hai '' maan exited without looking him. HG (head guard) went inside and shocked to see raghav was laying on floor , all covered in blood. He checked and found bullet hit his shoulder.. he relieved .



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Maan went to his guest house. Dadi asked her about everything, she was tensed. Though guards had been informing her about all happening but still she was strained. Maan was not in mood to tell anything. He got irritated and left from there saying going to site. Later Dadi called mohindar and asked about geet. Hearing geet is fine she relaxed



Maan was on cliff. Every word of raghav was hitting in his mind. Every word was pricking his soul like thousand deaths. He wanted to kill whole world. He was in no condition to think from his heart. And his mind was not giving him any way to escape from this lethal remembrance. ' geet had been forced''' was echoing in his mind.. 'NO..No It cant be happen'never''' geet innocent face, her childish talk revolves in his mind.. " how it can be.. she is normal ..she is happy..she has no any diff .. how it could be possible...mujhe pata lagana hoga.. I will not leave that bas*** who '. '' he closed his eyes in hatredness. Geet innocent face appeared. Her memory brought some sense in his tired mind. He wanted to talk her ..Now.. he called her..





" hello.. ' she said..



"-----' maan was silence.. " kya kahu..kya puchu mai .. ' he thought



"hello?? ' she again asked



He cut. He could not ask right away.. What would he ask? He closed his eyes and screamed... complained to God why He did this to geet.. Why ??


he fell on his knees and covered his face in palm.. how he would face geet.. how would he now ignore her innocent eyes where she hides her pain.. pain of her brute fate.. he was exhausted. He broke down completely. He lived a savage death being alive' "ohh geet ' '' only word coming from his numb soul'



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Geet was sleeping dreaming about maan, his confession, their first love. She was smiling in her sleep when dadi came in her room. She came here to see her as she was ok or not. After maan leaving dadi was worried about him. he was looking tensed and that was also another reason, for her coming here , to ask geet about maan' but looking her smiling and happy dadi relaxed.



It was night



There was still no call from maan nor maan had returned back. Whenever dadi tried his phone he dint pick. Finally at night dadi once again tried and maan picked. Maan was in no mood in talk but after seeing lots missied calls he finally picked to say he will not return for tonight but dadi next set of word caused changing his decision..



Dadi- maan aap jaldi aaiye. Hum geet ke yaha hai . she is not feeling well beta..aap jaldi '.'' Before dadi could finish her talk she heard jeep horn .. she smiled her plan succeed. She looked to mohindar who was quite hesitated. He was afraid it was not good to lie maan. But dadi assured him.



It hardly passed a hour when maan barged inside terrifying " where is geet ?? '' he shaked dadi screaming " dadaimaa geet kaha hai ''. Dadi and mohindar shocked to see his condition. They dint imagine this much geet news would effect him. mohindar tried to calm him but maan was not listening a word. He was hell scared. he jerked mohindar hand which was holding maan shoulder to support him and run to geet room leaving, ignoring everyone and everything. He was in his worst condition thinking something might happen to his geet. he almost broke room door and barged inside and stopped '.



He stopped. He looked what his weeping heart wanted to see. His eyes got moist. His soul cried happy tears. His legs carried his numb body to bed. His heart told him to be repose.. " look she is ok... she is fine maan'' he smiled looking his angel, sleeping so peacefully, cuddled up in her brown duvet. Her rhythmic breathing calming maan bruised heart. He sat near her. He raised his hand.. touched her forehead. There was no sign of any illness . he closed his eyes. a thin drop fell from his eyes, touching his trembling lips, to her hand. She stirred feeling something warm .. her movement brought his back. He wiped his eyes and patted her head, sending her again in her dreamland.



She smiled again feeling his warmth around. He smiled seeing her smile. He wanted to feel her being fine. He slipped next to her, resting his head over his one arm. With other hand he touched her cheek and kissed her head, brushing, without making her know. His injured heart found solace, peace and he drifted to deep sleep'



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Dadi wiped her tears and closed door. She knew maan loved geet but this much, she never imagined. She went back to mohindar who was still confused with maan behavior and told him she wants to get them marry soon.. before leaving from here. Mohindar looked her. Dadi could see some hesitation on his face. " mohindar ji , sab thik hai na ?? ''



Mohindar nodded but still he was not that happy. Something was troubling him. dadi now sure something was a miss . she asked are you not happy with this proposal.



"nahi nahi ..kasi baat kar rahi hai savitriji. Aap jesa pariwaar aur maan jesa pati to kismet walo ko milta hai ''



"toh fir baat kya hai mohindar ji.. why are you not happy?? I can see something is troubling you''



Mohindar was not sure he should tell her or not. He knew it was wrong to hide anything from them but he was also fearing if they would not accept geet after knowing everything.. he was in confusion when they heard a confident voice " mai geet se shaadi karna chahta hu ''



Both dadi n mohindar turned and saw maan' standing there' crossing his arm, confident and determined'.



Precap : Chotu Past 😲


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Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wowww lovuuu awesome n interesting update ...i just read it in one breath...lovely...😃...ek aur batt haa mein first hu ye roz hota hai fir v mein dance karti hu per aj nehi karungi coz of update ...mein bhut serious hu next part ke liye...waise lovu ye raghav ne assa kya keh di geet ke bare mein ki maan pura tara shocked h dill aur demagh mein fight ho rahe h😕...i think koe bhut badi batt hoge kya geet ...omggg I mean uske sath kuch galat toh nehi hue u know wht i mean😲...love teri precap bhut scary hai ...chotu past mein bada dhamaka chupa hua hai😭
Edited by raingurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
superb update maan was s0 scared
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Wow lovely emotional update..te way my maan feeling for his geet wow only my maaneet can love each other unconditionaly..i love te update so much dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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dat was amazing update

maan is irrevocably in love wid geet

waiting to know geet's past

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Posted: 12 years ago
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update threre love is fab



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Posted: 12 years ago
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wowww lovu...so interesting n mindblowing update...👏👏

i dnt know kya past hai geet ki...bt m sure jo v past ho maan ko wo past geet se alag nehi hai sakta...😊😊

Edited by soma.gurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69

omg..what hv happen to our sweet geet..pls cont soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
Superb update...
Loved dadi 😉

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