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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maanhar

Loved Geet's acts!! feeling really bad for Maan, will they get seperated😕

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Gcs-girl

Awesome Update...Loved it
Aww Maaneet moment were so cute
Loved it alot
awww geet..she so cute
maan ko sharmano ko bol rahi hai..LoL
maan-dadi's talks so emotinal
aww maan loved geet so much
waiting for next...continue soon
thankx for pm







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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: angeldream14

loved it

love isn't selfish it'selfless




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

shhh.. she stopped saying more .. "maan agar kabhi mai aapko bhul gayi to aap ho na mujhe yaad dilaane ko .. aab aapko wada karna hona ki agar mai aapko kabhi bhul gayi to bhi aap mujhe kabhi akela nahi choroge .. wada''



such lovely words by geet
shows the trust she has in him
to be with her always
can understand dadi too
but maan cant live without her

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: richa_kapoor

Part - 28 : speechless part d mental state of Maan u shows was awsomeee



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

lovely mindblowing update yar




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Emotional Maan.. How cutely he asked her Tum mujhe bool toh nahi jaogi na...??Amazing update..😊




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Posted: 12 years ago



PART 29


Maan hugged dadi. He was very very happy found a pure bliss. He kissed dadi cheek like a small boy found his most demanding toy and run to jeep. He could not stop himself to meet his angel. He wanted to take her in his arm and kiss her like eternity. He wanted to show her his whole love. How much he loved her he dint know but knew she was his reason of his little smile . She was reason for his peace and solace. She was reason for his sleep and his wake . She was reason of his every small n big movement and without her, he would be a living death..



He reached to her. It was night still he was standing , front of her door. He was going to press bell then thought what mohindar would think. And he would not able to meet geet in his presence freely. He was stood there lost when door opened and his angel hugged him tight, fulfilling his wish. He could not imagine it was dream or real. He stood there shocked, surprised and lost in her touch.



" is she real or m dreaming. Whatever it is but I know, it is the most beautiful feeling I every felt. She is hugging me and I m feeling her touch closing my eyes. I wanted to drop my tear in happiness but I know she would be worried, making a small pout. Ohh !! how much I loved her pout. It make me alive.. it give me strength of living ahead, crossing whole barriers and to reach there.. where she stand spreading her arm.. calling me.. to hug me.. to embrace me like a angel does when she find her most lovely one crying.. she is my angel, my doll . I would never let you forget this beautiful memory of us.. only of us.. our memories.. '' he thought, lost in her hug when felt a little pat on his shoulder.



"maan,.. maan!! .. hello.. koi hai ghar me '' geet found him lost and patted.. he smiled and realized it was not dream. He frowned being conscious as they were at door and uncle could see then anytime. He left her. She turned and locked door from outside . She pulled his arm " maan chliye na''



hmm '' he looked her like alien did not get what she saying or doing.



"maan chaliyee naa.. der ho rahi hai '' she again pulled him and said irritated. He came to know she was telling him to go somewhere, but where ?? and why ?? "geet stop'' he finally said. She stopped.



"geet hum kaha jaa rahe hai '' he asked



geet patted her head. "kya maan ..apko to kuch yaad hi nahi rahta"



"matlab?? ''



"matlab ye ki we have to go temple na"



"kya?? temple ?? konsa mandir geet.. aur ye sab achanak .. '' he asked confused



geet went irritated. She came to him and spread her palm " phone dijiye apana'' she demanded..



"kyu ??''



"kyuki mai bol rahi hu.. ab dijiye '' she said and started to fish his pocket when maan stopped her and handed his phone. She dialed a number then gave back to maan. "ab baat kijiye''



maan raised phone to ear looking her suspiciously when he heard dadi voice "dadi ??'' he shouted .. "maan dheere boliye.. hum bahre nahi hue hai abhi ''



maan rolled his eyes. He asked why geet called her. Dadi said "you both are going for mata darshan (visit mata temple) .. humne mohindarji se baat kar li hai.. he also went for some important work to next town. So now geet is your responsibility for one day. and haa no naughtiness .. samjhe '' maan smiled in fact did disco inside. He wanted to hug dadi "thank you dadimaa"" he said in gratitude. Dadi blessed and cut. He knew why dadi did this. He very well knew after accepting geet she had some fear remained still in her heart.. she wanted them to start their new life with bless of God.. so she arranged this trip for both talking and convincing mohindar a lot.. which was not necessary at all as mohindar trusted maan most in this world.



"maan ab aap khare rahoge ya chaloge bhi ..'' she complained seeing him stood like statue.. he smiled looking her impatience and sat in jeep. They started their journey. It was 6 hours distance to reach there which maan wanted never to end. "maan kitna time lagega '' she asked looking here n there in dark.

"kyu.. dar lag raha ahi ? '' he asked



"hmm.. thora thora '' she said as dark was getting darker with every passing minutes and they were passing forest area.. it was getting colder as well. Maan looked her fear and covered jeep from up as it was opened before. He pressed her hand assuring her, there is no need to fear .. as m with you .. she smiled and slipped closer to him, resting her head to his shoulder. It passed few hours and she started getting bore. " kya hua geet.. ''



"maan mai bore ho rahi hu.. yaha to kuch dikh bhi nahi raha .. sirf dark n dark har taraf '' she made baby face.. "geet ab tum ullu (owl) to ho nahi na ki raat me dekh sako '' she hit him and got angry on his comment, crossing her arm on her chest.



"geet !!'' he called softly. She dint buzzed. "achha m sorry .. ab toh idhar dekho ''



"nahi.. aap bure ho..bahut bure.. I dont want to talk you .. ek toh mai kitna bore ho rahi hu aur aap mujhe pareshan kar rahe ho ''



"achha baba ab nahi karunga.. ab idhar dekho.. ab se jo tum bologi mai karunga bas.. ''



she turned excitedly "sach !!''



"hmm'' he smiled.



"okk ..to antrakshri khele !!''



"watt '' he cursed himself millions times inwardly …





Precap : Maaneet Temple Trip 😳




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