MG SS~SUBAH AANE KO HAI Pt12/Pg27, Note/Pg31 11Apr - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
loved the update
come on gal pura intro bhi nahin diya
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
awesome update nd champ is soo cute ...nd geet must be collied wid maan hayye me dreaming
waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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GEET IS STILL SCARED BECAUSE OF HER PAST

BUT WHAT A BANG ON MEETING
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Posted: 12 years ago
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All : This is seriously a MAANEET FF… I had 2 include Sanaya Irani as Khushi bcz that character is what I wanted Bindas, paagal kisam ki ladki as Geet's friend. If I had used her as Gunjan you would have felt she is a silent, calm girl which in this case is GEET… And to tell the truth ater GHSP ended I nvr gv a glance 2 ARHI couple 😈. I would prefer MONAYA (Mohit Sehgal & Sanaya) over them…. 😳

Also

Before Maaneet meeting I want you all to understand Maan's character… So Maaneet actual meeting mein thoda time lagega…. Sorry can't help..

ritzy09, punam2712 : Yes Geet is still scared of her past.. 😔

tushti-kiran : Yes she saved herself.. Reports mein they come to know na the cause of bruises/wounds issilyein I wrote sexually molested…

Thankyou All The Buddies Below For Liking And Commenting The Last Updt... Love U All... ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
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P.S : I have replied to all my readers in the above post.. Plz check... 😊

Part 8

Meeting MSK

A guy around 24yrs is sitting in the college canteen of Delhi Management Institue and working seriously on his lappy and at the same time is cribbing about his paagal sis.

"Yeh Khushi bhi naa… Aaj hi ke din gadbad kar deni thi… God ab sab kuch kal submit karna padega…"

While he was busy in his works 2-3 girls with heavy make-up and short revealing dresses surrounded his table. The guy looked up confusedly at them and spoke.

"Hi Sam… Aaj mujhe milne aayi ho kya..?? (Spoke teasingly) Par you know what I m busy right now…" (Looking at his lappy)

Sameera who was leading the other girls spoke giving a small laugh.

"Ohh… Come on Yash humari taste itni bhi buri nahi hai joh hum tumhare liyein yahaan wait karenge… (showing attitude) Anyways, coming to the point batao Maan kaha milega..??"

"Aaj koi aur nahi mila kya…?? Joh mere picche padi hon… (Spoke getting irritated) Aur joh tumhari taraf dekhta bhi nahi tum usske bare mein pucch rahi hon…" (Laughing out)

"Agar tumhari not so worthy talks khatam ho gayye toh, tum bataoge Maan kaha hai..??"

"Woh raha.." (Looking towards the canteen's entrance)

A guy with blue denims, black shirt with full sleeves entered the canteen. His shirt's few buttons from top were left open giving a view of his perfect chiseled toned chest. He had black alluring eyes, perfect M shaped lips and a cleanly shaven stubble. He walked as if he had claimed the place.


Sameera and gang were drooling over him like owls sitting on a tree. He came close to Yash ignoring their drooling looks and spoke coolly.

"So … All done" (Spoke patting Yash's shoulder and taking a sit beside him)

"Haan… Yaar almost done…(Without looking at Maan and typing on his lappy, clicked enter and turned towards him) Accha hua aa gaya tu… Ab sambhal inko (Pointing at Sam nad her gang) Main kuch khane ke liyein lata hoon…"

"Batao Sameera… Kya baat hai…??" (Spoke sighing)

Sameera came out of her drooling session sat very close besides him. Maan didn't like her behavior but he couldn't help as this was not something new. No wonder he was a handsome hunk, desired by all the bimbos in the college but Sameera always would try forcing herself on him at any time of the day.

"Maan.. U knw naa… Main tumse kyon milna chahthi thi… (Spoke smirking evilly) Toh kya socha hai tumne humaare bare mein…" (Expecting some +ve answers)

"Sameera… Main kitni baar samjhaun tumhe M not interested… (Spoke getting irritated) And for God sake mera piccha chod don…"

"Yeh kya Sameera Sameera laga rakha hai… (Ignoring his irritation) Call me 'Sam' Maan… (Spoke sensually getting close to his ears) I just asked for a night to prove myself… Ek raat mein harjh hi kya hai… Hun..??"

Those words took a toll on Maan's mind. These words were not simply cheap but they always reminded him of his past indirectly. Never thought any girl could stoop so low to show-off herself with him as he belonged to the well known Khurana family. He rose from his chair and just roared angrily.

"Enough of your talks… Not a word more… Jao yahaan se..!!!"

Sameera and her gang shivered hearing him roaring like a lion. She stood like a statue looking at his anger filled eyes. Seeing no movement in her Maan just blasted like alarm.

"SUNA NAHI TUMNE… LEAVE NW…!!!"

Sameera and her gang just ran without turning back. Yash came with sandwinches and soft drinks and calmed him down.

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"Arrey, Maan chodo na… Kin logon ke kaaran apna mood kharab kar rahein hon…"

"Janta hoon Yash… But such people's behavior just remind me about the past… Chahkar bhi iss uljhan se door nahi bhag saktha…" (Spoke closing his eyes and calming himself)

"I can understand Maan… Issiliyein toh tujhse kehta hoon… Inn bimbos ke muh band karwane ke liyein apne liyein koi GF dhund hi le…" (Spoke teasingly trying to cool his temper and make him normal)

"Yash… Kya GFs aisi hi market mein mil jathi hai..?? Joh tu aisa bol raha hai… And I don't believe in this GF-BF stuff… Mere liyein toh ek khaas ladki hogi joh meri Dadi mere liyein decide karegi…"

"Gayyi bhais pani mein… Yahaan main tumhein modern funde suggest kar raha hoon aur tu hai joh purane riwaajo ko pakad ke behtha hai… R u in ur senses..???"

"Yehin toh baat hai Yash… M just scared of this modern lifestyle, all this GF-BF, live-in relation stuff… Inn sab reasons ki wajah se I have lost my childhood, my family and now I m scared of losing myself…"

"Maan… Main tumhare problems samajh saktha hoon… Par don't you feel apne liyein kissi ko pasand karna jyada jaroori hai rather than some1 else doing it for you…???"

"To tell you the truth Yash… I don't feel so… I don't believe in this… Haan par ek exception hai… Tu aur teri Meera…"

Both started smiling once they heard Meera's name.

"Maan usska naam hi kaafi hai hum dono ki sitti-pitti gul karne ke liyein…"

"Sach kaha tune… God knws tu usse jhelta kaise hai…"

"Its very easy Maan and trust me time heals everything… Tum bhi kissiko jhelne ke liyein jald ready ho jao.."

"Yash tu kabhi nahi sudrega… Yahaan kya kar raha hai… Tujhe toh ashram mein samadhi leni chahiyein, kam se kam tera gyaan yoon vyarth toh nahi jaata…"

With that Maan started laughing and Yash felt like pulling his hair but couldn't do so bcz it was only at rare instances that Maan would laugh or smile.

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Both had a hearty laugh and went to attend some classes. Yash couldn't concentrate on the class at all. His Darling fiancee Meera was calling him repeatedly and as he was sitting on the 1st row couldn't receive her calls. Maan couldn't stop teasing and laughing at his restless condition. After the class got over around 4pm, Yash had to bear a full half an hour session of dhamkis and firings from Meera's yellings which made him almost deaf. After the deafening session Yash shot daggers at Maan. Maan shrugged his shoulders like telling him maine-kya-kiya-yaar, it was all your fault.

"Tu has mat..!!! Jitni aaj hassi aa rahi hai na… Utna hi kal royega…"

Maan looked at him confused and gave him a look like who-the-hell-will-make-MSK-cry.

"Aur nahi toh kya..?? Teri baari aayegi tab pata chalega… Pyaar acche-acche ko line pe laa deta hai.. (Maan glared at him) I mean badlav laata hai…"

While talking both reached near the parking lot. Both bid each other. Maan moved towards his bike started it and zoomed towards the Khurana Mansion. Within half an hour he reached KM. Looking at the Mansion he self thought what's the use of a huge Mansion if has no humans in it, if it has no family concern, no good memories of his childhood. He mentally chided himself for thinking of his past… or 1 could say his present which was still getting affected… He entered inside to see the drawing room lit elegantly, servants took his belongings and he was about to move towards his room when a drowsy yet raised voice of his father made him stop.

"Aa gayye Maan Bete… Come have a sip of whiskey with me…" (Showing him his glass filled with whiskey)

"No.. Thanks Mr.Shekhar Khurana… Mujhe inn chizon ki koi zaroorat nahi hai… Meri zindagi innke bina bhi chal sakthi hai…" (Spoke angrily)

"Ohh… Tum bhi na Maan bilkul apni Dadi ki tarah baat kar rahe hon… Unn ki inhi baaton se main tang aa gaya tha issiliyein mujhe unnhe unnki asli jagah bhejna pada… Plz ab tum mat shuru ho jana warna……"

Maan didn't let him complete.

"Warna kya Mr.Khurana… Mujhe bhi ghar se nikal denge…?? Ohh main toh bhool hi gaya aap aisa nahi karenge kyon kii agar main chala gaya toh aapki company mein profit kaise aayega…?? Aur agar woh nahi hua toh aap apni aiyaashi kaise enjoy karenge… Hai na…" (Spoke sarcastically)

"Maaannn…."

"Chillayien mat Mr.Khurana… Sach kadwa hota hai na… Aur ghabrayien mat main aapko chodkar nahi jaunga… Itna khush hone ki bhi zaroorat nahi hain… Main sirf meri Dadi ko kiya gaya vaada pura kar raha hoon…. Aap ke saath rehna sirf meri majhboori hai…"

Saying that Maan moved towards his room and his father kept looking at his retreating back spitting fire.

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Precap: Nahi dungi… 😈

Kaisa laga yeh wala MSK…??? 😳

Plz do tell me in your Comments n Likes… 😊

Love Cia ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
nice update
love yash nd maan friendship
what happen in maan past
Edited by lovesia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
yeh wala maan intresting hai nd differ nt v liked it nd update was akso awesome but tumne batya nahi geet kise colloide hui thi waiting for next😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb. sam ki tho band baja dali
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Posted: 12 years ago
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why is Maan so bitter...

where is his Daadima...

loved Maan-Yash friendship...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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MAAN IS AN OLD FASHIONED GUY AT HEART WHO DOESNT BELEIVE IN LOVE

WHAT I WANT TO KNOW IS WHO DID GEET BANG INTO WHILE RUNNING IN THE LAST PART

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