MG SS~SUBAH AANE KO HAI Pt12/Pg27, Note/Pg31 11Apr - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
Thanks Dear for clarifying...I have never seen that serial and that is why i was asking...i just don't get the feel...now coming to the updateloved maan's entry
to much pain in his past...i guess his father and his attitude is the reason
but loved Yash..he is a true friend to guide hm when and if required
now waiting for the meeting😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
awesome part

loving this maan..

maan n yush relation is superb .. loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
Ohh hell !!

yahan bhi sameera... 😒

yaar plz change the char. or atleast the name... seriously ab bore ho gaye sameera se...

woh actual show mein kahin nahi thi magar IF ke 99% FFs mein hai.. 😲

Matlab she seems like Maaneet's shadow... 😆

we seriously need a break frm her... 😆


wase nice part... slowly the track is pacing up...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
nice update
loved maan n yash's bond
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
count my like too...
Just read all parts...
Geet past is really bad...thank god she got armaan and ridz n cutie abhay...
maan bhi dukhi he...now where is dadi yar???
Sam...she is ullu idiot and all bad words...
Maaneet ki jaldi se baat vali meeting karva do,...
Superbbb update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
awesome,nice parts
loved them
what happen with maan
loved the bonding of yash and maan
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97

Fabulous update dear

Lovely

Continue soon

Waiting for more⭐️

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Posted: 12 years ago
#99

Updt dedicated to geetsmile, punam2712. Both wanted to know Geet kisse takrayi. So enjoy…!!!

Part 9

Lost And Found

Geet's room was a total chaos. All the clothes were strewn from the cupboard. Files from the drawer were scattered on the floor. The bed had become a mess with fashion accessories scattered on it. Geet sat with her knees touching her chest. Her head downcast on them and you could say she was crying. Unlike other days Geet always came to the kitchen to have a glass of milk before she slept, but today as she didn't turn up Armaan decided to take the glass of milk to her room. He entered her room to only get shocked with the state of it. He rushed to where Geet was sitting and placed the glass on the table and shook Geet getting panicked with her sniffled cry.

"Gudiya… Kya hua..?? Tu ro rahi hai…?? Aaj hospital mein kissine kuch kaha…?? Bol na… Dekh darr mat… Main sab thik kar dunga…"

Geet looked at his worried and panicky state and getting scared of his reaction managed to only stammer.

"A i s a… N a h i… H a i… W o h… Bha i…!!! Mu jhe… naa…" (She hugged him not able to say anything further)

"Gudiya… Dekh tera yeh rona mujhe dara raha hai… (Hugging her) Baat kya hai..?? Bata na..??"

Armaan spoke caressing her hair then pulling her out of the hug, he cupped her face and spoke looking at her eyes.

"Gudiya… Dekh meri aankhon mein aur sach bata kya hua…?? Kissine kuch kiya tere saath..??"

Geet looked in his eyes and seeing care and concern spoke timidly.

"Aisa kuch nahi hua… (Shook her head) Woh Bhai mujhe joh aapne subah bracelet gift kiya tha woh mil nahi raha hai…" (Lowering her head for her carelessness she started crying again)

Armaan sighed in relief but smiled at his innocent Gudiya, he hugged her more tightly.

"OMG.. Gudiya..!! Jaan nikal di tune meri… Kya tu bhi ek bracelet ke liye itna dara diya mujhe..??"

Geet came out of his hug and looked at him with cute anger and misty eyes.

"Woh koi maamuli bracelet nahin tha… Woh aapne mujhe diya tha… Aapse related har woh baat, har woh cheez mere liye kya maayne rakhthi hai main aapko bata nahi sakthi… Aur aap keh rahe hon ek bracelet…??" (Looked away angrily)

Armaan felt heaven listening those words, his Gudiya loved him so much how could he say like that to her.

"Ok… Dekh kaan pakkad ke Sorry…" (Holding his ears)

Geet melted with his actions and sweet apology and pulled his hands from his ears.

"Par… Woh bracelet…??"

"Don't worry… Hum nayawala laayenge tujhe dicto same to same wala…"

Geet smiled broadly hugging him and mouthed thankyou numerously hearing it, but then Armaan looked at her sternly and spoke.

"Woh toh thik hai… Lekin iss kamre ki haalat kaun thik karega…?? Agar Ridz ko pata chala na… Toh teri khair nahi…."

"Aap chinta mat karo… Main yeh saara mess clean kar dungi… Bas aap hi apna yeh muh bandh rakhna… (Closing his jaws) Dii ko ainvayi saari baatein pata nahi chalti hai.. Aap ke peit mein kuch rehta hai kya…?? Dii ki baaton mein aakar saari chugliyan baahar aati hai…"

Armaan got embarrassed with her teasings.

"Haan Haan… Thik hai… Tu yeh sab thik kar dein aur dudh piker so jaa… Good Night n Swt Drmz…" (Pecked her forhead and left)

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Maan entered his room and left a sigh. His every day ended the same way dat is a usual argument with his irresponsible Dad. Not Dad this title never suited him he was only Mr.Khurana the name he always boasted about not caring about his family, his traditions etc. It was only Dadi Maa's promise he was fulfilling by staying with him and working in the company during his college days only bcz it was on the verge of collapsing. Maan felt a little better when he thought about Dadi Maa she is the only person who knows him in and out, understands him and took care of his emotional needs. Maan moved towards his study table removed his bike keys from his denim pocket but along with it something like a thin metal caught hold of his hand. He looked at it observed it keenly. It was a sleek bracelet looking at it he remembered his encounter with that strange girl while he was returning from the library. The way she ran into him, both lost their balance and fell down. Her fragrant silky hues had fallen on his face and he felt someone splashed his face with rose petals. Her face was glowing naturally, no make up, her eyes were closed. But when she opened her eyes after calming herself those pair of hazel brown eyes were trying to hypnotise him. When he unintentionally caught hold of her petite figure he felt how perfectly she fitted in his hold. But before he could drown himself more into her, she got up hurriedly and he came back to his senses. She swiftly lifted all her belongings and before he could mouth a Sorry or say anything she ran away. He saw her bracelet on the floor, took it and tried calling her out but she didn't stop perhaps she was in a hurry, no she was terrified of their encounter he could read her eyes. Coming out of that moment he looked at the bracelet again. It was pure platinum with 'GM' initials may be her name. He self thought if its so expensive he should try giving it back to her but the way she was dressed, in a suit which he liked, he could say that she was not from their college bcz in his college hardly any girl would wear traditional dress. Nw only option left was destiny, yes if they were destined to meet again then he will certainly give back her bracelet to her. He kept the bracelet in his wallet thinking kya pata kahi pe bhi mil jayye. He then went to get his change of clothes when his cell started ringing and the name flashing on it made him self-thought not again Yash. He put the phone on speaker mode and started changing his clothes.

"Hello… Yash.. Bol kya bhool gaya…??"

"Hello.. Maan tu toh sach mein mera jigri dost hai re… Bina bataayein meri baat samajh jata hain… Lekin iss baar maine notes ya college se related baat karne phone nahi kiya hai…"

"Toh phir isske alawa tu kya bhool saktha hai… Haan Meera se related hoga na…"

"Haan… Yaar!!! Woh parson Meera ka B'day hai mujhe abhi meri behen ne yaad karwaya… Issiliyein toh Meera aaj mera sar kha rahi thi yeh janne ke liyein kii maine kya surprise plan kiya hai…?? Par usska B'day parson hai yeh mujhe ab jaake yaad hua…"

"OMG Yash..!!! Itni badi baat tu bhool jaane se pehle apne aap ko kyon nahi bhool gaya…"

"Kya..?? Jst don't say anythng nw samjhe Maan… Tum kal mere saath usske liyein gift select karne aa rahein hon bas… Mujhe aur kuch nahi sunna… Kal subah 10am I'l wait for you near Mc.Donalds, Galaxy Mall… Bye…!!!"

"Hello Yash..!!! Sun toh… Cut kar diya… (Looking at his cell) Ab usski mangetar ke liyein gift kharidna hai, usske liye bhi mera hona jaroori hai… God aise insaan ko romantic kehte hai…"

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He moved towards his bed and opened his lappy to check his mails when the cell started ringing again without looking at the caller ID he blasted on the person thinking it to be Yash.

"Hello.. Yash… Haan Yaar aa raha hoon main kal… Ab kya raat bhar sone bhi nahi dega..??"

But listening to the 'Hello' from a different yet familiar voice he cooled down.

"Ohhh Sorry Dadi Maa..!!! Main samjha Yash tha…"

"Haan Dadi Maa… Aap toh jaanti haina usse… Woh parso Meera ka B'day hai issiliyein kal gift lene jaa raha hoon usske saath…"

"Main nahi jaana chahtha hoon Dadi Maa… Usske saath jaunga toh aapse milne ka mauka miss kar dunga… Aur main aisa nahi hone dunga…" (Very determined)

"Par Dadi Maa…"

"Thik hai.. Main aapse parson milta hoon.. Ab toh khush hai na aap…."

"Aap KC ki fikar mat karo… Mere hote huye koi usspar aankh utha kar nahi dekh saktha…"

"Plz… Dadi Maa itna sab hone ke baad aapko abhi b uss insaan ki padi hai…" (Very angrily) Sorry Dadi Maa… Par I dnt and will nvr trust that person… Aur agar aapko bas usski hi baatein karni hai toh call him mujhe bahot neend aa rahi hai… Good Night…"

With that he cut the call and put off all the lights and tried to sleep.

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Precap : Shopping…

So how many liked Maan's Mission bracelet lauta don…??? 😳

Plz Like and Comment…

Love Cia ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
i liked the way geet was getting emotioanl for a bracelet but its true na armaan gifted her
and yash and maans nice frdship

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