DEMON'S DESIRE-SS-UPDATED PT 03 PG 10 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
finally u updated this
lv ya
bt ye toh bta de na wt relation shared geet with dev hope not lovers plz
geet poor girl she wanted solution to her problem bt have to wait
n here came my maanu awww me was missing him
lvd it
beautifully written lvd it so much
precap- waiting

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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Loved It 😉
Finally MG met 😳
Waiting For Next 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
so maan is going to help her
nice update
thanx for the pm
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Siri sweetu awsome update but i have lot of que in my mind...firest of all tpo tu isme itni tough english kyu use kar rahi hai yaar thoda aisi bhasha me likh k easily samjh me aaye.
Sec mujhe ye jaanaa hai ki Maaa se Geet ko konsi advise chahiye.
Third one Dev Geet se pyar karta tha ya Naintara se.
Or agar naintara se pyar karta tha to naintara ab jo use jinda karne pe tulli hai tab kyu nahi ki shadi jab wo zinda tha?
Fourt one is ki Dev or Geet friends the kya? I mean Geet Dev ka kya relationship tha wo b clear kar.
5th one is naintara witch hai in real sences or waise hi kaha
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Superb update..
Now I'm understanding the story...
Loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
I'm sooo in love with your story..
its touching how Geet is doing everything to save Swati..
Maan's entry was amazing.. hehhe..
lovely update..
great and intense precap.. eagerly waiting to read more 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: richa_kapoor

Siri sweetu awsome update but i have lot of que in my mind...firest of all tpo tu isme itni tough english kyu use kar rahi hai yaar thoda aisi bhasha me likh k easily samjh me aaye.
Sec mujhe ye jaanaa hai ki Maaa se Geet ko konsi advise chahiye.
Third one Dev Geet se pyar karta tha ya Naintara se.
Or agar naintara se pyar karta tha to naintara ab jo use jinda karne pe tulli hai tab kyu nahi ki shadi jab wo zinda tha?
Fourt one is ki Dev or Geet friends the kya? I mean Geet Dev ka kya relationship tha wo b clear kar.
5th one is naintara witch hai in real sences or waise hi kaha




shona ek baar try kiya tough english use karke kya response milti hai aur waise bhi shona kuch log mujhe comment kiya poor english hai...so isiliye tought english diya...

and second part is geet ko maan se apni bhateeji swati ko cure karne ka saadhan chaahiye kyunki docs kehdiya hai ki ab woh sirf ek hi mahina zinda reh sakti hai bachne ka koi chances nahin...


third question ka answer abhi nahin de sakti...updates pad tumhe samajh mein aajati hai...



aur 4th pt was...jab naintara kuch shaktiyaan paane ke liye chali gayi thi tab dev suicide kardiya...




aur 5th one is that s naintara real witch hai nd not said just like that...



so now ur doubts r cleared...if u hv further doubts then do let me know...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
awesome update
loved a lot
continue soon
waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Must say you r doing great.As u give regular updates and such wonderful l chapters I lov it as I loved this part.Its really great.Plz update soon.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
y did maan say it like that...

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