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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shri12

Wow this is really too good maan turned into MSK in 4 yrs and met his angel after a long time kya yaar correct time pe stop kardiya


thanku shri
ya he turned in to msk
ha ha dn wry next part mein cnt karungi lol
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anjucool

fabulousupdate

loved it
eagerly waiting for next


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamy4ever

Interesting part 😊
Thanks for the pm. Cont soon


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 3
nice part...
poor Maan...
cont soon dear...


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

poor maan, how the indifference of his parents changed him fm a sweet innocent boy to arrogant bussiness tycoon.hope geet brings d real maan out of maan sing khurana.


thanx for ur cmnt dear
hmm let's c whether geet brng maan out of msk
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi thanks 4 da pm n intense update! Poor Geet! Maan shouted her 4 no reason! Maan nw only who his angel is! Well written! update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome superb update

aso geet ig geet kapoor

finally maaneet will rock the ff


now was waiting for it


sad that maan was transfered into maan singh khurana

but he will e same maan for his angel

continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice, lovely part
I'm so much love with the title of this FF
now again come to the update
innocent maan become Angry young man MSK
who is now business tycoon
poor geet
feel sad for her
maan shouts on her without any reason
kaha stop kya tune
aab jaldi update de
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update diii!!!!
Loved it veryy much...
So Maan took all his frustrations on Geet... Geet is sweet!!!😊
Hmm so Geet is Mr.Kapoors daughter!!!!
Precap is nyc diii...plzzz cont soon dii... me w8ng
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Posted: 12 years ago




PART-4

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Mr.kapoor left the dance floor I guess to receive someone..i saw geet in the middle of dance floor enjoying,giggling with her friend..i too went to receive aadi's call n when I returned back I saw her standing in the middle of the dance floor like a statue..her face seemed tensed n she was on verge to cry..i wondered what happened to this girl who was giggling dancing few minutes back.i was moving back to my table where I was n that's when my gaze fell on her back which she was trying to hide that too hiding from people over there..my gaze fell on her blouse,it's hook was unclasped n there is only support of other hook..she already was in tears n I felt bad..i wondered why she was not moving from there when she has problem..something in me literally pushed to help her.




"need any help??"I whispered in her ear as I stood behind her so that no one could notice her back.she was startled at first n looked at me shocked.."I know that..i mean"I was fumbling for words.i didn't understand how to say."I know that ur blouse hook is unclasped"I said I one go closing my eyes in embarassment for what i said n she gasped in shock.



"move from here?"I whispered in her ear again but she didn't budge.."what??"I asked her confused.


"what if any notice my back no..i cant"she said in a whisper but I could estimate how scared she was.

She was right actually.she was the only beautiful girl there..actually she seemed more beautiful to me than anyone I have even seen till then.everyone's eyes were on her n somewhere I didn't liked it.everyone's eyes were moving along with her n they could easily notice that.she needs my help.that was only thing my brain told me then.


"geet..calm down..don worry"I said to reduce her fear..she was almost on verge to cry.i came infront of her covering her back with my hand so that no one could notice her unclasped hook.she was shocked to beyond n I could see that.i pulled her close to me placing her hand on my shoulder as if we are dancing together.



"just hold me tight n don't move away from my grip..we can move out like this n u can use washroom there..i eyed towards the way to washroom.she didn't say anything n I continued."I mean if u don't have any problem..i just want to help..


"ok"she said while nodding her head but her eyes were downcasted in embarrassment.i felt something which I don't know at that moment when I felt her bare skin..she was very soft like a flower n I got to see her beautiful angelic face from close..very close to me.

We somehow reached the corner where no one could notice us.i brought my coat from the table n placed it around her..she quickly ran to washroom.I moved out from the party as I received aadi's call.I was recollecting the moment of our closeness n started walking to parking area..I somewhere wanted her with me..I liked her closeness.I was so used to loneliness n I never wished to see someone near me but this girl created some new feeling in me.I shrugged the thought n started walking to my car so that I can go back to my so called home again to be alone.


"maan.."she called me..I knew that it was none other than geet..It felt soothing to hear maan from her..I was so used to mr.khurana n she addressed me with my first name after few minutes of our meeting of course we met already but i guess she dont remember n her advancement to take my first name surprised me.


She came to me running n handovered my coat back.."thanku so much..god knows what would have happened if u were not there to help me..i would have died with embarrassment..you know those media people they would have made it an issue..thanku soo much"she said in one go..Her voice was so sweet like a music..I wondered how can she speak without even taking a breath..Unknowingly I smied at her n nodded when she thanked me again"it's ok"


"iam sorry..wo i dont like to be so formal..so i took ur first name..hope u wont mind?"she said when i didnt say anything.."no no that's ok..u can call me maan"i said n turned to my car.


"can u drop me home??"she asked nervously when I settled in driver seat in my car.."I mean wo papa is busy in the party I don't want to stay here..so If u dont mind"she mumbled.."get in"I said.she got inside n the journey was silent.she was looking at me from corner of her eyes n I could see that..It seemed as if she is observing some variety creature."what??"I asked her directly when she was continuously staring at me.Infact I loved that but her staring at me made me nervous n I couldn't concentrate on driving.

"nothing..nothing"she shrugged her shoulders giving me a smile.

"umm..wo..do u remember me??we already met 4 years back"she asked me with a hopeful look.oh she still remember but how come???i thought.."yeah n u remember me??"I asked surprised..she nodded smiling at me cutely.Oh how can someone look beautiful n cute at a time I thought.


I could see that she was very eager to start any conversation with me..Even I wanted to but as always my nature didn't allowed me.."umm..iam sorry for ruining everything that day"I said not even realizing what I said..she burst out laughing n I was lost in her.then reality hit me..oh I was behaving like a despo..my sorry made no sense..iam asking for sorry for the incident that happened 4 years back.



"I mean wo..iam sorry.."I again said..Oh god!what's happening with me..the great maan singh khurana is nervous to talk to a girl I thought..I again concentrated on my driving n finally we reached her home.she asked me to come inside but I denied..she insisted me a lot that I couldn't deny..

I entered inside her home along with her..it was empty just like mine..I wondered where her family members have gone.as if understanding my confusion she said"I don t have anyone except papa..me n papa stays in this huge palace"she said making sad face as if she dont like that.


She offered me coffee n I nodded..I was alone in the living room n suddenly my gaze went to some beautiful paintings..I just couldn't take my eyes off from them..they were just so beautiful n every painting said something.."wow great!!"I mumbled.

"thanku thanku"she said offering me coffee mug.."these are my stupid creations"she said n giggled.."no they are beautiful"I said.."thanku"she said n smiled cutely again taking my senses away.

Precap:

geet drooling over shirtless maan ☺️

oops!!maan caught her😆😛



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Edited by MonaLovesMaan - 12 years ago

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Posted by: priya_21 · 7 years ago

Hey all of you welcome all in Maaneet sweet world one more painful story i hear " Kitni girhein kholi hai maine" a nd feel this going perfect

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