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Posted: 12 years ago
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note:Plz add "monachweetie" to ur pm list if u need pm's


No I never let her go..i want her back in my life..she is my angel..ANGEL OF MY LIFE..who changed my life completely…


she entered my life like an angel for which I said no for once…I never thought that I would allow someone to enter mylife rather say hopeless life…I didn't have any hopes with my life which was totally under my parent's control..so I never wanted someone to enter my dark life which was not at all mine..i was just a puppet who has to dance according to my parent's wish..


hmm...mom emotionally black mails me n dad commands on me authoritatively…

and as a result my life was not mine completely…when I turn to see what is my life actually it was completely filled with my dad n mom not to forget their dreams which they wanted to accept as mine…

but thanx to them they are the reason that she is in my life today…this is the biggest favour they did to me till date..

but when she stepped in to my life everything seemed to change…I never knew that I too have spirit to do things on my own,I too have self confidence, I too have guts to face anyone but she brought ME out from myself.

I some times curse myself when I remember how I asked her to refuse to marry me..but she never did that n I don't know the reason till today as I never asked her..actually I never asked her anything or let her ask me anything..


I still remember how adamantly she said"I wanna marry u"when I explained her everything which was not at all perfect in sense..my words were clumsy just like my life but I don't know what she understood in them n how she took me….


Iam really was fool for hurting her..actually it was never my intention but situatins since my child hood made me like that…I always ended up in taking off my frustation on her but she;she never complained instead she tried to console me; bring me out of my frustation ,pain I went through…


Yeah I used to take out my frustation on her but it doesn't mean that iam heartless or rock hearted person..i call myself an emotional fool..i never showed my emotions to anyone not even my mom,I buried them in some corner of my heart n never let others to know what's going in me n what is there in my mind…


I never realised but she had her effect on me..i used to put out everything infront of her unknowingly..even in our first meeting I ended up in saying something which I never thought to do so.i must admit she made some special place in my heart at the very first meeting of ours..her eyes;oh...they have power to melt even a rock…they are so magical at the same time reflects her innocence…

She changed hopeless,failure maan to MAAN SINGH KHURANA..yes my angel changed everything in my life showed me the taste of life…she is the one who made me to walk a step a head to fulfill my dreams..i never knew MY decision,My wish before her presence in life..all I knew was his/her decision n I have to do it but she made me realise that I have MY dreams,MY decisions n I have right to lead my life..

She is my mishty wife ,my life….GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA

And today she is not with me and it's again a biggest failure in my life if I let her go…

No I wont let it happen..i want my mishty back..i want my geet back….

Mishty tumhara maan aaraha hai tumhe lene…i smiled at my own saying..omg i just said tumhara maan...

Maan kept driving while he got lost in his past…



I know it's a short prologue but this is what I planned as of now..plzz let me know ur views…your response gives me courage to write more...

p.s:all southindians this is not bommarillu movie story but just a line from it I mean father son relation but it's not exact concept of the movie…

one more thing I'll update this again after completeing my works wanted n pyar ka dard which are near to end…if possible I'll update this too…😃

love..

-mona🤗

Edited by MonaLovesMaan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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on new FF darling kiddo... 😃👏



me first me first... 😃😊🥳 yiiipeee 😃
Hey kiddo, that was an awesome prologue darling...
truly amazing... kaha se laati ho yaar itne saare concepts...
loved it to the core.
oh oh different maan here, who has no confidence and cant take any decisions on his own, but his angel changed everything...
but what is the reason that geet is not with him now...
yaar kiddo, i am so excited
and you didnt tell that u r starting a new FF...

continue soon yaar..
love u kiddo...🤗

Edited by jyothikrish - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Where is she ..tumne shurru me he mere Maan Geet ko juda kar diya Mona Drling 😒..I hate Mona but love this intro darling hop gonna giv shocking theme which we ll read with much interest..loving it dear. Congrats for new work 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow
yaar
congo on new ss ff jo b hoga..😆😆😆😆
wow
lv the prologue
its superb
get is his wife n maanu ki vja se she left him n now he is going to get her back
wow
waiting yaar
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg...bommarullo is my favourite movie...

interesting concept n prologue...

loved it very much...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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CONGRATS FOR THE NEW STORY
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congo for new story...
nice n hatke story... in which maan was nt successful businessman...
but is now bcoz of his wife geet...
bt geet kaha chale gayi???
ur every story stars like this... in every story 1 'but' comes.. n v all r forced to think ki "aisa kya hua hoga"...
par accha hai... suspence stories r exciting...
Edited by divya22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the prologue...

Maan realized Geet's value after she left him...

but why she left him...

where is she...

waiting for updates...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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NICE CONCEPT DEAR...
CONT SOON👏

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