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Posted: 13 years ago
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Does Maan know Geet from b4???
Nwayz nice update..
Continue soon :)
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nice stry seems maan knows her bfore😊
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Part 3

I sighed and enter the house... hey pari i am hungry... lets eat something... i said as i landed on the sofa feeling tired...
Pari - hmmm... but i wanted to eat something made from your hands... she said making a face to which i only smile...
Sorry pari next time pakka... there is not much time left for you, so this time we can eat like this... i said and snapped my fingers and the food appear in front of us... she nodded and served me and herself also... we ate and settle in my room... so your boss is here on your very first day to drop you... she asked me teasingly... stop it yaar pari... its nothing like that... can we talk something else... i said not wanting to talk about it for now as i was hell tired... ok... why are you so crancky sweety... we will not talk about it because i have to go now... time is up... i sighed... ok pari, good night... bye sweety sweet dreams... she said and disappear... i lied on my bed... but as soon as i close my eyes the hug scene played like a flashback in front of my eyes... i snapped my eyes open... what the hell i am thinking... it was just a friendly hug right... but, i have so many male friends in college... they used to hug me... i never felt like this with anyone... why he... stop it geet... just close your eyes and sleep i shouted on myself... but sleep was far away from me that night...

I was again late next day as i slept late... all thanks to that hug... so i have to use my powers... how much i try not to use them in work but i ended up using them... i prepare everything before maan sir come except his coffee because i know it will get cold before he came... i was about to leave his cabin when i saw a file laying on the ground... i picked it up and started reading it... it was a blue print of a hospital... but its design has lots of fault... i sighed and took it with me in my cabin to check it carefully... after sometime i heard foot steps...i look up and saw maan sir coming... oh shit... i didn't arrange his coffee... i snapped my fingers and there was a coffee on his table before he could enter... i sighed... bach gayi... i thought and again started studying the file again... it didn't took time for me to study the all faults... i was about to take it to maan sir when i heard the ringing of phone... i took it and as soon as i took it i heard a deep voice... come to my cabin, right now... i sighed... don't know if i did something wrong... i enter his cabin after knocking...
yes sir...
Maan - where is the file of Mr. Singh's hospital project...
wo sir actually... it is with me... i said showing it to him... he raised his eyebrow looking at me with confused expressions...
i open it and show him the design... it has many faults... i said as i show him the parking lot design... if we keep the parking lot at this place then it will affect the patients as there will be lots of noises which can directly be hear in the hospital... and hospital is a place where all like to sit in peace if it is doctors or patients... it should be at a corner where this garden is... i think it should be at the place of parking lot and parking lot should be at the place of garden... i said and continue explaining him the other faults leaning on the table carefully... my arm brushed his as i lean on the table and i felt something... something i couldn't explain... i stop abruptly looking in his eyes... i saw something but before i could read them he change those expression with the blank one... i looked away standing straight... there was a awkward silence in the room... i was about to say something when someone barged into the cabin... i could see she was angry on something... she was wearing a short skirt with tight fitted top...
Girl - Maan... you again rejected my designs...she said angrily... i frowned... how can she talk with sir like that...
Maan - firstly... i am your boss... call me sir... secondly... knock on the door before entering my cabin and lastly but not the least... your design was the worse anyone could design... so i rejected them... and this is your last chance to prove yourself... if you didn't gave me best designs till monday then mom also can't stop me from firing you... he said calmly but i could feel that he is really getting annoyed...
Girl -how can you talk to me like that... i am not your... she said but maan sir interrupted her...
Maan - this is my company... and you are standing in my cabin... so i can talk to you as i want... he said hurriedly before she could complete...
i decided to leave from there... i didn't wanted to intefere... but as i took first step... maan sir hold my hand...
Maan - i didn't told you to leave... he said softly... i nodded and stood there silently... i was confuse... what is happening here...
Girl - who is this low class girl... she said looking at me with disgusting face... anger rushed through my veins as her words register in my mind... before i could react... maan sir replied...
Maan - its non of your business... he spat... from the time i met him, first time i saw him losing his cool infront of someone... the girl was about to leave when maan sir said again...
Maan - and this is office... i will be happy if you concentrate on your work than analysing people... he said as she left closing the door...
sir... who was she...??? i asked reluctantly... i didn't wanted to get him more annoyed because of me... but to my surprise he replied me comfortably... she is our company's head architect Sheena Kapoor...
oh... she was talking as if she know you personally... i said... i really didn't like her audacity... how can she talk to maan sir like that... he is our boss after all... ignore her geet... he replied... i nodded smiling a little... so you thought i didn't know about the faults in that file... he smiled teasingly at me...
you knew... i asked shocked...
Maan - obviously i will know... knowing sheena has made it... i have to double check it before i approve it...
so why you didn't tell me first that you knew... i asked surprised...
Maan - because i wanted to know how many faults you can spot... and i must say you almost spotted all except one... he said seriously...
and which one was left... i asked and he started telling me about it...
Maan - so now understood... he said as he explained me...
yes... i don't know how i didn't notice it... i said embarrassed... it was so simple...
Maan - its not your fault geet... sometimes architect also skip this part in a hospital design... but, you are not even a architect still you are better than our head architect... as you corrected her... there's no need to feel embarrased... he said in comforty way... that makes me feel light instantly... i nodded... now get back to work... he said again in bossy way... and yes call Mr. Malhotra and cancel the meeting with them...
but why sir as far as i know this deal is important for KC...
Maan - i have personal work geet... that is more important... so do as i say... he said sternly... i nodded... so leave... he said looking at me not moving...
umm... sir... i pointed on my hand which he was still holding... oh... he said leaving it immediately... i smiled and left from there... the rest of the day was busy with work... today pari didn't came to meet me... i wonder what's wrong with her... nowadays she didn't come everyday... only once in a month or so... maybe she must be busy... but i missed her when she dissapear like this... i sighed... its time to go home... maan sir left early today so i didn't have to stay after 6:30... i decided to walk till the next road... i was feeling somewhere lonely... i was just about to exit KC when suddenly pari appears in front of me... i immediately takes a step back...



whats wrong with you..??? its crouded area if you will appear like this... people will get scare... and whats this you are not wearing clothes like humans... i said looking here and there if anyone saw her... but there was noone... i sighed in relief... ho gaya...??? now listen to me... pari said holding my shoulders to make me look at her... what happ... i was asking when masi ma appear in front of me... i again took a step back this time in fear...



i told you not to come here ever again... she said holding pari's arm... wo maa... main geet...pari started but masi ma cut her inbetween... no... Princess Parineeta... you are coming with me right now... and Princess Geetanjali stay away from my daughter... otherwise your little life on earth will not be good as it is now, understood... she said in a warning tune... masi ma plz... i was about to continue when i saw maan sir standing behind a car... my eyes widened in shock... maan sir... i mumbled which was loud enough to be heard by pari and masi ma... the next moment he was on floor... maan... i shouted... i was about to go towards him when masi ma stopped me.


Edited by Maansi11 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update
how come in previous update maan said geet's name
seems like maan is something else which we dontknow
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting parts ⭐️

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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
Loved this SS. Really an unique concept.
Did Maan saw geet with pari and masi. What happend to him 😕
Plz cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sure dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 4


Nothing happen to him... he will be ok in few hours... she said and then only i realised she did magic on him to make him forget what he saw... and yes stay away from my daughter... i know very well why are you doing this... you are manipulating my daughter's mind so that you can be future queen... and you know what she says... 'Geet Di... deserves to be queen more than me...' why can't you just stay away from her and us... she yells...masi ma its not true... and plz... i am not Princesss Geetanjali anymore... I am Geet Juneja... and i am happy with it... i said politely but she didn't listen... just shut up... and just stop trying to interfere in pari's life otherwise you will pay for it... i am here to give you one last warning... masi ma i didn't do anything like this... you are just misunderstanding me... i tried to make her understand... it is not in my nature to spoke to someone in high voice... i couldn't tolerate it... it makes me feel uncomfortable... but she was not listening to me... maa you are just creating a scene here... and di you plz.. take maan home and take care of him... she said seriously looking at me and i understood her meaning... she will only call me Di whenever it is something really serious or i am angry on her... she hold masi ma's hand and disappear... i closed my eyes for sometime... i didn't knew this much was happening with pari and masi ma... i have to make pari understand that i am not a good queen... i don't even have full wings like them... i am just a half angel... thats why i am here on earth... she can't seriously think i can be a better queen than her... i have to talk to her... i took maan sir to my appartment... it was risky to take him to his house... knowing he will ask so many questions... i have to answer his questions first... i made him lay on my bed and went to washroom for a cool shower... don't know when these problems will go away from my life... i sighed... may be never... but for now i have to handle maan sir... i came out from the washroom... i was drying my hairs looking in the mirror when i notice maan sir's arm was bleeding and his shirt was wet with blood... i look at it from near and it looks like he hit it somewhere... i remove the shirt from there and put my hand lightly at the wound closing my eyes and it disappear... and than i change his shirt so that he won't be suspicious... i was sitting on the couch reading a magazine... actually not reading just turning the pages... but thinking what happen today... i notice maan sir's eyes opening slightly... i immediately put the magazine aside and snapped my fingers and coffee cup appear in front of me and i took it in my hands from air... and stood beside him as he opened his eyes slowly... maan sir... are you alright...??? i asked as he sat up looking here and there...he looked confused but nodded slightly... maybe still feeling pain in his head... i gave the coffee cup to him as he drank first sip he asked... how i came here... i was going to office as i wanted an important file... that needed my attention... he asked and i sighed in relief... he forget only seeing us... wo... actually you fainted in front of office... there was no one there so i take you here with me... i said... i don't like lying but what to do... i can't broke rules na... and moreover its only for his own good...
Maan - don't tell me you carried me till here... i am really heavy for you...
no sir.. watchman helped me.. i added to which he nodded... he was still not looking satisfied... but i know he was not in a sense to think anything...
Maan - i should leave... my family must be waiting for me... he said holding his head in his hands...
no... i almost said immediately... but then added softly... i mean its raining outside and moreover your car is also not here... how will you reach... there will be no taxi at this time... i said getting concernend suddenly... i didn't wanted him to leave like this... it will be really difficult for him to concentrate on anything for few hours and he should sleep not roam around in this condition...
Maan - i think you are right... my head is paining badly... he said his eyes closing already... i should just sleep for a while... if you don't mind...
ji... why would i mind... you rest haan... i said hurriedly and lay on the couch after making sure he is sleep...
i closed my eyes but couldn't sleep... don't know what is happening in my life... i should just stay away from humans as much as i can... because of me their life can also be in danger... but firstly i should talk to pari about all this... she shouldn't have come like this here... i can't just be selfish like this and put other people life in danger... and then doing magic on their brain... it can affect them... what if something would have happen to maan sir... thinking about all these thoughts sleep took over me... i woke up next day hearing a phone call... i was about to took it with magic when i saw maan sir sleeping on my bed... i sighed and got up to take the phone which was on the bed side table... still yawning... i coundn't risk doing magic in front of him... it was as usual pinky... ofcourse who will call me rather than her... yes pinky... whats it...??? why are you disturbing my beauty sleep by calling early in the morning... i yawn completing the sentence...
Pinky - get up sleeping beauty... its 9:00... not early in the morning...
what...??? i glanced at the clock that was showing 8:45... pinky its not 9:00 its 8:45... i said as i made my way to washroom to take a shower as i know now i will not be able to sleep... i put the phone on speaker... taking shower at same time...
Pinky - whatever... why are you not at the office yet... i am calling you from 7... For God Sake you can atleast pick up the phone... i am here getting worried sick for you and you are sleeping peacefully...
you know why you are talking with me on the phone right now at office hours... i asked ignoring her questions... when i didn't heard any reply from her i continue... because maan sir is not at office right now...
Pinky - what...??? how did you know??? she shouted and i chuckle... hearing the noise of her spitting something from her mouth... maybe some drink...
well... will tell you later as i have a lots of work to do... and plz... fill my leave for today... my leave application is at your desk... saying so i cut the call... next moment i snapped my fingers and my leave application will be in front of her... i came out after taking a long shower... must say it feels really relaxing... when i came outside i saw maan sir was up already may be waiting for me... how are you feeling now sir...??? i asked as i stood beside him... he was looking at me without blinking his eyes... i asked again the same question but he seems lost somewhere... having no other option i snapped my fingers in front of his eyes to let him know i am asking something... but it goes all wrong as a bucket full of water poured on him the next moment... i bit my lower lip and closed my eyes tightly... shit... what i have done... what the hell is wrong with me... i know very well that the thing i am going to think during snapping my fingers it will happen for real... how can i be so stupid... to snap my fingers in front of him when this kind of weird thought was running in my mind... he will definetly kill me... no... no how can he kill me... he will just shout at me... or maybe fired me... oh no... i waited for sometime for his blast... but nothing like that happen as i was thinking so i slowly open my left eye to see what he is doing... i closed it immediately looking at him as he was removing his wet shirt... i heard him chuckle and i ran from there to the living room... i was standing in the kitchen when i heard footsteps coming towards me... i turned around to see him standing half naked in front of me...
sir... why you came here like this... plz... change into something... i said looking everywhere but not him... but i could feel he was looking at me intently... i waited for him to say something but he didn't... he came towards me and i turn around showing my back to him... he came close... so close that i can feel him breathing on my shoulder... my heart was beating fast feeling him so close to me... i close my eyes tight to hide my uneven breathing... but it didn't help... i have never been this close to any male before... it was creating unknown feelings in me...
Maan - same applies to you... he whispered in my ear and immediately take a step back... i sighed in relief as he did... but then it didn't felt good when he suddenly step back... i took a deep breath to calm myself...and then as his words sank in my head i looked at myself... and then only i realised i was only in my bathrobe from the time i came out of washroom... and it was quite wet from some places... so it was looking like a second skin on me...



my face turned pink in embarrasement... and i again ran to my room to change in something decent... i could hear him laughing in the kitchen but i ignore it... i enter in my room looking at myself in the mirror... how on earth i forgot that today i am not alone... urgghhh... i cursed my self as i changed into a pair of vest and shorts... i brushed my hairs hurriedly and left them open for a change... applied some gloss and kohl in my eyes and was about to go outside when i thought about his clothes... he didn't have anything to change... i went into washroom so that i can arrange his clothes too... i snapped my fingers and a pair of shirt and jeanes appeared in front of me... i quickly came out... kept it on the bed and left to the kitchen looking for him.


thats it for now... hope you all will like it and plz... do press like + comment... 😃
Edited by Maansi11 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fab update
Maneet moments were terrific ⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved the concept and the story
magical geet is awesome

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