MG SS Falling In Love With...??!?? Part7 Pg15 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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such a sweet maaneet moments..pls cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sweet part. 😆 Dadi came to know abt Maan's stay at geet's place interesting
Eagerly waitg for next part.
Edited by dreamy4ever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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SO MAAN HAS A FAMILY TOO AND THEY CAME LOOKING FOR HIM
AND THEY HACE ACCEPTED GEET AS THEIR DIL
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 6 (a)

aww... beta you are so beautiful... just like an angel... she said cupping my face lovingly... i coughed hearing her... maan sir immediately patted my back and offer me glass of water which was on the table... now who will tell her i am really an angel... i smiled at my own thought...
Geet beta are you ok... she asked getting concerned...
how you know my name...???i asked confused...
wo actually... ummm... i mean... she fumbles... its all so confusing me now... she looks away from the corner of her eyes... wo... maan told me about you... she said taking a deep breath... i was still not satisfied... there is definately something fishy... i have to find out soon...
so bhabhi when will you come home to meet everyone... he said and i knew he is changing the topic...
Vicky... maan sir said a bit sternly...
you are misunderstanding us... i mean... he fainted yeaterday night so i took him here with me and yesterday was raining heavily so he slept here... i said in one go... not letting them interrupt this time... she immediately touch maan sir's forehead... what happen to you... you were alright yesterday na... she asked checking him... i can see she is really concerned... i smiled seeing their love... thinking about my parents... they also get tense like this whenever i fell ill...
i am fine dadi... and how you came here...??? he asked and i came out of my thoughts...
wo... actually we were getting worried you didn't came home for more than 12 hrs... so vicky traced your phone and we came here...
what... i mean this is too much...
sorry...but what can we do... if you will get gayab like this... by the way... you didn't introduce us... vicky said to maan sir but he was looking at me...
hmmm... geet she is my dadi... and he is my brother... vicky....
hi bhabhi... he said extending his hands...
i am not your bhabhi... i told him sternly... call me geet ok...
how can i call you by name... you are elder than me...
ok don't call me by my name... but don't call me bhabhi also...
then what will i call you...??? he made a face...
stop it both of you now... maan sir said looking at us... then i realized we were fighting like kids... i smiled weakly and dadi laughed...
maa tell him na don't call me bhabhi and all... i don't like it... i pouted...
maa??? she knotted her brows...
wo... sorry i mean mam... i didn't realised how maa came out of my mouth...
its ok you can call me maa... she said patting my cheeks.. i smiled hugging her... i felt my mother's warmth in her arms...
BM i want breakfast...he said sitting on my chair... i rolled my eyes... now what is this BM...
sorry i will not tell you now... but its your new name... he said serving himself the remaining pasta from the bowl...
ok... but you can atleast tell me the full form...
i will tell you when the time comes promise... he said eating the pasta now... i asked maa to have breakfast but she said she is not hungry... so i didn't say much... how i wish my family also be like this and i too have a younger sibling like vicky... i sighed and sat on one of the chair...




we spent some time together... and i actually enjoyed after so many days... i didn't wish to let them go... but what to do... they have to leave na... and i again was alone in my home... i sighed doing all my work... i didn't realised how time passed quickly... pinky and her brother came in the evening... we have so much fun... we watched movie together and then have our dinner... pari didn't came... i was thinking to visit nani sahiba today... but she didn't came... i have to talk to nani sahiba about what pari said to me... it was not at all making sense... i couldn't sleep so i went to the garden which was outside the building of my appartment... it felt so soothing in fresh air... i sat there on the bench thinking how my life totally changed after joining KC... i got such nice friends... maan sir is so nice... always caring and understanding... he didn't question me today... why i was crying... maybe pari told him something... though vicky is annoying but he is good by nature... and maan sir's dadima... she reminded me of my mom... the same elegance... the same nature... as if i am seeing my mom... maybe thats why i call her maa... i came out of my thoughts when i heard pari's voice... i smiled at her...
you are late... i said as she sat beside me on the bench...
i am sorry sweety... wo maa called me so i couldn't come at dinner time...
hmmm... i said we sat in silence for sometime... enjoying the weather...
by the way what was that in the morning... you and maan sir... i asked breaking the silence...
its a secret... so i can't tell you...
thats not fair... i thought i was the only one with whom you share your secrets... i asked in a annoyed tone...
uff... geet its not mine its his... she said in same annoyed tone as mine...
hmmm... i said looking away... why he would share his secret with her... and moreover why i am not liking them sharing personal things with each other...
what...??? she said looking at me intently... now don't get jealous ok... she said reading my face... i wonder did i...?? no its just i am possessive about pari... and getting so close to humans is not good for her... i told myself but it was not convincing enough to me... ughhh... i will surely get mad thinking about them... she cleared her throat and i came out of my thoughts...
i want to meet nani sahiba pari... i said changing the topic...
i know... thats why i came here now... so lets go... she said getting up...
now...?? i asked surprised... i didn't expect this early...
hmmm... you want to meet after some more years... she said rolling her eyes... i sighed as she took me to a deserted area... and we fly from there to angels world... we cross the golden gate and enter in nani sahiba's palace... she was resting in her room... so we have to wait for sometime... till then pari showed me her room... i came here for second time... whenever i came here it felt homely... because here are the relations i love the most... nani sahiba, pari and masima... after my parents death this is my only home and family... thats why i want them badly to accept me... i know masima is annoying sometimes but she never want angels bad... she always protected angels as well as humans... nani sahiba always thought masima is not a deserving queen... nani was about to give her postion to mom when she married dad and broke the rules of angels... so masima thought because of mom she didn't get the positin of queen... and she didn't like me because i am not pure angel... in thousands of angels one angel is must in a century who is selfish for herself... but not that much that she can hurt anyone... afterall angels are known as for their big hearts... i have read about it in the book which mom gave me on my 18th birthday... and i know it is masima... thats why she gets selfish for herself sometimes... but i don't mind... its her nature...
what happen...?? pari asked... i shook my head...
Pari - we should go... she said and i nodded... we left from there to nani sahiba's room... i am meeting her second time... it is always soothing to meet her... her aroma... her nature... everything about her is special...
we bend down to take her blessings... and she caress our hairs in a soothing way... i smiled getting up...
how are you princess... she said caressing my hairs... i smiled...
i am good... nani... i said as we sat in front of her...
hmmm... Princess Parineeta, i want to talk Princess Geetanjali alone... she said and pari left...
princess parineeta told me that she don't want to be a queen because you deserve this position... she said getting all serious...
hmmm... i know nani... you know she is all childish... she don't think before she speak...
but she is right Princess... she said and i look at her shocked.


finally i updated... 😆 ... my net connection was gone for few days so i was unable to update... hope you will like this part... (no maaneet scenes in this part sorry) will update next part 2morrow... 😛
Edited by Maansi11 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update
wow loved it
geet shocked to learn that nani ma wants her to become queen
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Posted: 12 years ago
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SO NANI WANTS HER TO BECOME THE QUEEN
BUT GEET IS HALF HUMAN
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow great story pl\z update soon
it's an amazing story to read i'm really enjoy reading this story of your
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update. Nani has no prob geet becoming queen 😲
Wat will happen now? Plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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love the udpate
does maan nd his family know geet from before
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 6 (b)

ji..??? i mean i am a half angel...
thats why i can't make you queen... otherwise you are more deserving than princess parineeta... but i can't break the rules written in golden book... it is written there that we can't make half angels a queen... only because of this rule i am in fix... she said and i shook my head...
then don't be... because i don't want to be a queen... i only want you to accept me in this world... i want to live with my family that is here not on earth... i said trying to convince her and she smiled...
you know i can't give you permission to live here... but you can visit here once in a year... that permission i can give you...
but... i was about to say when she interrupted...
now earth is only your home Princess... and you will soon found your own family there... and that will be more loving than us... you should not think about us much... she said standing up from her place... and yes stop crying on each and everything... it will not change the reality... you should accept the truth...
i don't want new family nani... i want to live in this family... i love you all so much...
you are saying it now princess... but when you will get pure love... you will forget us... i know it...
no i can never... i said as a tear escape my eye... she wiped it before it fall...
no more tears princess... angels don't cry remember... she said and i gave a weak smile...
hmmm... angels don't cry nani but half angels does... i said and she shook her head...
you are just like your mother...
hmmm... i said not knowing what to say on this... she smiles...
princess... i just wanted to tell you that i really agree with what princess parineeta about you being queen but it will affect your powers and efficiency... so i can't make you queen but she left without hearing me in excitement... and now i don't know how to make her understand...
you don't need to... i will talk to her and you should give her goldon book to read now... its high time she should learn about rules of this world...
you are right... i will give her soon...
hmmm... aap mujhe permission de dejiye na...
i think you should go now... she said changing the topic and called pari...
nani... i was about to say when pari came and interupt... chale... late ho jayega...
but... i was again not able to complete this time it was nani sahiba...
better you go now, princess... its really getting late... she said sternly and i know thats an order... i nodded... and left from there...

it was almost morning when i return on earth... i didn't have the time to sleep... so i straightway goes to freshnup and got ready for office... i directly goes to maan sir's cabin to keep the files and his schedule... i was keeping his coffee when he enter the cabin...
good morning sir... i said as he sat on the chair...
hmmm... good morning geet... he said checking the files... i was leaving when he said...
geet... Mr. Chopra called and said he will not be able to come for meeting as he is going back to Australia for some personal work... so we have to go for the meeting in the hotel where he is staying...
ji sir... i said and he continue... and get me Boyer Project file...
ok... i said and left to get the file... after he studied the file we left for the hotel... i was feeling tired... i didn't sleep and i didn't even have the time to have something for breakfast... how much i ignore the fact but i am half human also... and i need to sleep and eat to keep me working... and it will take 2 hrs to reach there... i was feeling more sleepy as whole journey maan sir didn't speak to me... if i will try he only answer in yes or no... i was getting fed up... he didn't maintain professionalism with me till now... it was only him who will try to talk with me even if i used to be busy... and now there is no work then also he is not answering... it seems like he is ignoring me... i wonder what happen suddenly... it was somewhere hurting me... why is he behaving like this... the meeting ends in no time... it takes only half an hour or so for the meeting... Mr. Chopra was convince with the designs... and maan sir and i explain him every detail... and he seems impressed with it... it was all over when maan sir's phone buzz... he looked quite tense... i wonder what it could me... and then he started asking questions to Mr. Chopra about their land and what type of hotel he want... about design etc... i was surprised... when Mr. Chopra has finalised everything and even send us the detail yesterday only... then why he is asking it again... i was trying to tell him but he was not letting me speak... and Mr. Chopra also was patiently answering all the questions... what the hell is happening... the main points we already discussed... he is just wasting the time by asking the same questions which we already had discuss with him before... i was getting angry... moreover it was lunch time and i was so hungry... i didn't eat and slept from yesterday properly... it was making me all the more angry... i was so tired that i just wanted to sleep on that chair itself... but no as if today maan sir is in a mood to annoy me... first his indifference behaviour and now this... uff i sighed and closed my eyes for sometime... after an hour or so maan sir finished the meeting and we left... when we came to parkinglot it was raining heavily... i didn't realised it before...
Geet... are you ok...??? i heard maan sir's voice from back... i turned around and just nodded...
can we leave plz... i said but it came in a low voice... maybe because of tiredness... travelling from one world to another always take a toll on me and now specially when i haven't eaten and slept... it is taking all my energy... but for now i just wanted some sleep... so i sat in the car and closed my eyes leaning on the seat comfortably...
You doesn't look like... i heard him mumbled near me but i ignore as if i didn't heard him... i didn't have energy to reply back... it was only few minutes when he stop the car... i opened my eyes and look around it was a lonely place surrounded by trees... i wonder why he stop here...
What happened..??? i asked when he stepped out of the car... it was still raining heavily...
let me check... he said and started checking the car opening the bonnet... i came outside to have a look on it...
gadi mein paani bhar gaya... i blurted in annoyed tone... he looked at me surprised...
tumhe kaise pata... you didn't check it for once...???
hmm... i have laser eyes na... i said absentmindely... he looked at me for sometime and burst out laughing...
geet... i think you are really tired... he said and again started laughing... laser eyes... i mean... thats when i realized what i said... i am such a stupid... how can i say that...
wo... actuaaly i... i guessed it... its raining heavily na... i said smiling weakly... he nodded still laughing... i pouted... though it was so mesmerizing hearing him laughing like that...
now how will we go...??? i asked to change the topic... if i would have been alone then it was easy but having maan sir around its so difficult... suddenly my head started spinning... i held on the car window tightly and closed my eyes for sometime... controlling myself i opened my eyes...
Geet are you alright...??? i heard maan sir's voice... i nodded and smiled slightly...
wo... actually i am little tired... thats why... its ok... i will be fine after sometime...
kya fine... see how pale you are looking... he said cupping my cheek... i can feel he is getting worried... he made me sit in the car and call someone to arrange another car... hearing his long convo i didn't even realized when my body gave up and i dozed off... but i was feeling uncomfortable... i tried to adjust myself in a comforable position but couldn't... i was about to open my eyes when i felt some support under my head... i was in half sleep... i could feel it was maan sir... i was feeling comfortable in that position so i just drifted to sleep hugging his waist, supporting all my weight on his body.






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Edited by Maansi11 - 12 years ago

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