MG FF- BE MINE FOREVER updated EPILOGUE on 02/12 - Page 6

Created

Last reply

Replies

541

Views

331.2k

Users

104

Likes

6.8k

Frequent Posters

punam2712 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#51
MAAN WAS SO RUDE TO GEET
AND EVEN DADI IS NOT WELL
LOVE TO KNOW THE PAST
-BlushaLicious- thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Commentator Level 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Awesomeee Updates !! 😃 !!
Sparkling-eyes5 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#53
osum...i think that man is maan
chavvi16 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#54
i dont get it
what the hell is happening
what happened to maan
what did he do now and is that the reason for their conditions
man this is getting confusing
pls do clarify soon
dreamymishti88 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Awesome update

Loved it

Continue soon dear

Waiting

dreamymishti88 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#56

Awesome update👍🏼

Loved it👏

Continue soon dear😊

Waiting

mysteriousmilli thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#57
loved the update...
looking forward to know the next...
preeti.1 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#58

?? BE MINE FOREVER ??
PART - V


Annie opens d envelops. It was a
...
confendiential parcel frm d private dectative to whom she hired a week ago. He snd d full detail of dat person to whom she saw in a
parking area. She summoned Tasha in her cabin.

ANNIE:Tasha meri sari meetings cancel kar do. Mujhe bahut hi zruri kaam se bahar jana hai.

TASHA:lekin mam aaj to mittals k sath meeting hai or wo bahut zaruri hai.

ANNIE:Tasha apolozise dem frm my side and do what i said to u.

TASHA:ok mam.silly me.

Annie lft d office. She sit in a car nd drive to d address gven by d detactive. She reached to a vry lower standard area. All people look at her car in amuzement. Annie stop the car nd askd about d address. One old man show hr d
destination. It was a very small and old house broken from many places. Its look lyk an old man who lost his all glory. She reached to dat house nd knocked on d door. A woman around 25year, simple looking,opens d door. Hr name is Radha.

RADHA:ji kahiye.kis se milna hai apko?

Meanwhile someone ask frm behind.

YASH:kon hai bhabhi?

This is d one fr whom she came here.

ANNIE:namaste kya main ander aa sakti hu?

RADHA:ji aaiye.

She came inside. Yash is busy in playing wid 5 year old Akash.

RADHA:ji kahiye apko kya kaam hai?

ANNIE:dekhiye aap log mujhe nai jante lekin main aap logo ko janti hu. Mera naam Anvesha hai. Dream Fashion House meri hi company hai. Apke pati mr. Sham Mr. Killawala ki factory me kaam karte hai na,main unhi ki client hu.

RADHA:oh achha,lekin ye abhi ghar pe nahi hai apko factory jana padega.

ANNIE:ji darhasal mujhe sham ji nahi Mr. Yash se kaam hai.

Radha getting confused.

RADHA:Yash bhaishab se. Lekin yash bhaisahab to us factory me kaam nahi karte.ye to dusri...

ANNIE:janti hu yash steel factory me kaam karta hai.

RADHA:ji.

ANNIE:lekin mujhe inhi se kaam hai. Mr. Yash kya main aapse akele me kuchh bat kr sakti hu?

YASH:dekhiye aap kon hai main nai janta.par apko jo b baat karni hai bhabhi k samne bolie.

RADHA:koi bat nahi bhaisahab aap dono baat kijiye tb tk main chai nashte ka intzam krti hu.

She tuk her son inside wid hr.

YASH:boliye madam kya kaam hai apko mujhse?

Annie told him what she wanted hm to do.but he refused her proposal completely. Annie offers him high price money,bt he denied nd ordered hr to leave frm dere. Annie still hv a hop. She gve hr no to hm nd cam out.Yash closd d door. Radha cam out wid tea nd snacks.

RADHA:are wo chali gai?

YASH:ha bhabhi.

RADHA:ye ameer log bhi bade ajeeb hote hai.

YASH:chhodo bhabhi.

Annie knows vry well dat one dy he cme to hr as he realy needs money. Sham nd Radha hv a
child named Aksh suffered frm lungs infection. Dey need 2lakhs 4 his treatment. Hs condition trun worst evry dy. All tries of Yash nd sham to arrange money goes in vain. Today doc gave ultimatum to Sham if dey delayed more it will harmful 4 him, yash got to know about dis. Seeing no other option he decided to accept the proposal of Annie. He calls her immediately. She arranged a meeting and told him dat she is coming to meet him. Annie tuk Adi wid her nd went to him. She pick up Yash and all 3 went to safe and lonely place. Adi was in huge shock aftr looking Yash. Adi whispered to Annie.

ADI:Annie soch lo kya ye theek hoga?

ANNIE:Adi bhaiya mere paas dusra or koi option nai hai or iss kaam me apko mera sath dena hi hoga. Ye Dadima or Geet dono ki zindagi ka sawaal hai.

ADI:theek hai Annie main tumhare sath hu.

Annie show one pic to Yash.

YASH:ye to meri tasveer hai lekin yaad nahi aa raha kab ki hai.

ANNIE: ye pic tumhari nai mere bade bhai Maan singh khurana ki hai. Ab yahi banna hai tumhe. Tum taiyar ho MSK banne k liye?

YASH:KON HAI YE MSK OR TM KYU CHAHTI HO MAIN YE BANNE KA NATAK KARU?

ANNIE:MSK yani Maan Singh Khurana, Khurana Groups of Industries k chairman or mere bade bhai the.Ek car accident me 6 mahine pehle unki maut ho gayi. hume to unki laash tak naseeb nai hui itna bhayank blast hua tha. Is sadme se mera pura parivar bikhar gaya. Dhere 2 hum sb to sambhal gaye lekin Dadima or meri frnd Geet jo maan bhai ki patni thi aaj b us sadme se bahar nai nikal ske.ye khabar sunte hi dadima ko attack aaya or wo paralysics ka shikar ho gai.or Geet uski to duniya usi pal me tham gai hai. Us dinn se na to usne kuch kaha na react kia hai.na din ka hosh hai na raat ka. Na kuch sunti hai na kuch bolti hai. Agar kuch pata hai to sirf ek naam Maan. Pura dinn deewar pe lagi bhai ki
foolmala chadi tasveer ko dekhti rehti hai. Saanse chal rahi hai magar unka ehsaas nahi hai. Ek zinda laash bann gayi hai. Doc se bahut ilaaz karwaya lekin unka kehna hai jab tak wo royegi nahi wo theek nahi ho sakti. Isliye main chahti hu ki tum bhai k roop me uske samne jao taki wo
kuch react kare. meri Dadima or Geet ko theek karne k liye unka maan unhe lautana padega...
sorry guys richa was busy so i have posted this part from her behalf...
Edited by preeti.1 - 12 years ago
Gurti_Maaneet thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 12 years ago
#59

?? BE MINE FOREVER ??
PART - VI


YASH had many que.in his mind.
...

YASH:agar Geet Maan ki patni hai uss se itna pyar krti hai to aap samjh skti hai ki aage jakr kitni prob ho skti hai.

ANNIE:dont worry bhai or Geet ka rishta ek normal pati patni jaisa kabi nai tha. Geet bhai se bahut pyar krti hai. Bachpan se hi bhai main or Geet ek sath hi khelte the. Fir bhai bahar padne chale gye. Geet unke intzar me jee rai thi. Lekin jab wo laute tb sb badal chuka tha. Maan bhai ki soch badal chuki thi. Unka behaviour Geet k liye totaly change ho chuka tha,coz wo ab Sameera ko chahne lage the.main or Dadi to Sameera ko bilkul pasand nai krte the. Maine Geet ko warn b kiya lekin wo masoom hamesha kehti k Maan ki dost hai so y should we nt accept hr. Firr ek dinn bhai ne Sameera k sath shaadi ki baat hum sbke samne rakhi. Dadi ne use reject kar dia or bhai ko dad ka diya promise pura krne ko kaha jo dad ne Geet k papa ko tb dia tha,jis din wo paida hui thi,ki Geet khurana khandan ki bahu or Maan ki patni banegi. Maan bhai naraz ho gaye. par dadi ki tabiyat ki wajh se unhe jhukna pada or na chahte hue bhi unhone Geet se shadi kr li. Dono shadi k bhandhan me bandh to gaye,lekin bhai ne Geet ko patni ka darza kabi nai dia. Ulta wo Geet se pehle se b zada naraz rehne lage.. Usse nafrat karne lag gaye. Sameera k sath shadi na hone ka zimmedar bhai Geet ko mante the. He nvr missed a chance 2 irritate and humilate her. Ek baar to unhone Geet k samne Sameera ko...(she stop suddenly remembering those painful memories nd closed hr eyes tightly). Geet chuchap sab sehti rai. Usne kabi family membrs ko ye show nai hone dia Ki bhai ka behaviour uske sath kaisa hai. Yaha tak ki mujhe b nai. Hume to sari sachhai tb pata chali jb shadi k 6 mahine baad hi bhai Geet or hm sabko chhodkar Sameera k sath rehne chale gaye. Sabne unhe samjha kr ghar wapis lane ki koshish ki,lekin wo sirf Sameera ka sath chahte the. Bhai ne Geet ko divorce dene ka mann bana lia tha. Fir wo manhoos dinn aaya. Us dinn bhai or Geet court jane wale the par kuchh baat ho gai or bhai akele hi chale gaye or fir bas ek call aaya jisne ye news di ki bhai ab iss dunia me nahi rahe. Unki car gehri khai me girne k baad buri tarah blast ho chuki thi. Ye news
sunte hi Dadimaa ko attack aaya or uske baad neck down pralysis ho gaya. Or Geet us dinn k baad aisi khamosh hui ki aaj tak boli hi
nai.

YASH:to ab aap mujhse kya chahti hai?

ANNIE:main in dono ko theek karne k liye tumhari help chahti hu.tum hi ye kaam kar sakte ho coz tumhari shakl hu ba hu bhai jaisi hai.

Yash:lekin jhooth to jhoot hota hai ek dinn to samne aa hi jayega.

ANNIE:DADI Theek ho jaye to unhe main sambhal lungi or Geet k theek hote hi main use yaha se kahi durr bhej dungi. Lekin usse
pehle tumhe Geet ko torture karna hai.

Yash shocked what she is sying...

YASH:matlab? Main kuchh samjha nahi.

ANNIE:matlab tum b Geet se bad behave karoge jaise bhai karte the.use itna zada preshan karoge taki wo bhi bhai k bina jeena seekh le. Ek baar ye ho jaye firr tumhara kaam khatam. Fir kam se kam wo apni zindagi ek naye sire
se shuru kar sakegi. Or use b koi aisa milega jo use pyar karega she deserve best loving and caring man in hr life.

YASH:or us Sameera ka kya? Maan k wapis aane k baad wo b to aayegi mujhe maan samjh kr mere pas.

ANNIE:wo ab nai aayegi coz abi 2 hafte pehle hi usne India k mashoor hoteliar Deepak oberoi k iklote bete Arjun oberoi se engagement kar li hai.main to hamesha se janti thi ki use bhai se koi pyar nai hai. She is only after his money... Listen Yash ab se agle kuchh mahino tak tum Adi bhaiya k sath rahoge. Maan ko family walo k alawa agr koi janta hai to wo hai Adi bhaiya.wo tumhe MSK banne me help karenge. Or apni family ki tension mat lo unhe 10 lakh cash pahuncha diya hai or jaise hi kaam khatam hoga 50 lakhs or mill jayenge. Or ha ek or baad ab se
tumhe yash nai Msk banna hai to shave mat krna dont shave ur stuble okk.

Annie whispered in Adi's ear and left from there. And Yash moved with Adi...
love2_soma thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#60
humein kyun lag rahe hai yeh yash nehi maan hi hai...kyunki uske deadbody nehi mile...may b woh unconcious ho gaye honge aur koi bachake leke aye honge...kash aisa hi ho...kahin sameera ne toh maan ko marwa nehi diya...kuch bhi ho sakta hai...

awesome n mindblowing updates...

loved it to d core...

thank u very much fr d lovely updates...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

8 years ago

You r mine S#2/pt11/12/pg95/100/19feb

You r mine S#2 Prologue If you not marry me Then I kill myself . Please stop Am sorry I know jo bhi huya humare beech It's

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

7 years ago

Th#5 You are Mine/ pt 51/52/53-pg68/69/71- 21 may

You are mine You are mine Always mine These words become beautiful in love But . ? . The love I have for you will never die, This is no lie. I

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pixiepixel11

3 months ago

MG-The Name That Wasn’t Mine-Ch-4 to Epilogue-Pg-6 &7-(29/6/25)

Title:- The Name That Wasn’t Mine Chapter 1: A Life That Smiles Back ⸻ The first thing she noticed was the stillness. Not the antiseptic hum of...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Gurti_Maaneet

1 months ago

Awaken Updated EPILOGUE on Pg 14 / 24-7-2025

INTRODUCTION A new Short story on our favorite maaneet.

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pixiepixel11

3 months ago

MG-Soundless-Chap-4 to Epilogue-Pg-4 to 6-(29/6/25).

Chapter One: The Studio of Shadows ⸻ The city outside never truly slept. It sighed, it buzzed, it rattled—but within the walls of the Khurana...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".