MG FF- BE MINE FOREVER updated EPILOGUE on 02/12 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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looking forward to this !
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wow great story plz update soon
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wonderful start...nice concept...
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?? BE MINE FOREVER ??
PART - II

Today Khurana Mansion is decorated like a beautiful bride.All servants busy in doing a lot of work. Savitri Devi aka dadima doesnt want 2 take ny chances. All pillars covered wid flowers and lights. Path of mansion 2 main gate fully covered wid orket flowers. All members of Khurana family desperately waiting for him. Geet is too desperate 2 meet him aftr such a lon...
g time. Maan is comin back from Howards University after 10 years. Dadima and Sunaina are getting busy in
giving instructions 2 every1. Karan is sent to recieve him. He is waiting for him on deir private halipad. Anytime Maan's jet lands on dere. Today Geet take off from Khurana Company. She is a 20% partener in Khurana Empire nd handles d marketing Department. She looks very eleagnt in red coloured khadi silk suit. Her simplicity increased her beauty more and more. She had done post graduation in management(MBA). Her parents Viraj Handa and Abhinav Khurana r best friends from childhood. Aftr dere death in plane crash,wen she was only 15,her massi decided 2 tuk her away with her 2 Paris. But Geet is vry closed to dadimaa and Annie. So she decided to stay in KM. Dadima tuk Geet away with hr and take care of her all needs. Dadima loves her like her own grandchildren. Annie too started her business recently. But in
happiness 2 meet her brother after such a long time. She too decided to stay at home. Geet look at hr wrist watch again n again.
Annie noticed hr impatientness nd teased hr.

ANNIE:Geet baar2 ghadi dekhne se wo tej nai chalne lagegi.

Geet feel embarassed.

GEET:Annie ki bachhi baut bolne lagi hai tu.

ANNIE:achha to main kya jhoot bol rai hu? Subah se dekh rai hu teri in bechain ankho ko,kitni besabri se kabi ghadi to kabi gate ko dekh rai hai.

Geet ran afte hr.

GEET:tu ruk main tujhe batati hu.

Annie aage aage or Geet pechhe pechhe.

ANNIE:to main kya jhooth bol rai hu.wrna har time kam krne wali miss handa ne aaj off kyu liya hai.

GEET:wo to tune b li hai.

ANNIE:maine to bhai k liye li hai or tune?

Geet stop running as she had no ans. Annie came nd slammed hr shoulder wid hr shoulder.

ANNIE:bol na.

GEET:Annie kuch b.

ANNIE:ab mujhse to chupa mat.i kno u love him sooo much.ye jo teri bholi 2 aankhen hai na,sb bol deti hai..bachpan se dekh rai hu
tujhe.tu kb kya mehsoos krti hai sb pata chal jata hai muhje.

GEET:10saal ho gye Maan ko dekhe,pata nai ab kaise honge.

ANNIE:vry smart handsome nd dynamic.meri is doll k prince charming.(Geet blushed)lo tune to abi se shrmana b shuru kr diya.tb kya hoga jb Bhai tere samne honge.

Geet trembled wid d thot of meet wid hr childhood nd only love MSK. Meanwhile dadi came dere.

Dadima:bachho ab shararte chhodo Maan ka jet land ho chuka hai. Karna unhe leke pahunchte hi honge. Annie blink hr lft eye to
hr. Aftr few mins a trail of lavish cars stops at KM.frm first car guards came out nd open d door of second car.frm 3 nd 4car many high profile staff members nd few more guards came out. Frm sec car a vry handsome young man wid a dynamic personality in a black trousers with white shirt nd pure black leather jacket wearing shades on eyes with little spykes came out.he hvng a killer looks 2faints all d grls around hm. He is very eye catching frm tip to toe. MSK entred in KM followed by Karan guards nd staff members.
many hiered staff standing between d path to KM 2 welcmd hm nd showered flower patels on hm. He reached 2 d enetrance hall. Dadima cm wid pooja thal nd do arti. Maan touched hr feet nd hugged hr. She seemed so happy 2 c hm again aftr 10 years. She kissed hm.

Dadima:kaise hai humare bete?apko dekhne k liye hm kbse taras rhe the.

MSK:main b dadima ap sabko bahut miss krta tha.

He entered inside nd meet Sunaina.

Sunaina:kaise ho beta?

MSK:f9or aap?

SUNAINA:hm b thek hai.

Meanwhile Annie jumped nd hugged hm tightly.

ANNIE:wlcm bak hom bhai.

He hugged hr bak.

MSK:maine sabse zada to tujhe hi miss kia.

ANNIE:Waise koi or b hai jisne apko bahut miss kiya.(she show hm Geet)guess who is she?

MSK:who is she?

ANNIE:bhai mazak chhodo.

MSK:bt i m serious.

ANNIE:bhai ye Geet hai.

MSK coldly:kon papa k frnd ki beti?
Hello geet.

B4 she said nything 2 hm he movd 2 stairs.

MSK:i m vry tired so sham ko milta hu sabse.

PRESENT:-
Suddenly a knock on door broke Annie's sleep nd she came out 4om hr past memories.

Sunanina:beta kya aap yaha hai?

Annie stands nd made Geet laid
properly,covrd hr nd switch off d light nd came out.

SUNAINA:beta hum apko kb se dhund rahe hai.chaliye dinner lag chuka hai.

ANNIE:aap chaliye mom main aati hu.

SUNANINA:theek hai pr jaldi ayega.

Annie nodded yes.Sunaina lft frm dere. Annie went to Dadima's room 2 check hr. She is sleeping.

ANNIE:sister dadima ne soup piya?

NURSE:ji maine soup b de diya tha or medi b.

Annie sit near hr nd caress hr cheek lovengly.

ANNIE:pls dadima kam se kam aap to theek ho jao.
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mind blowing update dear
waiting fro the next part
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nyc prt
Maan is soo rude
Cont soon
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Nice part ...
Thanks for the pm dear...
Waiting for the next update..
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very interesting part richa

why maan so so rude 😕
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?? BE MINE FOREVER ??
PART - III


Annie wnt to dinner table. Karan and Sunaina wtng fr hr. She sat wid dem. Servants strt serving food to dem. Karan is looking very disturbd. Sunaina askd hm wats d matter.
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SUNAINA:kya hua Karan beta aap bahut pareshan lag rahe hai?

KARAN:mom aaj subah fir se Rathore uncle ka phone aaya tha. wo puchh rahe the ki hum logo ne kya decide kiya shadi ko lekar.

Annie got angry.

ANNIE:are isme puchhne wali konsi baat hai.itni b common sence nai hai unme? Hum jinn halat se guzar rahe hai,aise me hum shadi k bare me soch b kaise skte hai.

Karan too get frustrated.

KARAN:to tum kya chahti ho ki ab is ghar me sab jeena chhod de?

ANNIE:Bhai aap itne selfish kaise ho skte ho? abi 6 mahine nai hue us hadse ko or apko apni shadi ki padi hai? Dadima ko pralytic attack hua hai us wajah se. Geet ne us din se ek shabd nai bola hai.aisi situation me aap ye sb soch b kaise skte ho?

KARAN:maine pehle b kaha hai dadima ko hospital me admitt karo or geet ko pagalkhane me.

Karan's word raised hr anger 100 times.

ANNIE:Bhai how dare u?khabrdar jo ye baat apne dobara boli to.ye ghar akele apka nai hai hum sabka bhi hai. Or raha swal Geet or dadi ka to unke medical expences main pay krti hu.so dis is none of ur business ki wo dono kaha rahenge or kaha nai.

Sunaina seeing both create tension.so she intrupts.

SUNAINA:karan pls beta shant ho jao.mr. Rathore se main khud bat kr lungi.nd Annie apne bade bhai ye bat krne ka ye konsa trika hai?

ANNIE still boiling in angr:mujhe tameez sikhane k badle pehle bhai ko rishto ki kadar krna sikhaiye.

Annie left d dinnr widout eatng nythng. She went to hr room, feeling very lonly. Trying vry hard to divert hr mind.bt past injuries disturb hr alot. She saw a photo frame on hr study table. She picked dat nd hugged it.

ANNIE:main apko kabi maaf nai krungi.bahut bada dokha dia apne hum sbko.i'll nver frgve u 4 dat.

She strt crying nd laid on hr bd. Slowly2 she caught in sleep...

"A White colourd Car running vry fast on lonly road. Hr speed increase more nd more. All tries bcmng failed to cntrl dat car.it seems dat d breaks of dat car r nt workng.it moves unctrolled here nd dere.it runs at vry hyper speed. Suddenly it falls in a deep KHAI nd blast cmpletly."

NAHIII, Annies screams in dream nd wake up instantly due to fear. Hr body is cmpltly wet. She swetting badly.she hyperventilated. Sunaina came in hr room nd switch on d lights. She went near hr nd hugged hr. Annie's eyes still filled wid fear. Sunaina tryng to calm down hr nd gave her water.

SUNAINA:beta r u alrite(she nodded yes) firse wai sapna dekha.(she nodded yes again) beta tu bhul kyu nai jati ye sb.kb tak khud ko takleef deti rhegi.jo hona tha wo ho chuka hai use
badla nai ja skta.beta jb tk tu apna dhyan dusri cheezo me nai lagaegi ye sapna tujhe aise hi darata rahega.

ANNIE:mom aap jo keh rahe ho wo mere bas me nahi hai.kaise bhul jao sb kuchh. Geet or dadima ki ye halat mujhse bardast nahi hoti. Unki ye halat mujhe baar baar sb yaad dilati hai.

SUNAINA:isliye to beta Karan bol raha tha ki ghar ka mahol badalne ki zarurat hai. Ek baar uske sujhav pe sock k to dekh.

ANNIE:pls mom aap bhi janti hai ki mera faisla badle wala nai hai.hm is topic pe pehle b behas kr chuke hai. Geet or dadima yahi rahenge mere paas isi ghar me.or ye mera akhri faisla hai.is topic pe ab or discussion nai hoga. Apko Karan bhai ki khushio ki itni hi
fikar hai to theek hai aap log jo karna chahte hai karie.leki meri dadima or meri best frnd yahi rahenge.

SUNAINA: ok ok calm down.ab tu subah subah gussa karke apna mood mat off kar. Kal raat ko b gusse me tune kuchh nai khaya
tha. Chal ab jaldi se fresh ho ja main breakfast lagwati hu.or ha bina khaye hi office mat chale jana.

She wnt outside. Annie got up nd went to washroom. Aftr getting change she went to see Geet,how she is. She sit near her. Due to
her new medicines she is sleeping calmly. Annie kissed on her forhead. Meanwhile her cell start ringing...
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OMG!!!! lot of suspense but still amazing
love it so much
waiting for next part

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