MG FF- BE MINE FOREVER updated EPILOGUE on 02/12 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
lovely update...
annie's and geet bond is very nice...
kya maan geet ko pasand nahin karta hain????

yeh dadima aur geet dono ko kya huva hain???

jaldi next update dedo...waiting eagerly...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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BE MINE FOREVER ??
PART - IV


Annie's phone ringing. She pick up d call, it was from Romeo, MD of Dream Fashion House.
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ANNIE:ha Romio bolo kya baat hai?

ROMEO:Annie sis tum kaha ho?

ANNIE:ghar pe hu breakfast kar rai hu? Kya hua koi jaruri baat hai?

ROMEO:Annie tum bhul gayi aaj hmari meeting hai Mr. Killawala k sath.

ANNIE:oh yes wo to main bhul hi gayi thi. Romeo ek kaam karo tum ye meeting akele attend kar lo.

ROMEO:nahi sis its not possible.bhul gai hume aaj unki factory jana hai.last time jo fabric aaya tha wo itna badia nai tha,isiliye ye meeting factory me rakhi hai. Is baar tm khud jake fabric check karna uske baad hi ye deal final hogi. Main 20min me waha pahunch raha hu tum bhi pahunch jao.

ANNIE:theek hai Romeo main nikalti hu.

Call cuts. She left from d home without eating anything. She is waiting 4 her shaffer but wen she is seeing she is getting late so she
decided to drive d car hr own. Romeo already reached to d factory nd waits 4 her. Aftr few min.she also reached to d factory. She ws just about to park d car in parking area. She by chance look someone who looks very familier
to hr. Sshe doesn't believe on hr eyes. Howz it can b possible. Her mind ask again nd again. She followed him but soon he vanished frm her eyes. She immediately ran to meet Mr.
Killlawala. He greets her. But she was still thinking about dat person to whom she saw just a min ago.

ANNIE:Mr. Killawala hum baki bate baad me discuss karenge. Abhi aap apne sare workers ko ek sath buliye.

Both Romeo and Mr. Killawala r confused what she is talking about?

ROMEO intrupts:Annie sis what r u saying? Hum yaha fabric dekhne aaye hai na ki workers.

ANNIE:Romeo pls jo main keh rai hu wo karo. Mr. Killawala aap pls abhi k abi apne sare workers ko bulwaiye,mujhe unse baat karni
hai.

Seeing no choice he agreed wid her demand. He summoned all d workers. He introdused Annie to his workers. All workers r confused.

ANNIE:dekiye main kisi ko dhoond rai hu,jise maine subah abi thodi der pehle parking area me dekha tha.so pls co operate wid me. Tell me yaha aise kitne workers hai jinke pas bike hai ya jo kisi k sath aaj bike pe aaye hai. Un workers ko chhodkar baki sab apne kaam pe laut jae. 50 workers stayed all others left. She enquired more. 40 more workers left. Only 10 remained. Annie asked their details. All 10 gave. Out of 3 match up with her requirments.

ANNIE:Mr. Killawala in 3 workers ki full details mujhe chahiye. Romeo still in confusion what exactly she wants to do. But he decide to keep quite nd wait 4 the rite time.

KILAWALA:ok miss Anvesha aap mujhe 10 min dijiye main puri detail nikalwata hu.

He gave hr all details regarding dat 3 workers.

ANNIE:Romeo abi time nahi hai tum ek kaam karo ye meeting tum kar lo mujhe bahut zaruri kaam yaad aa gaya hai. I need to go.

Annie left from dere. Romeo apolozise for the inconvience and go wid Mr. Killawala to attend d meeting. Annie straight go to the private dectative. She gave him all details and one pic.

ANNIE:ye insaan in 3 jagaho me se kahi pe bhi ho sakta hai. Mujhe is admi se judi har information chahiye.

DECTATIVE:dont worry mam apka kaam ho jayega.

ANNIE:good.

She gave him a chekque. Nd went to her office. In her cabin she only thinks about morning incident.
Annie thought( aise kaise ho sakta hai. Kya wakiye me jo maine dekha wo sach tha ya sirf mera weham. O god pls meri help karo.) whole day she only think about dat man. She saw him in her thoughts again and again. Seven
days passed to dat incident. Today Annie came early in d office.

ANNIE: Tasha... Tasha.

She summoned her secratory. Tasha came inside d cabin.

TASHA:yes mam.

ANNIE:ek baat batao main tumhari secratory hu ya tum meri?

TASHA:mam aap.

ANNIE:whattt?

TASHA:mam mera matlab hai ki aap mam hai or main apki secratory hu.

ANNIE:to mujhe meri appointments ke bare mein kon batayega?

TASHA:silly me,main bataungi mam.

ANNIE:to batao jaldi.

TASHA:oh yes silly me.
(She gave her all details of her today's shedule) mam ye ek parcel bhi aaya hai aapke liye pata nahi kaha se. Confidential tha isliye
maine khola nahi.

ANNIE:theek hai main dekh lungi. Tum jao.
TASHA left from there...
guys finally i updated 3 parts altogether show me ur love for this ff ...give me likes and comments if i get 50 likes till tomorrow i will try to give 2 more updates tomorrow which will clear ur alll doubts...i m sure u want to know where maan is...😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
awesome part dear

just loved it

maan's intry is supr

what happen in past

cont soon

thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Why r dadi n geet in this state ,loved annie...
Waiting to know about maan...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
mindblowing updates dear, just loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
yeh karan toh kuch tedha hi lagta hain...

annie ye kya dream dekh rahin hain????
kis wajah se dadima aur geet ki yeh halat hui hain???

yeh annie ne aisa kya dekha hain and what is in the parcel that she got???

and very important question...maan kahan hain???

oho sab question hi questions hain...jaldi next update dedo...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47


Love it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
very interesting story. liked all the parts. waiting for more. please continue !
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
ok.. so tht accident involved maan. nd nw by chance aanie saw him. iks tht r8?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Interesting concept. Please update soon.

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