FF-Obsession,chapter29 and next thread-pg150,7oct.

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

part 2
whoa i dunno why and how i read this without any emotions even after knowing Maan is married to Pari...
maybe seeing it with the clinical eyes and emotions...
my God the way the met and Maan expressed his love for her is really unique...
and he said the love story so mechanically...
whats wrong with him?
sigh wish to see Maan and Geet together...
cont soon dear...

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

did pari talk abt her doubt with maan?'
like y he s not excited or happy after hearing the pregnancy news..!!
seems like maan s a person who never expresses his emotions..

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

this geets deeper and more interetsing...

Maan was stalking pari and married her by confessing his love via sucide attempt...and now denial of pregnancy...hmmm

If it is obsession, then obsession with what. he doesn't seem possesive and he is definately a very factual person. But then does a factual person try to commit sucide...i wonder.

There is more to the layers of all the characters i feel...good going dear

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

wow interesting...thank u for the PM...continue soon

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

nice part..w8ing 4 maneets moments

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Romenas

@Oblivion007

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

a sense of mystery is everywhere in the story,it feels like all the piece of a broken jar is there yet u can't put it in the right way!!can't understand,hope it'll get clearer with the next parts intime.
thanks for the pm:-)

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RaDMG25

@RaDMG25

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: palindrome

First of all thanks for liking the start of the story..I am glad you are looking for different version of "maaneet"..😊
Coming to this PM thing..let me tell you..I am noob here{ok i am few weeks old here}..Very recently i have assumed that PM means personal message{correct me if i am wrong}
..Many people have asked me for this pm thing before too..Now i am little confused about whom should i pm??{only those who have asked for it or everyone i know}what should I pm??..Do i have to pm "entire chapter" or should i pm that i have updated my story...
Kindly help..I will highly appreciate that..😆

bless you too funny glad you figured it out though and thanks for the PM 😉

will read the update and come back to comment on it 😊

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RaDMG25

@RaDMG25

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

ok so me back after reading the update...

maan a stalker of pari and she married him without even knowing his name at the time of her engagement...now he is changing and not even reponsive to her being pregnant no wonder geet was bought in he sure needs it and pari as well i think...

great update looking forward to the next part 😊