NEW SS-MOTHER OF HIS CHILD-Last update/pg75

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#501

Originally posted by: AAKMH2

Hope u like 😳

Enjoy reading 😉

waiting for Long wala comment dn 😛

of course

I love your writing 😃

I am Avi btw 😃

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#502

Part 1-3

Somehow I can't stop reading. It is very engrossing

Geet and Maan are victims in a trap for wealth

I love the scenes you create

be it him asking for forgivenes

her hiding the socks she is knitting

or the pallu and the watch

Stepmother is evil

off to read more 😃

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#503

ch 4

ha Ha

lemon ke liye kitna daudaya😆

book ka confusion cute tha

kaun se important guests hai jisse milwana hai?

aisse precaps? issh!

off to next

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#504

Daadi aa gayi😃

seema is such a ^%##%%

Maan is trying to keep her smiling

aap sote hue kaise nahte ho😆

pehle kabhi nahi socha ye, ab sochugi bath lete😆

lovely

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#505

new character Saleel for Purvi

cute friendship between Purvi and Geet

all of them driving Maan crazy😆

loving it

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#506

awww!

I loved the baby toy

choti si baato ki khushi kitni cute lagti hai

loved it

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#507

The snake gave me shivers!

how cruel and mean

lift scene was cute.. aisse claustrophobia ka ilaaj karte sabhi dr to kya kehne😆

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Madhuri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#508

Lovely story..Loved the emotions you described of maaneet innocent love.. I liked geet here most...You write very well...your style of writing hooked me to read it in one go.

Thnx for this story

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Mahi-Mahak

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Posted: 10 years ago

#509

Originally posted by: Madhuri53
Lovely story..Loved the emotions you described of maaneet innocent love.. I liked geet here most...You write very well...your style of writing hooked me to read it in one go.
Thnx for this story

thank u so much dear...glad u like.

Ur words mean alot to me

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Mahi-Mahak

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Posted: 10 years ago

#510

Originally posted by: dqno1
The snake gave me shivers!
how cruel and mean

lift scene was cute.. aisse claustrophobia ka ilaaj karte sabhi dr to kya kehne😆

forgt to.comment on nxt chappy...

Ya pdhna chod dya 😛