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Mahi-Mahak

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Posted: 11 years ago

#471

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

such a lovely story and wonderful ending too...but, would have loved if its extended too...!! going to miss it alot !! do write more...

thank u dwar

glad u like

will sure

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Mahi-Mahak

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Posted: 11 years ago

#472

Originally posted by: ammu5
awesome finish...loved this ff very much...will b missing ...waiting for da new one frm u...

thank u dear

glad u like

will sure

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nishnal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#473

Aweeew so so well described story ya it made me cry I read the last parts for 4 tyms kya bolu itna acha laga dil nai Bhara

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Mahi-Mahak

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Posted: 11 years ago

#474

Originally posted by: nishnal
Aweeew so so well described story ya it made me cry I read the last parts for 4 tyms kya bolu itna acha laga dil nai Bhara

thank u so much dear for ur appraisel

glad u enjoy it dt much

realy realy mean alot to me

thanks for reading

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mahi_gurmeet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#475

totally outstanding ss wrriten by u,dear.i loved it completely.how beautifully u describd all maan-geet's emotions. . . WOWWW.me flattend by ur writing.this ss has becum my one of fav maaneet story till nw.thnx for gving us such amazing work,dear.plzz do sent me pm whenever u start any new story line.take care

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Mahi-Mahak

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Posted: 11 years ago

#476

Originally posted by: mahi_gurmeet
totally outstanding ss wrriten by u,dear.i loved it completely.how beautifully u describd all maan-geet's emotions. . . WOWWW.me flattend by ur writing.this ss has becum my one of fav maaneet story till nw.thnx for gving us such amazing work,dear.plzz do sent me pm whenever u start any new story line.take care

thank u so much dear for such lovely feedback 😳

m so glad u like it dt much

hope u like my other work too

will surely pm..

thanks for reading

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mahi_gurmeet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#477

my pleasure...dear.u'r a amazing writer.god bless 😃

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Mahi-Mahak

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Posted: 11 years ago

#478

Originally posted by: mahi_gurmeet
my pleasure...dear.u'r a amazing writer.god bless 😃

thanks once again.
we both share da same name :D
do check

Complete SS of 5 parts-Mein tenu samjhavaa kii

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3780648

and

SS-Ek ladki Bheegi Bhagi sii

hope u like it.thank u so much for reading.waiting for ur feedaback

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3916721 🤗

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punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#479

MAHI LOVELY STORY AND A PERFECT END

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Nivedithachand

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Posted: 11 years ago

#480

Awesome ss !! Your writing style is beautiful & captivating !! I took more than necessary time to finish reading the whole story in one go , as i enjoyed each & every word taking all the time in this world !! Loved Maaneet's different characterization !!! 😳 It was a emotional story with the right amount of emotions that seeped in & lingered pleasantly throughout the story !!! Geet was really cute with her innocence & i laughed my heart out thinking how much Maan would have been embarrassed when she asked him & let him know that she knows the meaning of "idiot , stupid , fatty , horrible ,etc" now !! 😆 Loved it !! Hoping to more beautiful works on Maaneet from u !!