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sweetysaran

@sweetysaran

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#651

loved it...

awesome update...

maan and geet at disc... so nice that too meeting maan's friends...

geet wearing two dress... so nice...

nicely written...

waiting for the next update

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362035

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#652

wow simply awesoome upd.
loved it...superb...
cont.soon...

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Rituja

@mishtiritu

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#653

Wow Doll... U have written superb...!!!

Hayeee Maan to must be in sweet shock after seeing geet... 😆

And The way he became possessive... Geet must be surely enjoying it...

Night abhi baki hai... Dance abhi baki hai...

Waiting for next...

Lovely update...!!!!

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JaneRochester

@JaneRochester

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#654

Hi Ritzy... this is only my 2nd comment on your FF.. but 've been following the story quite religiously..and what i am going to say might hurt you.. but i just have to say it.. btw i do try to follow the policy " IF YOU DON'T HAVE ANYTHING GOOD TO SAY PLS KEEP THE GOB SHUT".. but am making an exception in this case 😭.. so sorry.. sorry to Ash (who wrote this update)as well... btw i do follow her stories as well religiously.. nd am a great fan of her writing style as well..

here i go.. see you both of you are amazing writers, but your writing styles are different.. starting from the font to the spacing between the lines to the words to the sentences .. every thing matters.. so this update sort of was affecting the flow of the story - FOR ME. Please, my fellow readers don't come after me with gaalis... this is just my POV... and i had to convey it.. so am not pressing the LIKE button for this update. thanks a ton for the lovely story Ritzy. Aplogies if you are not able to digest this POV

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#655

to both the dearies , ritzy and ash...

thanx for such a lovely update... so becoz of geet, maan is socializing with his old friends... good going ... loved geets idea of a short skirt under a wrap around!!! daadima ko bura bhi nahi lagne diya but went to the disc with her hot hubby as a true hot chic!!!

loved jealous maans hold on geet!!!!😉 and was also checking out his own wife!!!
they seems to be attaining expertise in reading each others mind! wanna see now maan finally dancing with geet...

thanx for such a refreshing part...hope to get the next part soon...

Edited by -lakshmi- - 13 years ago

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ammu5

@ammu5

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#656

ash, dat was simply superb dear. loved geets respect towards dadi.

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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#657

she is a charmer just like maan...she is just awesome...maan J n m loving it...lets c d night is yet to end

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Nivedithachand

@Nivedithachand

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#658

Ash.. Wow... i saw a very different Maaneet today with a tinge of naughtiness in whatever they do !!!! Just loved it !!

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#659

BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Amazing
Wow MSK in disc. Geet can make Him
do all this. Calling up frnds nGet together.
She enthusiastically is Involved in his social
life.

Geet wants to wear a short dress. She is al
Ready wid her preparation. Bas mano Maan
Ko haan bolne ki hi der thi.

Maan once again bowled by his wifey cutey.
The dress she wore was affecting him so much
N also the way she carried herself talking to his
Frnds.

Maan a bit J. I loved his hold on her.
Geet going to dance wid his frnds. Usse
Farak nahi parta.

Good work Ash. U r really gud in writing
The party parts.

Continue soon.