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maanluver

@maanluver

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#631

amazing update

maan at the disc n all awesum

maanz frndz r so nyc

now maan understands geet well n even voices it out

update soon

waiting eagerly

Edited by maanluver - 12 years ago

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rsusmita

@rsusmita

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#632

just wonderful update
just loved the way geet made surprises to maan
now want to see geet maan dancing
but one doubt maan babu ko jealosy nahi ayi kya baat hai 😉

Edited by rsusmita - 12 years ago

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#633

wow lovely update dear...oh god geet , really me like my maan opening my mouth to big 'O'...maan was admiring and feeling jealous with his friends...i love all te scenes so much...waiting for geet to rock te dance floor.and my maan too

Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago

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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#634

😉awesome update

loved it

wow geet in her usual self maan surprised 😉

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#635

oh ho ho...geet wearing short skirt beneath d wrap-a-ron...kya dimag paya hai geet ne...wow...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#636

superb update

s0 geet slowly making maan to be wat he was

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#637

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wht do i say now di????
really short of words!!! imagining the scene was my crazy thought...putting it solidly was entirely your idea dii!!! thank u sho much for the update...well to be honest..me actually felt embarassed to read my own update..

but with your words u have actually made it all the more beautiful di... all credits to you!!! vivah has been very close to my heart since the day u had just mentioned the concept!!! so writing for it was actually a very tough challenge for me.. because we belong to different genre di..and for that matter it was very very very difficult for me to get into the feel of this ff...

even at some point i was like- pata nahi kisi ko acha lagega ya nahi..ur writing style is so different than mine...whether i'd be able to justify the characters and maintain the standards and pace of the story as u have done!!!!

me glad that u liked it di..thats really a big thing for me and thats enough too! if i had comment on this part..i'd exclude my parts and do the same...
update was awesum..esply the way geet was concious over her looks and that jacket thing..clever girl han!!!!!! girls..do learn sumthing from her lol
continue super soon

Edited by kawaii_geet - 12 years ago