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Posted: 12 years ago

Loved it ash and ritzy

Awesome one .maan was admiring geet and feeling jealous with his friends And the they way he hold her waist , katilana andaz 😳 And geet superb yaar idea ki koi kami nahi ,wrap over ke andar shorts skirt . way to go my girl . 😊
After reading the update i could only imagine this song with maaneet . Geet grooving on d floor and my dear Maan mesmerizing her .
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mcaVtOHBBLo[/YOUTUBE]
Jogi nachle ..
Rang rachde ..
Jogi nachle ..
Rang rachde ..
Lehraake balkhake tu, duniya bhula ke naach
Dhun ko ae gunguna le, gaane tu gaa ke naach
Rangeeleon mein to kho ja, pee ke peela ke naach
Matt bhare naino se tu, naina mila ke naach
Uff teri adaa, I like the way you move
Uff tera badan, I like to see you groove
Uff teri nazar, it says I wanna dance with you
Uff teri adaa, I like the way you move
Uff tera badan, I like to see you groove
Uff teri nazar, it says I wanna dance with you

Sun le sahiba ..
Tu hai ik nasha ..
Hosh hai mera ..
Saara kho gaya ..

Hosh gawa deewane, hosh gawa ke naach
Paas tu aa deewane, paas tu aake naach
Dil mein hai armaan jitne, saare jaga ke naach
Tann mein badan mein jaise aag laga ke naach
Uff teri adaa, I like the way you move
Uff tera badan, I like to see you groove
Uff teri nazar, it says I wanna dance with you
Uff teri adaa, I like the way you move
Uff tera badan, I like to see you groove
Uff teri nazar, it says I wanna dance with you
Dekh ke bhi nahi ho yakeen
Itni kyun hai btaa tu haseen
Tere husn se zindagi haseen
Tere husn ke aagey koi haseena kujh bhi nahi
Aankhon mein mere saare sapne saja ke naach
Mujhko tu dil mein rakh le, dil ko dhalka ke naach
Pyaar agar hai mujhse, pyaar jaga ke naach
Jaan o dil hai jo teri, mujhpe luta ke naach
Uff teri adaa, I like the way you move
Uff tera badan, I like to see you groove
Uff teri nazar, it says I wanna dance with you
Uff teri adaa, I like the way you move
Uff tera badan, I like to see you groove
Uff teri nazar, it says I wanna dance with you


Ash , U virtually took me to d disc and me now enjoying Maaneet .continue soon.
Edited by hermoso - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update SO maaneet in Disc ...Geet and her ideas poor maan had tough time to control ...
waiting for next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update dear...
geet asked maan to contact his friends...aww so sweet of her...
so now they are meeting in a disc...that is so nice...
oh...toh geet ne apni dress ke neeche hawt dress pehna tha...hmmm
maan is so smitten on geet that he is not ready to leave her even when she is talking with his friends...☺️☺️☺️
ab geet dance floor pe akele gayi hain toh maan ko aana hi padega...
will wait for the night to continue...update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update
geet sexoness will be death for maa.
Short skirt
omg
nd maan feeling j
want to see maaneet passionate dance
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part dear

wow geet is such a lovely person

cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maaneet 4 disco.Cool.Geet is glaorous.No wonder.Waiting 2 read Maaneet disco in d next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Good work Ritzy di and Ash..
Geet s an epitome of simplicity,innocence,brilliance..
she noes wat to wear wat and wen to speak and hw to socialize..
Each and every day maan s getting to c a diff geet..
and b/c of that we get to c a diff maan..
Maan s smitten by his hot and sexy geet..
i hope they will rock the dance floor...
Also i want to c a bike race...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ok Guys, I know some may be shocked...I am commenting on my own thread...LOL...
but what to do...Ash has written such a beautiful part so I have to comment na...
Ash, thank you sweety for such a beautiful update. I still remember when you had PMd me about writing a disc part...First I was overwhelemed that someone loves this story and feels for it so much. Then excited and I remember how we chatted where we should place this. I know you had to wait a long but kya karron situation was not at all conducive earlier...
Now to the actual update...smoking hot. I just fell in love with the dress...that was like wow, I could so see her and visualise her grooving to a song wearing that. Next the way Maan asks her what she wants and her response. Last but the best part was all the excitement, hints of possesiveness, aweness and even little bit of jealousy as he sees her walk away. It was sexy and awesome. Just heated the whole update and was way better then he going with her immediately.
Next, how could you think it will not gel...see after typing it up I don't know virtualyl what bits I edited...LOL. It just merged perfectely...you were nervous ainwayin...
Lastly, I hope your granddad gets well soon yaar...sorry to hear about that. Upar se meri princess akele ghar sambhal rahi hai. Take care honey and I pray for the best
Love you lots and lots - Ritzy
Edited by ritzy09 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...
geet made maan contact his frnds wow...
geets dress... nice😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

superb want big update next time

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