~FLAMES OF LOVE~MG(PART3-PG13) - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Vry interestng.

Plz giv charctr sketch.

So maan is big time flirt...
Hamesha aisa q hota hai? Maan "sataa-savitra" nahi ho skta geet ki tarah...

Plz conti n we dont mind reading new ffs on maaneet
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Awesome Update
Loved it
Maan s so arrogant yarr
On the ohter side Geet s totally fida on him
looking foward...continue soon
thank u for Pm




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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
AMAZING SART!!!!!!
Loved it a lotzzz :-)
continue soon...
thankz for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
part 1
nice part...
Maan is so egoistic...
and Geet is a fida fan of Maan...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
awesome

add me to PM list
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Fabulous start
Loved the way it started
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
The first bit was good, enjoyed reading it
Update soon
Edited by x-affy-x - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Awsum luvd da start plzz cont soon x
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART-2

"welcome sweetheart"

"hey maan"

"have a seat young lady"

"thanks"

he rose from his sofa and reached the bar near by

"so which wine you will prefer"

"any of your choice maanu"

"at your service ma'am"

he gave her the drink, she was feeling dizzy and wine was taking over her

she came closer to him

"you are so handsome maan, you are the only man who can make sameera mad and fall, i love you, i love your style"

"see, i want to make it clear, i don love you, you are just a time pass"

but she was so lost due to the effect of wine, that she hardly hear anything, he took her lips in his and passion took over them

after an hour they woke up, sameera was now out of intoxication and saw maan no where

she rose from bed and started searching for him

"maan"

"maan"

she came across the old servant

"where is your sir"

"he is in gym"

"ok"

and started moving towards the gym, when she heard

"ma'am no one is allowed in the gym"

"you just shut your mouth, you don't know who i am, i am sameera"

she reached the gym area and saw maan exercising , she again started drooling over him

maan heard the sound


"who is there"

"me maan" sameera said while coming towards him

"what are you doing here" said in anger

"just came to see you"

"oh just shut up, i told you, you are a timepass , now just get out"

"no maan, you can't do this to me, i am sameera, you can't dumped me"

"ch ch ch, i have dumped you miss sameera, now go away"

"you are playing with fire maan, now you will burn your hand"

"oh i am scared"

"just wait and watch"

and left maan's house

"nakul nakul"

"ji maan sir"

"i told you, no one is allowed here, than what was she doing here"

"sir, i tried to stop but she..."

"it seems you haven't tried hard"

"sorry sir"

"last chance to you nakul, because i trust you...you know maan singh khurana doesn't give secong chance and hate mistake, find yourself lucky"

and went away

...

"dee plz"


"no, not at all geetu"

"dee plz plz, i promise eska baad, i will not ask anything"

"i said no na, than why can't you understand"

"plzz dee"

"no no"

rano entered the room

"take her with you na meera"

"maa i am going there to work, and you are giving me a child's responsibility"

"i am not a child"

"beta dekh esa kitna mann hain tera saath mumbai jaane ka, take her na"

"ya plzz ddee"

"ok, ap dono se koi jeeth paya hain, but at one condition"

"what?"

"geetu you will follow all my orders"

"ok" and she ran started packing, with the dream of meeting her prince charming maan singh khurana

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 12 years ago

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