~FLAMES OF LOVE~MG(PART3-PG13) - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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good start...new concept...plz add me to PM list...added u in buddy list...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
congo for new story

Superb concept
Loved it
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OH NO NO NO GEET GET AWAY FROM THAT HILL PLS GIRL DO NOT JUMP I REPEAT DO NOT JUMP
SOUNDS INTERESTING
SO THEY WERE TOGETHER NOW MAAN IS MARRYING SOMEONE ELSE BUT SHE IS STILL WAITING FOR HIM
WILL IT BE TOO LATE FOR MAAN TO STOP GEET OR WILL SOMEONE ELSE SAV HER
WONDER WHAT YOU HAVE IN MIND FOR THIS
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART-1

"i love you"

"please don't say this is a dream"

"no, it is not a dream, be mine sweet heart"

"i will love to"

and they hugged each other and their FACE was very near to each other

when they heard

"cut"

and they broke apart, director reached them and shake their hands

" well done mr maan and miss sameera"

"whatever maan singh khurana does is always best"

" meet you on the opening mr director"

and moved away , leaving drooling sameera and serious director behind

maan moved towards his room, when he heard

"sir, mind blowing"

"i know adi, i am maan singh khuarna , the maan singh khurana"

"i know sir, sir your coffee is ready"

"good and my news paper"

"on the table sir"

"hope no mistake is there"

" no sir, the whole room is set up as per your taste"

"hmm, good, now let's going, i hate to waste time, my card should reach miss sameera" and smriked

" sure sir"

and he put his goggles on

he sat in his BMW AND left the studio, as the door opened the media and fans crowded him, girls were going gaga over him, but no effect on him, soon the crowd was pushed back and the car went away...

...

"i love you i love you, wil you marry me"

a girl smiled and said

"i love you to, you are my prince charming, yes yes, i will love to be yours.."

"sonia sona, say something..."

and dialogue continued on the tv continued...

another girl came and hit the girl on her head lightly

"tu pagal jaise acting kab band kare gi"

"arre di mein kya kiya"

"tune kya kiya, you are acting like mad, whole day you watch movie of this larkibazz maan singh khurana and then you became that heroine and say stupid dialogue "

" di apko jo bhi khena hain mujhse kaho, don't bring my maan in this, and this is not dialogue but my dream with my maan hayee"

" kya karun mein eis pagal ke"

"kya di"

"geetu , agar kisine tujhe ye sab karta hum dekh liya tho, log kya samjhen ga "

"samjhe na do jo samjhe na hain, mein apne maan ki diwaani huin"

"i am only stupid jo tujhe samjhe ne ki kosish kar rahi huin"

"diii"

a women entered the room with pile of cloths

"ab kya kiya eis jhalli ne meera"

"kya karein gi maa, fir usse gadhe star ke peecha apna time waste kar rahi hain"

"tum dodno bhi na, meera voh bachi hain, akal aye gi usse"

"hain hain mein he tho pagal huin, baki sab tho genius hain"

and left the room angrily , while geet made a baby face

"koi nahi bacha, dee ke gussa jaldi he gayab ho gaye ga, chalo you also go and study"

"ok maa"

and she also left the room , after doing a small drooling over maan's photo

"two behan ek dusra se ekdum alag hain, par ek dusra se unconditional pyaar karti hain"

and she arranged the cloths in wardrobe and went away...

...

hope you like it

please please tell me how its is??😕

me very nervous with this one..😕

do tell me about your views, waiting for replies...

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
SO WAS THAT REAL AS IN DID SHE REALLY TRY TO JUMP OR WAS IT PART OF SOME SHOW
SORRY YOU CONFUSED ME A BIT
SO HE IS A MOVIE STAR AND A BIG FLIRT BY LOOK OF THINGS
BUT HOW DID THEY MEET
OKAY DO CONTINUE SOON
THAT WAS GREAT
SEE YA SOON
CHEERS FOR PM

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Maan is bollywood actor and Geet is his fan...

waiting for next...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
start geet deewani of maan



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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
so maan s a casanova cum actor..
and geet totally fida!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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intresting start...looking forward to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Starting mein hi itna pain !!!!! But donno why i always have a liking 4 painfull lovestories but mind u not painfull endings.So keeping full trust on that u'll give us another love saga,i'm requesting u to continue.

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