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chhavi

@Shonameet

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: palindrome

Rainbow is beautifully described by you in context of this story.👏.Can I add it at the end of my chapter..???

Raelly?.. U liked it that much? And yes! u can add it...

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: sanu3108
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Ohh Emm Gee... like seriously ... to say that i am awed will be such an understatement of my condition right now ...

read all the parts in one go .. and that too @work 😉 ... kya karoon ur the story was way too addictive to leave in the middle ... ..

i seriously dont have words to explain wat a master piece u have written here ... the colors, symbolisms, emotions, charaterizations was perfect ... loved all the symbolisms but the chocolate and the pink star are my personal favourites ... emmm .. even orange ... red .. yellow .. purple ... errrmmm all are my favourites ... ok i know i sound like a lokko 😆 .. but i am unable to select a single thing ... the whole story was awesomely perfect ...

missy you are one hell of a talented writer .. mashallah kisi ki nazar na lagay

standing ovation for this master piece 👏

do write more on Maan Geet ...

love

Sana

Thank you thank you so much...for all the praise and standing ovation...😊 andThis is my first standing ovation..😆glad you enjoyed reading it...

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: Shonameet
The first thing i want to say for this story is--'ITS A BEAUTIFUL RAINBOW COLORD WITH DIFFRENT COLORS OF EMOTIONS/LIFE PAINTED ON THE CANVAS OF OUR HEARTS BY U.' @@ White is ultimate Acceptor, symbol of Peace n purity... For me-- white is also related to Angels n Fairys, who uses their magical powers n win over evils n negtivity... And also fullfil our wishes... Maaneets wish has been granted. @@ I have drawn the diagram of 'Prism' many time, even for my youger cousins... But never realise its true meaning. AS it shows that ray of white light provides indiviuality to seven differnt colors... I feel,in this 'white special' part all the colors have come back home, where they truly belong. @@ This part has every color-- blue wall, yellow sun flower, red shirt, green rose, pink star with maans pink, choclate brown eyes, purple orchids n orange saree. Mentioning of each color...brought back all the memorise. @ Maaneets relationship is beautiful like rainbow...and have all the qualitise of diffrent colors which makes it stronger. @ It was a memorable journey with maaneet adorned with various emotions/colors of life.,..ATLAST, AFTER THE HEAVY RAIN OF UNCERTIANTY, HELPLESNESS, FEAR N PAIN... THEY GOT THEIR RAINBOW... Soothing their HEARTS n SOULS.

I should make a separate post collecting all the wonderful lines from the comments you dropped on this story...

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: Shonameet
Raelly?.. U liked it that much? And yes! u can add it...

thanx..i will add in at the last😊

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disha

@Conqueror212

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

ooo emmm geee...
its sooo awesome... mindblowing... fab...👏
m just speechless...
loved it to the core...😊😊

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chhavi

@Shonameet

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

Thank u palindrom for making me a part of this beautiful journey. It means a lot to me...thank u so much!

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#117

Comemnt for part 8 w/o reading next part

Purple - Ahh!!! the colour which combines two opposite poles of a spectrum...two different horizons to meet one...the warm red meets cool blue...passionate red meeting calm blue to balance and create harmony...

just beautiful the way you decsribed it.

I also loved the way you hinted at a child's imagination. Child Geet image the world to be her rainbow or rainbow to be her world. So she painted the world just like a rainbow or painted world inside a rainbow...I wonder how a child imagines the world...or how a child imagines a rainbow...

awesome...

btw you asked for link to my FFs.

Completed - Till Death Do Us Part - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1665520/maaneet-ff-till-death-do-us-part-thread-1

Ongoing - Vivah - (The one where Geet sia painter) - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/51581068

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meettu

@meettu

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#118

Beautifull ss
seriously how geet never take her blindness as her neg point
nd masn always dere for her
beautifull simple nd etc etc ss
great
loved i

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#119

absolutely loved the ending...

I kind of guesses last color woll be white as all colours merge to amke color white and you were absolutely sensational with the way you explained it...

A prism of life, absorbing white colour and for once showing it's true compoennets by splitting it into a rainbow...White which can absorb any color...

I am kind a sad though that this journey came to end and that too so shortly after I had discovered this SS. I know it was not a long one but still. But this sadness can not take away the fact that it was a masterpience...a gem and something truly creative...

I wish and hope you get some more inspiration and write another piece for us. Please do think about it as we will eb eagerly waiitng to go on another journey with you. Also, please do PM em if you start another story...

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Jaggy

@--Fairy--

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#120

First thank to Ritz for link of this master otherwise I missed something big ..I read all parts in one Go Awesome , wonderful perfect are small words to praise this SS

All I loved the way explain each colour of rainbow and White but meh favorite one chocolate though its my favorite but never thing in this way ..Loved it from core of heart ...