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Posted: 12 years ago
i just finsihed aLL the parts
and must say u have dOne a fab jOB
the way u expained all the cOLOrs was just superb
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: palindrome


First of all white is my favorite color too...When white comes infront of my eyes,i forget every color around me..Thats why i saved my favorite one for the end...
May be science and life aren't too different from each other..
Yes they are not different..Science is just studying life..and according to me people with science stream have a thing for poetry and literature,,May be it makes them little human from "homosapiens.."..I would like to share something with you..Each chapter in my Biochemistry book starts with a quote that is somehow related to the content of the chapter but has no relation with the term "science"..One of the chapter had "Robert Frost" quote at its starting...How come biochemist writer of the book chose a Robert frost's poetry to initiate the chapter..I was quite surprised...
Girl, you made me grin now. Recently I read an article where the author said we don't need engineers to be our CEOs, in stead a literature student or philosophy student, in fact any art students would make a better CEO because despite not being technology geeks, they are good at handling a company and all that. I always wonder why engineers are looked down. Rofl, not precisely but yes due to the attention they get, people argue that they don't need to get any attention at all. You get the point that I am an engineer😆
So, anyway now reading your words made me smile, because there is something positive about science students for the first time. God, I can't be more happy😆

Geet wanting to experience the moment alone, Maan not being there, may be slightly worried, and slightly anxious about the result..
yes he was..very worried and anxious..you got that right...
.We all need to face our problems alone, it is good to have our loved ones there for us, but it would be even more beautiful if we learn through our mistakes, and our loved ones being there behind us, like a shadow, being there for us when we need them.
perfectly said..thats why i call you treasure of the words...
Rofl. I didn't reply to your previous comment when you mentioned that I don't know what to say to that except that I disagree. I am not someone good at words, I suck at expression. Could you believe when I say I can't make people better, because I don't know what to say at times of distress😆
Yes, I wouldn't have minded even if the end was otherwise because in the process of making each other strong and loved, they had come closer and they would have lived their lives even if otherwise.
I would have mind that..I love happy endings,,,and day i wrote blue,its end was decided..She would get her eyes back,,,,,
Thank YOU so so so so sooo much for reading it,liking it,appreciating it..and dropping comments on it..As i always say..You are an awesome reader {and writer too...}😊

Well, I like happy endings, but I don't have a grudge against tragedies. There are times when I have searched for tear jerkers to read. 😆 If the end is justified, I don't bother but i get irritated if it is made tragedy just for the heck of it. But yes, since there is a lot of tragedy in real life already, it is good to have happy endings in fiction. You need not thank me, really, this story taught me few valuable things, made me smile, pinched my heart, and over all made me grow. Yes, I would like to take the cake of being a good reader😆 but the credit would surely belong to someone else who made me fall in love with this piece of work. Guess who it is🤗


Edited by Cloud9. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
edited my comments on page 15 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
all d parts of ss wre awsome bt i loved ur description of white most
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Posted: 12 years ago
last part
finally Geet got her eyesight...
and Maan is so happy...
epilogue
so lovely...

i LOVE happy ending dear...
and thank u so much for this SS...
loved this so much...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow loved it d way u explained ur imaginations on colours wasawesome especially i liked d last part n ofcourse d epilogue tooo
Edited by mounacuty - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
tht was a mind blowing ss
d way u described each color n its significance!!
loved it!!
u were simply brilliant!!👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Rainbow is a beautiful wonder of nature. And maaneets rainbow is as wonderful as it. @@ maaneets RAINBOW in my view:- @ R-- restlesness coz of uncertainty of wat lay ahead in future. @ A-- accepting life the way it is...kabhi dhoop kabhi chhanw. @ I-- incredible luv of maaneet. @ N-- naughtiness to cheer ur luv in the toughest phase of life..to bring smile on their face. @ B-- birth to new hope as a ray of light guiding ur path through consuming darkness. @ O-- optimisum to see the better side, that all will be well. @ W-- wishes granted... Wetting their eyes with happy tears nd worming their souls with Gods blessings.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shonameet

Rainbow is a beautiful wonder of nature. And maaneets rainbow is as wonderful as it. @@ maaneets RAINBOW in my view:- @ R-- restlesness coz of uncertainty of wat lay ahead in future. @ A-- accepting life the way it is...kabhi dhoop kabhi chhanw. @ I-- incredible luv of maaneet. @ N-- naughtiness to cheer ur luv in the toughest phase of life..to bring smile on their face. @ B-- birth to new hope as a ray of light guiding ur path through consuming darkness. @ O-- optimisum to see the better side, that all will be well. @ W-- wishes granted... Wetting their eyes with happy tears nd worming their souls with Gods blessings.


Rainbow is beautifully described by you in context of this story.👏.Can I add it at the end of my chapter..???
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Posted: 12 years ago

So, anyway now reading your words made me smile, because there is something positive about science students for the first time. God, I can't be more happy..
I also belong to science stream..and all science students rock!!!!!😆😆

I am not someone good at words, I suck at expression.
oh really..thats why you had to stop yourself at one point while writing maan's monologue in your story..😕you are too good at expression..People loved metaphors i used in my story..well reason behind it is that i can't express maaneet's feeling the way you do...thats why i depend on metaphors..I wish i could be as expressive as you...I bet you can write that part much better than me where geet sees maan for first time after getting her eye sight back...😊

Could you believe when I say I can't make people better, because I don't know what to say at times of distress..
It can be true..may be you don't to know what to say to make someone feel better..But no one other than you can describe better in words what that particular person is feeling at that moment...😛
but the credit would surely belong to someone else who made me fall in love with this piece of work. Guess who it is..
who?????


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