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part-32

Taking her in his embrace while she was smiling in her faint state too, feeling maan's presence near her''she doesn't know it's her illusion or reality'.. maan took her in his embrace holding her tight near his heart, doesn't why he did this'' everyone surrounded her, worrying for her'.

Maan-geet'. Geet open your eyes while patting her cheeks but she was too weak'

Geet-ummm'.. she slightly moaned in pain, she was feeling dizziness and blackness in front of her eyes'..

Maan- someone pls get me the water'.. maan shouted again patting her cheeks while holding her tight'. Both are on the floor while she was in his lap'.. it was 12 am' midnight, Krishna was born exact at 12, annie gave water to maan, while he made her drink water, she somehow take 2-3 sips'. She doesn't know where is she?

Vedanta pulled annie's dupatta' she looked down at him' he was worried seeing his mum like this'

Ved-what happen to mum? He asked'. He was on the verge of cry seeing her like this'..

Annie-nothing'. She was feeling sleepy'. So she slept'..

Ved-ohhkk'..i want to go home'. He demanded'..

Annie-ok baba'. We'll go now'.. he smiled at her'.

Annie-bro, I think we should go home'..

Dadi-haan maan' let's leave from here'.. he nodded and lift geet in his arms while she relax in his arms..' Rey and ash smiled seeing the love birds but no one knows about the truth except the family'.. they all headed towards their cars , geet was in maan's arms, all are following him'.. maan made her relax on back seat, dadi sat beside her taking her head in her lap, maan in front while driver drives the car'.. annie went towards arjun who stood there silent'.. he badly wants to go near geet but seeing her in maan's arms'. He felt relax' no worries at all'..he knew that she will be fine with maan' at last he is her husband who she loves the most'..

Annie-let's go arjun'.

Arjun-no annie'. I'll go my home' you should leave now'

Annie-but?

Arjun-I'll be there tomorrow'. It's very late, it won't feel good if I go your house at this time'.

Annie-no' no' it will be fine'. He held her by her shoulder straight looking in her eyes'..

Arjun-annie'. Pls'.. she nodded while they hear coughing voice' she turned and found rey n ash there'..

Ash-won't you introduce us annie? She has the naughty grin on her face'.

Rey-yeah annie'. Geet bhabhi se to miley nahi atleast insey to introduce kara do'.

Annie-sorry guys'. I forgot'.he is Arjun, geet's best friend'.

Ash-and yours??? Asked raising her brows'.

Annie-mine.. she shied'''.. mine also friend'..

Ash n rey-ohh'..

Annie-arjun, they are my cousins'. She is ashlesha and he is reyhansh'. Trio shook their hands and took leave from there'' poor ash n rey, didn't get warm welcome'.. annie, ved, rey & ash left from there in one car'.. while maan reached at mansion'. He tired to lift geet but she denied'. She looked at him for a while in his eyes' she found something new but she ignored'.

Maan-geet, you are weak' let me lift you'. He asked in concern and worry too but she ignored' she doesn't want to break her promise which she did to him that she never show her face to him'.. she looked at dadi for help' she nodded'.

Dadi-maan, it's ok'''' she is fine now'. She can walk by herself'. He nodded because he knew he has no right to force her''''' He gave them space for come out from the car'.. they entered inside the mansion while maan shout nakul's name''''''

Maan-nakul, dinner ready karo'. Dadi looked back at him'.

Dadi-maan, you didn't had your dinner?

Maan-dadi maa, you forgot today is janmashtami'. How can I forget to keep fast today'. Dadi smiled knowing him well'. Everything happened between maan n geet, she knew that was wrong but she can't denied the fact that maan used to keep fast at janmashtami from so long'. And she is happy that today he kept fast'.. she knew she is angry from maan because of his decisions but she can't left him alone'. Geet straight went in her room for freshen up'. ''

Dadi-maan, go to ur room and freshen up till then I'll see about the dinner'. She was about to go saying so but maan stopped her holding her wirst'. Dadi stopped seeing maan holding her wrist'.. he was looking at dadi with pleading eyes'..

Dadi-maan, kya baat hai?

Maan-dadi maa, please don't ask anything'.. I want to talk to you something very important'.

Dadi-bete, batein baad mein kar lena, abhi dinner kar lo'. You might be hungry'. Aur geet ne bhi fast rakha tha so unka bhi kuch khana jaruri hai na'.. he nodded'..

Maan-dadi maa, aap geet ko dinner de dijiye' I am waiting in your room'.. she nodded and went in kitchen while maan went in dadi's room'.. maan was very restless'. Doesn't know how to tell dadi everything' he knew he was at fault' everything was at his fault'.. which happened with him, with geet, with Vedanta'.. everything''''''he was frustrated at himself''' he is regretting now for not listening dadi, for everything'''''. Because of him everyone suffered a lot''''..he sat there near the bed on the floor holding his head between his palms, he badly wants to take out his anger but not now, first he has to talk to dadi maa, he knew it will be hard for her'' but he has to convince her''''.. meanwhile annie,ved,rey & ash reached at mansion'''.

Ved-bua, I am hungry? He made a baby face looking down'..

Annie-aww'. Let's have dinner first'.. annie made him sit on the chair and serve him food'.. you eat this, we just coming back'. Ok..

Ved-ok'.

they straight went in geet's room, geet was came out from the washroom changing in her night dress'' track pants, vest and over the jacket''

Annie-geet, how are you now? Tumne to dara hi diya tha'.

Geet- I am fine annie' she looked at two new faces'. She doesn't who are they but they knew who is she''''..

Ash-hi bhabhi'''''..

Rey-hi bhabhi''''..

Geet-hi'. She said with a smile'.. sorry I didn't recognize you both''''. She made a sorry face'.

Ash-bhabhi, aap pehchanengi bhi kaise'.. hum aapki shaadi mein nai the na'. we are maan bhai's cousins'. Me ash oops' I mean ashlesha' you can call me ash'. And he is'.. but she cut off in mid by rey'''''

Rey-you Rj, let me introduce by myself'. Samjhi''''..hi bhabhi'. I am reyhansh'. You can call me rey in short' you know'..

Geet-nice to meet you'' annie, where is ved??

Annie-geet, he is having his dinner'.

Geet-ok'. Let's have dinner, it's already near to 1 am'.. they all about to go just then dadi came with food'..

Dadi-aa gaye tum dono'. Tum logo ne hamien bataya nahi ki tum aane wale ho'. Otherwise mai sab ready rakhti'.. she said all this resting the plates on the table' they touched her feet and hugged dadi'. Dadi blessed them and kissed their forehead''

Dadi-geet bte, have your dinner'.

Geet-dadi maa, aapne kyo takleef ki, I was about to come downstairs'..

Dadi-no, you'll take rest' and have your dinner here in your room'' geet nodded'. Dadi turned towards rey n ash'. Annie,rey & ash.. come dinner is ready'' trio nodded and leave from there''.. dadi straight way went in her room found maan sitting on the floor hiding his face in his palms, she got worried though she was angry with him but still she has some soft corner for him' at least he is her grand son'. She never saw maan like this'.. he was like his when he lost his parents' he was nearly at the verge of breaking''''.. that time maan used to sit like this far away somewhere in his room hiding his face from the world''kept himself aloof'.. today she is seeing the same maan, again he is sitting like that hiding his face in his palms, his knees hugging his chest''

dadi walked to him and sat beside him at the bed'. She slightly caressed his hairs, ruffling them'' maan raised his face looking at dadi'' his eyes were red due to anger, due to frustration, due to guilt, due to agony, animosity, he was regretting every moment except marrying with geet'.. she has a golden heart'. Today he realized'. He turned and hid his face in dadi's lap crying his heart out mumbling I am sorry dadi maa, I am sorry'.. please mujhe maaf kar dijiye'.

Dadi-kya hua maan? aap aise suddenly, kya hua aapko? She asked caressing his hairs'..

Maan-I am really very sorry dadi maa, please mujhe maaf kar dijiye' I know I am very bad person'. I don't deserve anything'.. dadi got worried'.he was sobbing like a child in front of dadi maa'.. She never saw maan breaking down like this'. He was very strong man, never flinch but today he is crying like this'.. she can't her maan like this'. She also had tears in her eyes seeing her grand son like this who was a rock but today behaving like he is wax'..

Dadi-maan, kya baat hai? Aap aise kyo ro rahe hai? Dekhiye hamein ghabrahat h rahi hai'.. she cupped his face in her palm and wiped his tears with her thumb , shaking her head in no telling him not to cry anymore'.. but he was no where to listen'. A fresh trail of tears come from his eyes wetting his cheeks'.

Maan-maine sabka dil dukhaya hai dadi maa, sabko bahut pareshaan kiya hai'''''.. that's why sameera ne mere sath itna bada khel khela, mujhe use kiya aur'''''. aur uski wajah se maine aap sabka dil dukhaya'''' I am very bad na dadi maa'. I hate myself dadi maa''''. He was behaving like a child in front of her'.. it was a fact that he was maan singh khurana who was like a rock, cold hearted man, but he has also a heart which is also feel pain, craving for love'''..

Dadi-aisa nahi kehte maan'' she shook her head in denial''

Maan-no, dadi maa'.. I am very bad person''''.really very bad''''.. I never gave happiness to anyone'''''..hamesha sirf hurt kiya hai'''' that's why everyone hates me today''''.that's why that sameera and viraaj wants to take revenge from me'''

Dadi-aap abhi bhi sameera ke liye ro rahe hai? She asked in confusion'. Maan at once looked at her shaking his head in denial'..

Maan- no, dadi maa'. She doesn't deserve this'. She is behind the bars'.. I am feeling very lonely today, I am very guilty for not listening you, everything happened because of me'' meri wajah se kya se kya ho gaya'.. meri wajah se you suffered a lot, meri wajah se annie suffered a lot aur geet'..she suffered the most'.. just because of my wrong decision'''I am not able to show my face to her'. Why dadi? Why me? He hugged her'' first mom & dad left me alone and when I felt love, he stopped'. And again raised his face'.. no dadi'. That was never love'. I was never in love'.. that was a mere infatuation'.. I was never in love'''''.

Dadi-sshh'. Maan'. Bahut hua'''. Now stop crying'''' you forgot you are msk'.. and msk doesn't cry like a child'.. she tried to lighten his mood''.she was trying to use his lines on him'' he used to said msk doesn't do this, msk doesn't do that''. etc'..etc''.

Maan-dadi, is msk not a human? Can't he show any emotion? Has he not any right to feel pain? Msk is that cold heart that he can't show any emotion, tell me dadi, is msk that rude, terror for anyone? Is msk has not any heart? Does msk has not any right to be-loved? To cry? Please reply me'' he again hid his face in her lap like he is hiding his face from the world''''. Though he is very strong person outside this mansion, a very rude, arrogant, heartless person but here he is only maan''''

Precap

Same &

I'll talk to her'' said dadi'.

No dadi maa'.. this time'I'll confront her'.. replied maan''.

Can anyone wants to give reply maan's questions which he was asking to dadi about himself'''. ???? I really wanted to know what you feel for maan in this ff at this phase''''''.abhi question to kar liya,,, answers kaun dega?????? Don't know'''.. well don't feel that the businessman msk is crying'' here I wanted to show his inner turmoil, I didn't wanted to show his guilt trip and his distance, his sulking time''''..

Ok, here is part-32'' don't get mad at me because not giving the precap''''. I thought this part is very needed'''' I want to show maan's breaking down'.. what he felt about himself''. I tried so hard to give precap but at last I failed'''..i always try that, this time I'll give part only with around 1500 words but everytime failed and reached to 2,000 words,'' hehehe'. I don't know why'''..

Ok, now tell me, who is here who hates my maan????? Now tell me, what are you feeling about this update..????? and don't worry''''everything will be fine'''''. And if any mistake will be there then pls ignore that'''..and I am not so good in emotional updates so pls tell me hows this one????

May be next one will be more emotional, little bit more as I'll show you geet n maan's conversation and geet's side''''''''. Hope you will like it'''''''.

Last but not the least''''.thanks a lot for 160+ likes''''' I am so so happy for the likes and comments'''''..love ya all

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Awesome Part maan regreting for his act in past

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wow lovely update...geet was not facing my maan..my maan cried to his dadi..yes msk means he cant cry, he dont hav heart, emotions, everyone why making a wall around him...i had tears in my eyes dear seeing my maan crying...i love te update so much dear...