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Posted: 12 years ago
Dadima is so adorable & as matriarch of family she is thinking of future generations but l think she at least shouldn't worry in this matter as Maaneet only needs clarified butter & their will be flames in their firey passion😆
Nice part
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved maan and daadi convo . Dev idea was very good , lets c how far they both suceed sending two telephteic der 😉nd party to abhi shuru < kya kya hoga waiting to c . continue soon sheesh .
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Posted: 12 years ago
Shasha should have the test of betrayal... she should know how does that feel.
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Posted: 12 years ago
telepathy 🤣
oh Daddi aap nahien pata maaneet kitne hot hai.
ooops even am shocked to see this ..i mean simple private party and somuch is hidden.
lovely update!
u rocked!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
planning karna khurana family ke blood me hai kya!!!!
dadi maan ,dev sab planning master nikle...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Raam, Sheesh, aapke fans ke haathon se marwaana chaahte ho kya? 😕 😆

I rarely rarely rarely comment anywhere on IF, especially of late and much less read comments since once caught in a web of comments it's an addiction often worse than the FF addiction itself 😆

That said, hmmm... my comment in itself was perhaps a complaint on an unconscious level (since it was typed pretty fast without giving it much thought), maybe since on a Maan-Geet story, dissociation from romance always seems an impossibility. The names Maan and Geet have risen to create a charisma and an image of their own and good writers here feel it's a baggage at times.

Still, my entire comment was a compliment, albeit a grudging one 😆.Having read countless FFs here, only two people so far have managed to totally hoodwink my anticipation of the plot, while still managing to sustain my interest- one's Devi and the other's you. In your case, often I am not even sure whether there's a plot
😆

Needless to say, your story is different, well planned out (like I just said, whether there's a plan or you are Maan in action with scraps of perceptions of reality thrown in to us mere mortals is another question... hehe, which is even more intriguing) and seems to have a destination I can't surmise.

It's so meticulately done, that I try as much to not think on your updates and just take it as a story since thinking will do me no good. As for the romance quotient... the way you have constructed the romance sort of puts me at loggerheads with myself.

At one extreme I feel the Maaneet relationship is the strongest ever I have ever seen. In Dev's words, it's telepathic between themselves and beyond my petty understanding (which is not a very assuring thought... it's a missile onto my ego 😆) and then I feel... what really is there between Maaneet beyond the teacher-student relationship or the boss-secretary one? A kiss, a hug, some lust...? Is there real love? Then again I need to remind myself of Maan trying to be a better man for Geet's sake. Is that love? This sort of to and fro-s keep happening each time I read an update.

So, well... my comment was born out of that perplexity in myself regarding evaluating the Maaneet relationship. Ofcourse as I said, the story's bewitching and I'm sure you don't want me to go on and on on that aspect. And yes, I know, I need to stop heating the coils of my brain.. hehe.

And no, I don't expect you to modify your writing to accommodate our opinion. You are the creator and it's your baby. We may accept it if it suits us or move on. After all, like you said, it's read-only and does not need to be TRP-friendly 😆

Love and Regards
Sini

P.S. I've loved your Maan (that all of us love Geet here is a given) here because of rather than inspite of his flaws. Always felt the Maan onscreen was powdered up too much as the show progressed taking off his real essence. So, all's good girl! Happy writing!
Edited by SiniHanda - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SiniHanda

Hey Raam, Sheesh, aapke fans ke haathon se marwaana chaahte ho kya? 😕 😆

I rarely rarely rarely comment anywhere on IF, especially of late and much less read comments since once caught in a web of comments it's an addiction often worse than the FF addiction itself 😆


That said, hmmm... my comment in itself was perhaps a complaint on an unconscious level (since it was typed pretty fast without giving it much thought), maybe since on a Maan-Geet story, dissociation from romance always seems an impossibility. The names Maan and Geet have risen to create a charisma and an image of their own and good writers here feel it's a baggage at times.

Still, my entire comment was a compliment, albeit a grudging one 😆.Having read countless FFs here, only two people so far have managed to totally hoodwink my anticipation of the plot, while still managing to sustain my interest- one's Devi and the other's you. In your case, often I am not even sure whether there's a plot
😆

Needless to say, your story is different, well planned out (like I just said, whether there's a plan or you are Maan in action with scraps of perceptions of reality thrown in to us mere mortals is another question... hehe, which is even more intriguing) and seems to have a destination I can't surmise.

It's so meticulately done, that I try as much to not think on your updates and just take it as a story since thinking will do me no good. As for the romance quotient... the way you have constructed the romance sort of puts me at loggerheads with myself.

At one extreme I feel the Maaneet relationship is the strongest ever I have ever seen. In Dev's words, it's telepathic between themselves and beyond my petty understanding (which is not a very assuring thought... it's a missile onto my ego 😆) and then I feel... what really is there between Maaneet beyond the teacher-student relationship or the boss-secretary one? A kiss, a hug, some lust...? Is there real love? Then again I need to remind myself of Maan trying to be a better man for Geet's sake. Is that love? This sort of to and fro-s keep happening each time I read an update.

So, well... my comment was born out of that perplexity in myself regarding evaluating the Maaneet relationship. Ofcourse as I said, the story's bewitching and I'm sure you don't want me to go on and on on that aspect. And yes, I know, I need to stop heating the coils of my brain.. hehe.

And no, I don't expect you to modify your writing to accommodate our opinion. You are the creator and it's your baby. We may accept it if it suits us or move on. After all, like you said, it's read-only and does not need to be TRP-friendly 😆

Love and Regards
Sini

P.S. I've loved your Maan (that all of us love Geet here is a given) here because of rather than inspite of his flaws. Always felt the Maan onscreen was powdered up too much as the show progressed taking off his real essence. So, all's good girl! Happy writing!


Can I give you a big kiss and an award? This is like the best comment ever. Just shakes things up doesn't it? And by the way I was not looking to attack you. I reply to all comments that are even remotely critical. And sometimes when I am doing that I get carried away and sound very serious 😆😆 . In reality I would be having most fun at those times. You need to keep commenting. It is most intriguing. I am sure other readers will now become your fans instead of killing you. If what you are saying is true they might decide to kill me instead.🤢

So finally a standing ovation.
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey, u didnt tell us how our GEET looked??????😕 she for the frst tme wore sari( since v r knowng her) we shuld knw na... MAAN's descriptn ws nf to mke us go OOOHHH!!!!!!😳😉 but GEET ...v wr nil...

cn we also get a tiny miny entrance in their thoughts when they saw ech othr fully rdy fr the party...😳

DADI oh DADI... she s so adorable... n Dev as usual a frndy teddy...

i considered the chapter as a filler... nthng mch for me to write upon...

love

SANJH
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: glassdoor


Can I give you a big kiss and an award? This is like the best comment ever. Just shakes things up doesn't it? And by the way I was not looking to attack you. I reply to all comments that are even remotely critical. And sometimes when I am doing that I get carried away and sound very serious 😆😆 . In reality I would be having most fun at those times. You need to keep commenting. It is most intriguing. I am sure other readers will now become your fans instead of killing you. If what you are saying is true they might decide to kill me instead.🤢

So finally a standing ovation.
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Awww.. thankyou for taking this as a valuable comment 😳 You did sound serious and I was like o teri... kahan phas gayi... ab toh I have to explain myself... bhukto Sini bhukto 😆 Will try to comment whenever possible surely. And naa... why would your fans even think of hurting a mastermind chessplayer who just happens to work miracles with words instead of chess pieces? 👏

See ya
😛 ❤️

Edit: And oh, the kiss and award most humbly accepted 🤗
Edited by SiniHanda - 12 years ago
sanjh89 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
OOPPSS!!!! I mde cmmnt bfore readng ur reply ...

i jst wnt to clarify here tht I dnt wnt u to add peppy romance n thus distrb the flow of the story... its jst tht i flt the chapter a lil bit incomplete wthout GEET's description n absence of their mutual thots on seeing ech othr...as it wuld b probably their frst encounter in party attire...
so it ws jst a minute suggestion from me...considerng or rejectng s totally ur jurisdiction...

we love, respect n appreciate whatever u give...

love

SANJH

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