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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#761

Pls updt soon...very anxious
Pretty pls

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Sheesh

@glassdoor

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#762

Originally posted by: idunno
Initially it sound like love story but slowly the story has change the direction and it is no more love story but action,thrill,suspense,cunning set ups,and playing with each other in more sophisticated and cunning way ,story become like chase game,we have to read twice thrice to understand it properly still i feel my understanding is right or wrong?Maan and Geet their love and Romance has been kept aside for time being,though story is interesting but it could have been more interesting if writer has given some do pal of their romance,spice their relationship with their knock joke not to much a little bit of accent colour to get more get up of story,still the writer is doing great job by giving such a good story.Thanks Glassdoor...!

Originally posted by: SiniHanda
Oooh... is it getting deeper or lighter? Haha... like a new reader said upthread, one of my misgivings about the story has always been its unexpectedly low quota of romance considering the potential Sheesh is capable of considering her totally wacky brain (no offence, it's a compliment 😊 ). If this version were to play on screen, romance addicts would holler at the top pf their lungs that they were being deprived of their precious doses of Maaneet romance 😆Yet the story is as full of suspense as ever... I for one can't even figure out if the story's still midway or at its fag end... never have I been so clueless about a story... so well... looking forward to the next one to see where the mastermind 🥳 , his wife 😛, the princess 😳 and the witch go on from here..

Well what I cannot get my wacky brain to wrap around is how are the romantic addicts hanging around after 146 updates! 😆 . I would think they would have petered out by now.

Anyway on a serious note, of course this is NOT an 'air'able version of the story. It is more a read-only version. For there are too many things left to your imagination and interpretation. That is why I do not ask people to play any kind of background music or imagine certain things while reading. I do not provide pictures for who the characters are supposed to be. This FF has no banner either.

And coming to your comment, yes this FF has not been overtly romantic so far. Probably because I do not know how to portray romance 😆 . You will then ask me what the hell am I doing writing love stories then. 😃. Again on a serious note, whatever the story has been so far it does not lend itself to 'romance' and 'cutesy' stuff. All that cute stuff was possible when Geet was her crazy self. Once Geet grew as a character and went through certain situations it was not possible for me to just provide romantic angle to their relationship as and when I wished.

And you very well know by now that I am not one to change the story or the way the character behaves just to give more of the romantic pair people wish to see. For me the real hero is the story. I never sway from what I had in mind. It is an intricate tale with every little detail planned. So forgive me if it is not what you expected or to your liking anymore. May be you will like my next story(whenever i write it 😆) better.

Honestly I do not know whether to take your comment as a compliment or a complaint and me being the self critical me will take it as a complaint to be noted and worked upon for future. But again I cannot make any promises.

I know that this is not the kind of story one would expect to turn into an FF. But for me the real satisfaction is the little comments I receive here and there about how this story made people's life better. I get messages saying something in the update helped people do their project. Or changed the way they thought. Helped them resolve a certain problem. That is the main deal for me. I am sure there are dozens of FFs out there that are very romantic and nice for romantic addicts to feast upon.

Hopefully in the future I can come up with a story that is more populist and romantic.

On an ending note I really appreciate these kind of comments which help me grow as a writer. I am a first timer you know 😳. I love you all tremendously for sticking with me so far though you may not like me sometimes. You are all a part of me now. A big kiss for all of you.

Let me know if anyone has any misgivings about this story or about me or anything in life for that manner. We are all here to be entertained and have a good time. With or without MG.

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P.S Sini darling, sorry for making it sound so serious and depressive. You know I am a crackhead. So forgive me. 😳.

And rest OMG, I think I have to take back this entire comment now... I am so sorry if I offended anyone. 😭. I accept all kinds of input. That does not change the fact that I am a stubborn ass who pretends to listen and forgets about it. But feel free to give inputs about the story. 😭 😭

Edited by glassdoor - 12 years ago

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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#763

i wanna write about how much i love dis story, how unique it is n what an splendid writer u r or u r one d best i have ever read but will do it later coz i wont b able to pen down my appreciation towards u d way i want to...wont b able to do justice to u...

i would never want u to change d story coz dats what makes it different n unique...i was annoyed vd geet initially...d way she was...bt den everything changed...

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nanvi

@nanvi

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#764

Wonderful update, eagerly waiting for maneet's farmhoue trip

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Niharika

@Niharika.Nair

Rocker

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#765

Maan, dadi, dev sab strategies banane mein mahir hai!!

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#766

have i ever told you i love this dadi😆

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#767

lovely update👏
after long time got lot of Maan n Dadi & maaneet moments

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-Crayon-

@-Crayon-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#768

I read your note and this is probably the first time I'm responding to the "Author's Note". 😆

Dear Sheesh ji , Let me tell you that the best part of this FF is it's detailing and the "realistic" elements of it(Ok..no digging the deeper meanings of "reality" please!) . You know I was preparing an assignment and two days before the date of submission we had a discussing about it with our professor . All of them had different questions. So then 'Sir' said that why are you people trying to come with a model answer ,trying to match some kind of answer that is already in my mind? Whereas ,I want to know about your opinions and understanding of it.

After thinking about this ,what I did after going home was delete the whole thing that I have written and started writing it again because his words kind of made me guilty and I Had to rewrite it for my own satisfaction .Sometimes these little things change the way you look at things and that my dearji made me adore this FF. I love the fact that you always give importance to such little details in this FF. As I have said it 'n' no. of times that I absolutely adore the process of learning of all the characters. No wonder this FF has helped someone in their projects. This surely is an inspiration to many people.

The another thing that I really like about any story is the interpretations, when things are left to the reader . Same in this FF . The characters are never judged in the story itself . They are presented along with their flaws , reasons and the reader decides whether to like them or not. Simple. They were readers who didn't quite like Maan when he was loved by everyone . They were people who didn't hate Maan when he was hated by many. Everyone had their own interpretations according to their own experiences . Isn't it the best part. One story , various people , different perceptions , different people have different understanding of a character .Probably one might not look at a particular thing as you have imagined and written it , but then you get to see various new dimensions. There are no boundaries. 😊

Oh talking about your next story , Don't forget to include the lungi guy in it ! I'm already in love with your handsome lungi guy, I imagine him everywhere!! And I guess I have written an extra long post ,I never knew that sleepless nights make you hyper-active. Exams suck..and miss me till they get over. Giving you bahut saara laauw Sheeshji! Do accept it. I see that mishit ji ,mohabbat ji is back. So don't forget me! 🤗

Yours

Lungi guy ki deewani. ❤️