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Sheesh

@glassdoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#781

Originally posted by: sanjh89
OOPPSS!!!! I mde cmmnt bfore readng ur reply ...

i jst wnt to clarify here tht I dnt wnt u to add peppy romance n thus distrb the flow of the story... its jst tht i flt the chapter a lil bit incomplete wthout GEET's description n absence of their mutual thots on seeing ech othr...as it wuld b probably their frst encounter in party attire...
so it ws jst a minute suggestion from me...considerng or rejectng s totally ur jurisdiction...

we love, respect n appreciate whatever u give...

love

SANJH

Oh dear! What have I done. Put my foot in my mouth again!!

Now ppl are afraid to even say what they think.

Of course you are right Sanjh dear. It is incomplete without Geet's attire description. I did not feel like adding it for some reason. Don't know why. I was feeling bad that I was making her wear a saree when she was not comfortable doing it.

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sanjh89

@sanjh89

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Posted: 12 years ago

#782

but she did... n did it for MAAN...though u didnt mention...but being a reader frm the beginning I interpretd it...cz GEET's character s build in a way tht she cn do nythng for HER MAN...
so, I dnt think it wrng in ny way...her supernatural love for him cn mke hr go evn in swimsuit...simply cz she cares for HIM n none other...

add it nly if u feel lke...or else leave it on us...GHSP(show) hs gvn us nf stuff to imagine MAAN n GEET nywhr ,nyway...

love

SANJH

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Sheesh

@glassdoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#783

Originally posted by: sanjh89
but she did... n did it for MAAN...though u didnt mention...but being a reader frm the beginning I interpretd it...cz GEET's character s build in a way tht she cn do nythng for HER MAN...
so, I dnt think it wrng in ny way...her supernatural love for him cn mke hr go evn in swimsuit...simply cz she cares for HIM n none other...

add it nly if u feel lke...or else leave it on us...GHSP(show) hs gvn us nf stuff to imagine MAAN n GEET nywhr ,nyway...

love

SANJH

😃 Thanks for understanding.

I might describe it or provide clarity about why I chose to evade it in the next update.

I am in character when I am writing and I don't realize why I write certain things.

It comes back to me only later.

P.S I feel like crying for making you uncomfortable. 😭. Sorry darling. I edited my note please check it out.

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#784

Amazing part..So Khurana family planning something for Maneet.. Waiting for next update..😉

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cutemishti

@cutemishti

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#785

Lovely part. Dadi ia really very cool. I luv her.

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#786

Beautiful update.

Eager to read Maaneet in farmhouse.

Maan playing a good move this time.

A ball.

That part was gareat.

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Krupa

@idunno

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#787

uodate soon waiting-pahele 1din fir 2 din,fir teen din,fir 4 din,fir 5din ab phirse ulti ginti saru kar do...!

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sanjh89

@sanjh89

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#788

😃 Thanks for understanding.

I might describe it or provide clarity about why I chose to evade it in the next update.

I am in character when I am writing and I don't realize why I write certain things.

It comes back to me only later.

P.S I feel like crying for making you uncomfortable. 😭. Sorry darling. I edited my note please check it out.

arrey yaar!!!! you didnt need to edit ny of ur comment... you writers hv givn ur readers full right to comment n criticize... similarly ,you too are entitled to express ur feelngs abt story,characters circumstances n all...cz at the end of the day u r the owner of the story... I dint at all meant to panic u... i felt the incompletness i shared...n I assure I vl do tht in future also...

wish you healthy n free frm nny interference writng...

love

SANJH