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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#361

wah veer kya mast banda hai...kya mast updt thi...
Amzing ...updt sooon ...wanna see how he will make geet realize her feelings...updt sooon dear plezzz

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maankisimm

@maankisimm

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#362

AWEOME...AWESOME UPDATE

LOVE ...JEALOUS MAAN

VEER IS 2 GUD...LOVE HIM

PLEASE UPDATE SOON

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namita25

@namita25

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#363

nice update...loved the jealous Maan

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362035

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#364

wow simply awesooome upd.
loved it fab...
tfd pm...

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kiran_rati

@kiran_rati

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#365

beautiful update

oh god cute jealous maan

cont soon

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maaneetmaahi

@maaneetmaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#366

Nice prologue dear ...loved it

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maaneetmaahi

@maaneetmaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#367

Part 1...

Amazing☺️ don't have any other words...

it was beautifully written dear👏👏👏👏
maan's past is so painful dear...hate his father...but y his mother didn't oppose to that cruel act ...😕

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maaneetmaahi

@maaneetmaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#368

part 2...
OMG!!that was so painful...maan's monologue was beautifully written...

but i am bit confused dear...😕😕
in the starting of the update..its maan's monologue right??...
then after that ...u have written "After 21 years"...😕
i mean after 21years...but in the starting of the update...maan was with geet...please clear this confusion...

ho...geet is married to maan now...now i am sacred..what maan will do to geet..
happy that sameera didn't marry maan..😉

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maaneetmaahi

@maaneetmaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#369

part 3...
geet loves maan...ye sach hai kya..
but hated maan ...how can he do this to her...
that too...in his past his mother was in similar pain...😡

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maaneetmaahi

@maaneetmaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#370

part 4...
ho geet has a painful past...
so maan is guilty now...i clearly understand his state...but still angry that he forced her...
geet is so innocent...craving for his love...she is not angry on him...but have immense pain in her...from his acts..ignorance..
loved that maan liked breakfast...he actually felt the touch of his mother in the food..
amazing update dear