[MG-SS] If it wasn't for The Night [Epilogue-p 89] - Page 8

Originally posted by: RukhluvMaan

Awww ... This amazing story ..!!!$$ the window scene was amazing ...!!!! And the way u had described maan wooohhooo just perfect ...!!!!! The vase incident was so cute ..!!!! I know that letter is from Maan .. Hehehe ...!!$$ and I'm damn sure Rohan knows his elder hot bro's feelings for geet ..!!$$ really loved it ... Plzzz plzzz uPdate soon ...!!!!!

Haha. Thank you. Rehan does know things which others don't. Will try and update soon :)

Originally posted by: walkintomylifex

reserved! :) x

-edit: Finally got a chance to edit my comment, phew! 😆 wow what a gripping start to the story! I'm sensing a love triangle between Maan, Rehan and Geet... unless Rehan is playing cupid between the two... hmm, questions questions! Update soon Shika or I will faint from impatience! 🤣

ROFL. Love triangle huh? Well well well I do love geometry. Triangles quads and spheres, hayye. I am day dreaming. But Love triangle is kind of difficult to write haina? I am rambling ignore me.
And glad to have you here🤗

Originally posted by: RaDMG25

Yay ur back loved it maan remembering geets eyes even abroad nice...hope geet doesn't feel for rehan as she thinks poems is from him...

Waiting for next part already keep me in ur pm list please 😊

Hm, distance makes heart grow fonder isn't it? No wonder Maan remembered her even there. Added you in the PM list :)

Originally posted by: zafarahim

beautiful... cant wait to read more... im damn sure its maan who put the card... n the wordzz in it were ausm...

Will update soon :) Thanks for the comment :)
Let's see who'd put the card after all😆

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

Awesum start dear...
So geet got her prince charming,but she dint realize it yet..
She thinks Rehan Loves her..
i m sure the card must b kept by maan..

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

very beautiful start...

Destiny has shown Geet her Valentine...

why Rehan confessed that crime now...is there any motive of him behind doing this...he realizes Maan's love for Geet...

I think it is Maan who put that card in her book but she is misunderstanding it for Rehan...hope she won't confess her feelings to Rehan...

thanx for pm...

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There would be signs all around us if we wish to see. The thing is we don't see. Hm, Rehan does have a motive behind his confession. Next part will clear your doubts. :)

read ur all wrk ,wt 2 say ,SUPER,run away bride my favrte ,sistrly lov each one is a master pc created by u ...about dis one ithink geet also lov maan ,card is from maan its obvios ,rehan know it , nd wil play cupid, lets see wt u hav planed..nd wen is next prt?

Originally posted by: hopehot

interesting ...thanks for the Pm

Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome one loved it

Originally posted by: shalinisaran89

aweesome os...

jst lov it

Originally posted by: priti11

wow awesooome loved it...
cont.soon...

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Superr cooll !!!

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

really gud

Originally posted by: harshithaaa

superb loved it...

continue soon

Originally posted by: DDbiggestfan

Amazing 👏

Originally posted by: kainturakiran

nice...
update soon...waiting😍.

Originally posted by: nahtani88

Awesome
Thank You So Much For The PM

Originally posted by: rupzloveu

loved it

Originally posted by: soniaz121

aweome start continue and update soon

Originally posted by: dolly10

Awesome ss

Waiting for next part

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Wow!! That's awesome..👏 Loved it.😊

Originally posted by: honeygrape

awesommme start...loved the angry msk n scared geet...pls continue soon...dying to read more..😊

Thank you everyone🤗

When are you updating next part??

Originally posted by: sdlife19

beautiful dear..

just loved it..

does she think tat the card is by rehan..

but i think its maan

Geet does think that the card is from Rehan. Let us see who put it after all? Rehan or Maan?

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

hey shikha...
1st of the the title of the story caught my attention...its beautiful and update was awesum blossom

i loved the way she and chocolate looked out of thw window..
and my most fav has becum the fortune bells..

like they knew sumthing was going to happen...they felt so significant..

and maaneet are neighbours..am sure that card was from maan... and she mistook it as rehan;s!!!!

count me in ur bussy list!
would like to read more of this!!!

Title credit goes to Reva. I am a dud at titles otherwise😆
Haha Thank you so much for the comment. Fortune bells are amazing haina? I love them in general.
Added you to my list. :)

Originally posted by: -niti-

Nice start

Rehan actually told that he broke the watch BEFORE 10+ years 😆

I guess the card was sent by maan , Geet now dont go and propose rehan😆

Continue soon

- niti 😆

Niti, cutie you here?🤗
Haha Rehan has a very good memory power don't you think? How could he remember what he did so long ago? If i were to keep a track of all that I break, I would die out of head ache😆

Originally posted by: -niti-

just read it again

i have one doubt - why was rehan smiling like a stupid when maan told that he can better share the memories with his gang

Are u becoming another glassdoor ??? No please !!!!!!!!!😆

No, how can I give competition to our Sheesh? She is unique :)
Rofl. I guess you have to wait for the next part to read the reasons behind Rehan's smirk😆

Originally posted by: bangalores

*sigh* been missing ur stories... and am i glad u started one * big smile... twirling with joy*
beautiful poem...
of course you always make me go fida over ur storis and this is no exception...
as always i cud see the frightened eyes of the little girl and her heart going bang bang each time he comes around...
the thrill of anticipation for the party now...same as the excitement of knowing something special is going to happen which geet must me feeling
oh ! no matter how many times u restart ur buddy list count me in always😃

You make me hide my face in my pillow and grin like an idiot😆
You are too sweet to tolerate my crap and say sweet things about them :)
Added you in my buddy list and btw belated happy birthday once again :)

Originally posted by: Tyro

Congrats on the new SS...

loved the start...

n it was maan n not rehan who wrote the card it seems...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

Thank you. 😳

Originally posted by: --Neelam--

lovely part...
I am sure rohan knows his bro's feelings for geet ...
what about geet...waiting to know...

Haha, Geet's feelings would be known in future updates :)

Originally posted by: namita25

loved the beginning...

seems like it's Maan who wrote that note...n geet thinks it's Rehan...

waiting for the next part...

continue soon...

Hm the curious case of misplaced note 😆
I can't say who put it but can say it does play a major role in the story.

Originally posted by: punam2712

what a lovely start

one scold from maan left a scar on her for ever

she loves him byt fears him too

and maan wants to tlk to her but finds it impossible

what is rehan upto

wish you could change it into an ss or ff

Sometimes simple things leave a big impact, and especially if they happen at a tender age. This is a SS of three parts buddy :)

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

lovely n amazing part


loved it a lot

Originally posted by: ammu5

fabuls start. do continue n add me to ur pm list

Originally posted by: singh24

Interesting part ...

Cont. plz...

Originally posted by: dona86

congrats on the new ff

interesting start

cont soon

Originally posted by: Serious-Beauty

absolutely loved it

awesome start dear👏

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

Interesting! Can't wait to read more!

Originally posted by: hinal_maaneet

Originally posted by: Gcs-girl

Congo on new ss
Awesome concept
loved the update
continue soon
thankx for pm

Originally posted by: sridevi_n

awesome update. i guess that card was kept by maan and geet is asuming that rehan has kept it. please continue soon.

Thank you everyone🤗

Originally posted by: maneet-laksh

ITS MAAN OBVIOUSLY!AN THIS STORY GOONA BE SPECIAL COZ MY BIRTHDAY IS 16 FEB!!😃

Wow! That's great :)
Bang on for coincidences :)

Originally posted by: mandymore

awsome start...maan scared hell out of her..

is geet thnkng d card is frm rehan..😕

Maan is a maahir at scaring people. Don't you think?😆

Originally posted by: SweetestPari

awesome yar... very nice concept... maan had written tat card for geet but geet misunderstands it to b rehan... n i think will be one playin among maaneet... n tats y he confessed his long back mistake now as i thinh he as a slite idea of maans feelings for geet... waiting for next pat... update soon yar... n do PM me... i lik all ur works... yar

THank you so much. Have added you in my PM list..

Originally posted by: spvd

congrats hon...

part 1
awesome start dear...
waise what are the current ages of Maan and Geet?
so Geet is scared of Maan...
and Maan has feelings for Geet and seeing her scared infuriates him...
cont soon dear...

Well what will be marriageable age? 🤣
Jokes apart, Geet is 21, and Maan 26 right now

Originally posted by: FeistySoul

Mein tumhein ithni jaldhi nahin chodungi...

So expect a request from me buddy🤗...

Now coming to the update...

Each seen was so , kya kahein, dekh sakthi thi apni aankhon se...

Geet ke baalon ka hawaaon mein udna thak...

Acha ji! Tho bachpan se lekar paden hain Maan saab apni Geet mohtharma ke peeche...

It's really great na, bachpan ka interest or woh chota love badein ho kar bhi humaarein saath rahein...

Aisen log bohuth bohuth lucky hain na Shikhs...

Rehan tho cupid khel raha hain ek saal se I guess...

So kisko kya answer milegi jaldhi batha na!

I am waiting on my toes...

Love ya...

🤗

Aa gayi meri not-so-choti behan?🤣
Yes people are indeed lucky to have their love known all their life, but if you ask me, don't they get bored of the same face?🤣
Alright enough of my silly jokes. I am very very glad you are here feisty soul ji😆
And you might be the first one who assumed Rehan to be positive😆
Love you too Nidha🤗

Originally posted by: ukdesigirl

Love it Shika👍🏼

Originally posted by: PaintedSky

beautiful !! will wait for the next part.

Originally posted by: swetha10

Awesome!!!!

luved it.. very interesting!!!

plzz continue

Originally posted by: sekhonpuneet

Awesome

Originally posted by: soniya_lovesu

Great plot!! :) how can we forget u? 😊 Aww..maan must have written tht poem, oh god! And geet loves rehan? Y?😭

Originally posted by: Shruti_Goyal

wow...

Originally posted by: SuperbDrashti

😃

I loved it superb start ⭐️

thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Ash1991

amazing update...

Originally posted by: Kaval05

this is interesting, i wonder how this story will turn out

Originally posted by: rs12345

wow awesooome loved it...

Originally posted by: -memorable-

beautiful concept

Originally posted by: sona-rai

welcome back dear 🤗 🤗

awesome lovely start eagerly waiting for next update

Originally posted by: gargi12

awesome strt...
Loved d concept aloottt...
Cont soon
Thnx fr pm

Originally posted by: --Dia--

When are you updating next part??

Nice to see you back with another awesome work.. 😊

Thank you everyone🤗
Next update would be in a day or two :)