[MG-SS] If it wasn't for The Night [Epilogue-p 89] - Page 21

Originally posted by: palindrome

Words..words..words..!!!As much they are helpful in act of "expression",their selection,their place,and their amount are the aspects for which one should always remain cautious...

I am very sad for the "misunderstanding" happening here...

However writings is superb as usual..There is perfect depiction of maan as well as geet's emotions...I can understand geet's helplessness and maan's hurt +anger...

Flow with which you have described maan's emotion during dance at starting of this chapter is perfect..When I was reading it I thought may be you had to stop yourself from writing at some point as you could have written much more..I just thought so..I could be wrong here...

please update the next part soon 😳

Originally posted by: Cloud9.

you had hit the nail on the head. You're right. I had to stop myself. In fact this particular part took so long for me to write because one emotion, one word if used more would loose the charm or worse would not come in a way i'd expected it to come. Maan's monologue at the start was made short for it would be out of character for him if his musings would cross a page and it would be boring to read for the readers. Or maybe m being too cautios here. I dont know 😆