[MG-SS] If it wasn't for The Night [Epilogue-p 89] - Page 19

Originally posted by: Tyro

not again...

Originally posted by: Cloud9.

😆🤗🤣

Originally posted by: glassdoor

Res 😎

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Yo its me again! Ok I know I am like super duper slow. I read the first part now. So this comment is dedicated to that!

I've been holding this picture of you in my heart,
That keeps a spark glowing when we are apart;
You never notice the way I yearn -
Nor the way you make my pulse churn.
You never take heed of the way you knock me off of my feet -
The way I find your caressing smile ever so sweet;
You don't understand what I mean to say when I return your glance -
The one gaze that sends me into a hopeless trance;
There is nothing more this poor soul has to imbue,
Than to not go another day without being closer to you.

Such beautiful lines. You know I hate greeting cards. I find them so tacky and impersonal. I had rather send them an sms with just a couple of words like "Love you, valentine" or "Happy bday" Or something of that sort.

Of course some greeting cards are nice. They have hippos and other animals jutting out of them. Funny things i must say. But I have seen a few greeting cards where the words are itself so fine and heart rendering that you feel like not buying that card. Instead you feel like learning those lines by heart and just saying them. In front of the person you love.

The above lines are such. It describes your entire update so well. Below are my own lines for your beautiful update.

She just sees him outside her window.

Her head not wanting to believe what her heart feels.

She just shuts the window unable to withstand

The weight of the heart that might come to bear

Upon looking at him in flesh and blood.

She hopes it is not meant to be.
But she feels differently. In the deep crevice of her aortic pump.

So she now wants to hide not behind the flower vase but

Behind the card that she believes a friend had given.

Originally posted by: Cloud9.

You write poetry too? I am awed by your lines and God, I don't have any words. It is both embarrassing and awe inspiring to have you here. I don't have anything to say expect that Thank you so very much🤗

wen are u gonna update 😳