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Part 58

Geet was trying to indulge herself in her friend's happiness but failing miserably,, she saw ridz n armaan dancing happily and abhay was teasing piya by dancing with all other girls in the disc, piya was fuming and when she was on the verge of bursting he went on his knees asking sorry.. a small smile adorned geet's face seeing the cute fight over love and then piya's revenge by dancing with other boys, at the end some boys were on floor as abhay really smashed their faces brutally,, if there wasn't raghav, till now abhay was smashing whole pub, thankfully the manager knew MSK and his influence,, geet got to know he had asked manager to take care of his family, which overwhelmed geet too an extent that she wanted to run to him right than but seeing the happiness of her friend's she couldn't break their joy'.

Though she tried to put her best smile but armaan n abhay got the idea she is not so happy that she is showing' armaan excused himself and asked raghav n abhay to accompany piya n ridz, ridz gave them time as she knew how much armaan loves his best friend'.

Armaan: what happen baby, u r not looking fine, if u r feeling any discomfort we can go right now..

Geet: no amy I m fine, no need to return right now, abhi to aaye hain, go and enjoy na.

Armaan: baccha for me ur health is more important than this time-out for us, we can enjoy it later in delhi..

Geet: after 3 day I m leaving india and u have to be here, then how will I see u guys and if anything hap,,,

She couldn't complete her sentence and gulped it seeing armaan's rage filled eyes. she made puppy face but armaan was leaving the table, but before he warned her.

Armaan: never ever say such thing geet'. He tried to leave'but Geet held his hand to stop him, then saw his eyes which was full of fear and pain, it shivered her. but then she remember maan's face, how much painful it was' she now get what must had happened with maan when she said those words' her clutch loosen as tear slipped her almond eyes' before it can reach down she felt someone wiping it, she looked at raghav who gave a smile to her'

Raghav: lets go, maan must be waiting'. Geet wanted to deny but at the same time her heart was longing to see maan, ridz gave a smile saying they should go back' geet looked at her friends with gratefulness' which abhay smacked her head,, she made cute puppy face which made everyone laughed'

Abhay: chal nautanki, tera majnu bhi aise faces bana raha hoga'

Piya: shut up abhay u r the most unromantic person so that doesn't mean Maan would be like it'

Geet: if maan did that I would have killed him, she winked at piya who smirks looking at abhay making him fear and again he started his manofy session'.

They were walking towards the parking,, abhay was still pacifying piya where ridz and armaan was walking close to each other, geet gave them space and accompanied raghav'

Raghav: u truly love him madly geet'

Geet: he loves me more'

Raghav: I wish bhagwan sabko aisa pyar de, he said mockingly which made geet fume,, raghav smirks making her more irritate,, seeing her anger he stopped his grin and run behind her as she started walking faster'. Arre I m sorry geet,, I was just joking'

Geet: joking? Ha ha, mujhe hasi nahi aayi'.

Raghav: chehre se dikh raha hain, u r red like tomato upar se red dress,, if Dracula see u they might frighten seeing 2nd one but instead of black u r wearing red'

Piya and ridz burst out laughing but the 3 person fume looking at him was geet armaan and abhay..

Piya: raghav u r seriously dead'

Raghav: I can feel so'

Ridz: common lets go guys'

Abhay and armaan gave last glare and raghav thank ridz with his eyes..

They reached the cottage where again raghav ran behind geet..

Raghav: geet listen na, pls geet..

Geet snapped: what?

Raghav: sorry yaar I was just joking, forgive ur frnd na pls.. he said holding his ear, geet couldn't help but smile.. raghav saw and gave a grin,, geet shook her head and walking beside him'

Geet: don't ever say to this ur girlfriend raghav, seriously very bad joke, she will murder u'

Raghav: I don't have girl friend.

Geet: kabhi to hogi..

Raghav: never,, he sighed, geet looked at him with knotted brow, he cleared his throat' actually no girl will be ready to date an engage person' geet looked at him with mouth hung open,, her eyes popped out hearing ENGAGE word' he smiles and shut her mouth by placing his index finger on her chin' Geet I have a fianc who will surely kill me if I ever try to make girl frnd outside..

Geet: raghav?

Raghav: hmm I have a beautiful fianc, SIYA'

Geet: but u never told me.

Raghav: mouka nahi mila,, I wanted but couldn't,, Siya will meet u at London, she is a cardiologist, I met her in Paris, in my mother's hometown' just 5 month before we get engaged, its arranged'

Geet: gosh raghav u r so mean, u made me feel bad for u and u urself have a GF,, I will kill u for making me guilty' she ran towards him and hit his on his back, raghav couldn't help but laugh his heart out'

Raghav: I was enjoying ur plight, if I said earlier u wouldn't made me friend,, atleast u pitied me and made me urs friend'

Geet: u r wrong my Ragav.. I would still made u my frnd'

Raghav: accha abb dost hain na..

Geet: no I m angry' u lied'

Raghav: ohhoo,, ok will a chocolate mousse work? the name itself made her gulp her saliva, she shook her head yes vigorously,, raghav laughed seeing the child woman and led her to caf of the cottage' she got her chocolate mousse and both headed towards their respective rooms, rest of the gang already retired'

Geet was smiling, giggling, happy for her friend's happiness, a burden of guilt left her shoulder. She was enjoying the new cherished friendship oblivious to the fact someone was watching her every happiness but his own heart wasn't at peace'

Maan held the whiskey glass tightly in his hand, seeing his wife smiling and laughing with another man, nope, her ex-fiance' the jealousy was kicking him, but he couldn't make her more mad, she is enough hurt for his accusation' but what he will do with this burning heart' only he knows how he spent these hours without her.. how much he missed her, how much he craved to be with his wife and babies'

Geet entered the room and saw maan emerged in some file, she wanted to talk to him, wanted to hug him and held him closely, but maan was hell busy in some file and then his laptop, she couldn't muster the courage to disturb him fearing for one more argument' she silently walked towards the cupboard and took her night dress.. maan saw her going towards washroom.. he saw her exhausted face, he wanted to hug her, console her and showers his all love, wanted to show how much he missed her and he is truly sorry for hurting her, but couldn't gathered the courage to say it fearing she is hurt already and his word will make her more hurt, somehow he wanted to forget all those bitter words and moment'. Both didn't said anything,, geet laid on bed for some sleep but it was far away. She tossed and turned but sleep wasn't coming to her exhausted eyes' on the other hand though maan wanted to hold her closely, he knew she want to sleep in his arm, but his work held him back, he needed to finish it fast'.

After an hour maan joined geet on bed, he pulled geet in his embrace and she hugged him still half sleepy,, as soon as she felt his warmth near her she slept peacefully' maan caresses her hair to make her sleep without any stress and she forgot her all worry and tension, only maan was there for her'.

Morning ray hit geet forcing her open the eyes, she felt something missing, the warmth missing from her.. her heart chunked' fear covered her heart as she saw the room empty, she called maan but he wasn't answering,, geet heard the door being knocked.. she said to come in and room service came there' she asked the boy if he had seen maan and the answer shook her literally'

Boy: mam he just checked out and said to inform u guys he will meet u at delhi' maybe u were sleeping so he doesn't wanted to disturb u' he went before 2 n half hour, abb tak to pouch bhi gaye honge'

Geet's body shook as she registered those words, just then the service guy showed the letter that was beside her side table, she hurriedly picked it up and the service guy left the room after placing tea n snacks'geet read the letter with shaking hand'

Geet,

I have to leave for Delhi,, its urgent.. u guys can carry the outing for more 3 days, then join me there in delhi' sorry for not saying this to last night, u were looking pale and aadi informed me long before, I wanted to talk to u about this, but we had the fight.. I m sorry for ruining ur plan, but I will make it promise.. bye and take care of our babies and urself, I know armaan abhay ridz piya and raghav is there for u, I didn't wanted to leave u alone but I know they will keep u safe more than me.. love u.. bye..

Your Maan'.

Geet didn't knew when her eyes started to pour her all pain, she cried hugging the letter, feeling his pain. That's why he wanted to spend the time with her but why he didn't wake her and make her ready to leave right then' whom she is kidding maan did all this for her only, for him her happiness is first priority.. geet caresses the words written by maan, her heart felt heavy.. she caresses her tummy feeling her babies moving slightly, she smiles knowing they aren't happy as their father left them here to enjoy' she remember his words, he wanted to spent the last day, maybe he wanted to talk about leaving, maybe he wanted her to go with him, but her own excitement to explode the place made him shut his place' she felt guilty for ruining his all dreams, without knowing she cried more.. holding the letter close she cried '.

Ridz ran towards her,, she was coming in her room when she heard her sob and saw geet full in tears' ridz hugged her patting her back'

Ridz: what happen doll? Why u r crying?

Geet sobbed: ridz, maan, maan..

Ridz: what happen to maan. where is he?

Geet: wo,

Ridz: will u speak please?

Geet: he left for delhi' she broke in to cry hugging her best friend' ridz couldn't understand anything, she just hoped nothing went wrong in them.. she patted her back to sooth her but she needed to know what happen, why maan left so suddenly..

Ridz: what happen between u 2?

Geet: I need to go delhi ridz..

Ridz: what? now? but..

Geet: please ridz I can't stay away from maan, not specially when he is hurt, I had hurt him very badly, please I wanna go back'

Ridz: huya kya ye to bol sakti hain..

Geet: no, I can't please try to understand me ridz, maan won't like me telling our small small fight to my friends, its better we solve it together' geet dipped her head in guilt for not saying anything to her frnd, but ridz looked at her proudly'.

Ridz: meri gudia badhi hogayi'

Both hugged each other, and next they were all set to leave shimla, armaan told them maan had informed armaan n abhay when he was leaving and instructed them to take care of geet but as geet herself want to go to meet maan, they won't stop her'

Precap: back to delhi, maan shouting on geet.. geet cry and????

Thanks for all the likes and comments, sorry for not replying anyone, I was held up with my own misery.. please keep showering ur love or I will become more lazy... I m highly disappointing with the decreasing Likes and comment' and if likes decrease like this I have to shut down the ff, as if there will be no readers why will I carry it then'.

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Silent waters run deeper
so true
The MSK nobody knows what runs in him
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Fantastic update Tich😃

Maan took care of all inspite of not being around them
Geet's comfort n security his utmost concern

Chalo Raghav hitched n Maan will be relieved😆

Geet feeling guilty for loosing her temper n hurting Maan
Maan guilty for the same
but both chose to be silent

Maan left😲
Geet ko chod ke😭

Precap Drama in Delhi🤓
Geet Maan ki bajaayegi
ke Maan Geet ki

Me waiting already

Edited by heytal - 12 years ago

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