New York Times - Imp Note: Page 52 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
That was just beautifulll great job hun 😊 im becoming greedy i want more and more lol.. Plz try to update as soon as u can... Btw i like saravana bhavan and their idlis lol..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: walkintomylifex

Apologies H, I can barely keep my eyes open, I am down with a fever :( hence the delayed & not very detailed comment.


Just wanted to say that I loved everything about this chapter, and the handhold part was definitely worth a special mention - it does indeed signify something much more than friendship between the two.

Feel better Fozia!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
he couldn't tell who drew more comfort off the other then, like a long wait had ceased to be.

How beautiful. Amongst all that misery, to find each other. Doobte huwe ko tinke ka sahara...
I loved the title of the chapter and how it came to be.
@Onir: lovely analysis. I look forward to your comments and analysis to round it off for me. It is hard to improve on perfection but your analysis is just that extra ice cream with the warm gulab jamun. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
ANOTHER beautiful update... containing evr small bits of perfection...

her faintng- most xpected...
Dadi' s stares n their interpretatn- mst intrstng...
Yash's gratitude- mst acknowldgng...
her clng him on chat-mst surprisng...
the rain-mst wantd...
LINKING OF HANDS- mst serenic...

n thn there ws HIM n there ws HER...

love

SANJH
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: mayukha

No microwave biryani for me. There are certain things that I absolutely prefer the authentic way and biryani is one such.
Not that I don't like the freshly cooked but I can't explain why I love the re-heated one more.
That extra zing that comes with it is unmatching and just takes it to another level. The Melange of spices all in a blend yet not losing their individual flavor.
May be this is more like my hot chocolate thing.😃
Love
Mayukha


Mayuka, freshly made biryani tastes nice, but by the time you have to re-heat it, the spices would have settled in better... 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
You made me to drift into another world. It's so Beautiful...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
the moment has been defined n redefined...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: had2bu

he couldn't tell who drew more comfort off the other then, like a long wait had ceased to be.


How beautiful. Amongst all that misery, to find each other. Doobte huwe ko tinke ka sahara...
I loved the title of the chapter and how it came to be.
@Onir: lovely analysis. I look forward to your comments and analysis to round it off for me. It is hard to improve on perfection but your analysis is just that extra ice cream with the warm gulab jamun. 😆

The underlined sentence... liked it, but kaun doob raha tha aur kaun kise sahara de raha tha? It was more like both were drowning & supporting each other but for their own reasons.
It feels good to know that someone looks forward to my comments...😃
Yummy... icecream with warm gulab jamun... I really love this combo... it tastes awesome...😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 6th.Element


You caught my contemplation there. I did meditate on it for the longest time and then gave up. But I only needed a push to go back to calling it Chath.

"Chath pe..." she said, her voice a meek whisper, "Can you come over? I want to meet you..."

He didn't need her to tell him what she meant by Chath and he liked that she referred to it as Chath - instead of sit-out - making it more personal, when the common area was impersonal at best.


Yipee...... Me super duper happy...
Really thanks for making the changes & adding chath to their convo... It just made the part for me all the more beautiful, the way you added in his contemplation on it stating - that the place was indeed quite personal for them👏... & why she called it so... hayee I'm loving it...😆
Though it was for everyone's use yet it has something that causes it to be a silent abode for these two where they made silent promises, build hopes, comforted each other...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: 6th.Element



He will in due time. 😊 A look into his future.

He looked left and then right and before she could shake her head again for good measure, so that he wouldn't approach him with his proposal again, he dropped to his knees in broad daylight and in the view of all Broadway to see his mighty pleading, "Please...just this once," his eyes wheedling her to give in, while his fingers conjoined as if in prayer.

"Are you crazy, Yash? Get up. Now!" she said, pulling him up, her eyes wide with embarrassment that she was ready to leave NY for good.

Did i tell you that I even like Meera-Yash as a couple? They have an own story of theirs... quite adorable😊
Will be waiting for it too (the said part, I hope it will be the same - at least some what of what it was last time)... as alongwith it I suppose even M-G's relation does move ahead

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