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Ubiquitos

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

And I enjoy silence and surroundings more than anything in this ff. Hopefully Dadima will get to know about Geet, I want her to be with Geet as well.

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Soapoperasrfun

@Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

omg... for now, all I can do is 😍. I will comment when I feel slightly better... I hope that is acceptable given the circumstances... 😃

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Shefali16

@Shefali16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Wow wt a mesmerising nd romantic moment dat ws..
reali luvd the maaneet part

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mayukha

@mayukha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Hi H,

I just remembered having got a PM from one of the IF friends (Arya I think) about the new NYT and I had compared it to "re heated Biryani" and she had a good laugh at the strange analogy.

But today, after having read more than 30 chapters, I stick to the same "re heated Biryani", my favourite, which has has all the right spices as the ingradients slowly yet surely infusing absolute delight into every single grain.

So, I thought it is good to have the Rebecca veiled for all the good reasons and relish the most dlectable "re heated Biryani" version of NYT.

Love

Mayukha

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Soapoperasrfun

@Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

I was just catching up on some comments here and I agree with all of them, but 3 comments caught my special attention 😆

Some one commented on the brilliant role "Silence" plays between them... Cannot agree more... it is like Silence is the language between them, and the few words they exchange are always so "Hot chocolate".

And "re-heated biryani"... I don't know about its analogy with the new version, but it had me craving for some biryani now😛

Someone else commented on "nature"'s perfect influence in all your stories... couldn't agree more.

So anything I say now will be an amalgamation of these and will seem copied...😆. But all those comments summarize exactly how I feel after reading these updates...

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Soapoperasrfun

@Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Oh, I forgot to mention that I simply loved that Geet held onto his hand... every small moment that Maan had experienced with her, she had done it unintentionally... but this one was intentional and it was brilliant. What a perfect moment it was... 👏

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749230

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Re-heated Biryani? 😆

Infusing the flavors into the grain is best done in a handi over smoldering embers. I hope you didn't mean this was stuck in a microwave, the fast food way and served slapdash.

Rebecca's veil...Hmm! Picture tho abhi bakhi hain, mere dost...

Edited by 6th.Element - 13 years ago

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Soapoperasrfun

@Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Faria, seeing you after a long time...

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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

As always...👏👏

Loved the whole description, of when she fainted & he bore her weight on him - the subtle ways of stating the deep connection between them. His pondering - her drifting far away into a state of unconsciousness, where she even in that state clung to him as in "her hand nestling against his chest" but his fate (which also made the weird circumstances they meet each other, her being married & not available to him.) again played spoil-sport by her hand slipping in the curve of her waist as he adjusts her.

He noticing & trying to add meaning to all these minute actions shows his longing & craving to hold onto such memories with all his being, if not store them within him for sustainance.

Loved it... ... he is a man of few words & his actions speaks for him, & he percieves such actions very precious.

Edited by Onir - 13 years ago

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

I also really like the way you include the convos between all the characters of your story...

I know that the main leads are M-G, but yet you don't fail to make us aware of the others too in the picture... especially Meera & Yash. They have very few lines in comparision to M-G, but even the few lines they say are quite impactful & bang on... they deliver the message home.

Showing Yash's trust on Maan by the simple way of him saying that he could sleep knowing that Maan was with the 2 girls... Afterall he is supposed to be the man with these two girls of his life but his conveying of gratitude was too good.

Edited by Onir - 13 years ago