MAANEET SS HEAVEN IN HELL THREAD-1 - Page 36

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
maan attracted towards geet...
geet avoiding maan
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Posted: 12 years ago
wao what an update its awesome ...Loving the flow of emotions and every part of it plz give next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
ossum part dear..
maan falling for geet..
geet feels irritated with his touch..
n thinking she is only guru's
ani sam n geet
nice sam tried to knock her some sense as she is maans wife
maan feeling geet everywhere
gurus athma talking to maan
hope maan accepts his love soon
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Posted: 12 years ago


very painful update...

I am really pissed with this Geet...why she is so rude...how can she say that her husband is no more...her love is no more but her husband is Maan in God and society's eyes...she wants Maan also to die then she will be very happy after watching Annie and Daadi loose another of their loved one...she don't have even little bit of humanity left in her...good human can't even say this type of words for even an enemy and she is saying these things for Maan who is now Daadi, Annie and her only source of strength...she is again back to her old I-HAVE-ONLY-LOST-EVERYTHING-I-AM -THE-ONLY-ONE-BECHARI-HERE...
she don't even care that she is saying this in front of Annie who has already lost her one brother...chi...

thanx for pm...

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Posted: 12 years ago
superb
fantastic update
liked a lot dear
very nicely written
continue soon
waiting for more
waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago











H2 - 17



Maan : why again and again Geet is cuming in my thoughts, how I can think her like tis , no I cant think like tis, she is Guru's , I don't have any place in her heart , I have to control myself, I cant let any one to rule me, no can rule me , Geet cant rule me, Geet cant, Geet, but he stops





Maan : wat im thinking Geet , no she is nothing to me, I cant think her like tis, no she is nothing to me, nothing

GEET IS U R EVERYTHING MAAN

Maan turned hearing te voice

Maan : GURU





Guru : ahan Maan she is everything to u

Maan at once saw Guru , rush to him , hugs him and started to cry like a small kid.

Maan : why u left me, why why u left me

Guru : I didt leave u alone Maan , im always with

Maan broke te hugs, and cares his face

Guru : how are u

Maan : hmm u

Guru : u r lieing to me Maan

Maan turns his face : I failed Guru, im sorry, im failed in fulfilling ur promise

Guru : no Maan my Maan cant fail in anything, he is born to have success in all wat ever he does

Maan smiles sarcartically: no Guru I broke ur trust , im not worth for ur Geet

Guru stares at him :no Maan , Geet is ur 's , only ur's .

Maan looks at him, shocked





Guru : yes Maan , she is never mine, u both are meant to be together, that is fate. Why u running away from ur responsibility, Geet is ur responsibility, she is ur's Maan, accept it and move on


Maan : I cant Guru


Guru : Maan Geet is angel who came into our life, she have to get all te happiness in her Maan, but now tat angel is in sorrow Maan, only u can bring her out from her HELL


Maan smiles : whom ur saying tis Guru, she is already burning in my HELL, yes iim HELL, if I freed her from tis relation she will be happy


Guru : ur wrong Maan , who said ur HELL, but im seeing HEAVEN IN TIS HELL.


MAAN was shocked & looked at Guru,


Guru : we are one soul Maan, whom know u better than me, wen we miles apart, we were feeling each other, tat one u cant deny, yes naa


Maan nodes his head


Guru : then how cum u say ur wrong,.others can think u r devil who can make they life hell, but for me ur angel Maan, who burned himself in tis revenge protecting his family, who lost his childhood , his every dreams, . I know Maan wat u are now is not my Maan , who will cum running after me for every smell things, but now u making others to run fearing u. I lost my innocent Maan who loves to be pampered by everyone, but now changed into a rude man.


Maan rest his head on Guru ki shoulder

Guru : Maan u should have a happy life with ur Geet . don't worry I will be with u in every step.pls Maan save ur Geet before she broke into pieces.


Guru : u will say naa, u will get wat u want at any cost, then now get ur Geet , win her heart


Maan looks at him : she will accept me

Guru:It is not so easy, but I know my Maan can do it

Maan : is it not wrong to force some one to love

Guru : wen my Maan starts to talk abt wrong or right, he only knows to break te rules

Maan see here and there,

Guru : Maan she is ur's Maan, u should bring her out of her pain or else she will leave u forever Maan

Maan shouted : GURU U U

Guru smiles at him : Maan do u love Geet




Maan tilt his head down, in guilty

Guru : Maan say do u love her,

Guru raised Maan ki chin ,

Guru : look at me and say do u love her


Maan : Yes I LOVE GEET, I LOVE HER




Guru : then wat is stopping u

Maan didt say anything

Guru : coz u r thinking she is loves me

Maan didt say anything as he is ashamed of himself to think like tis


Guru : don't ashamed of it Maan, I know abt u. but I want to say she is ur's always, MAAN KI GEET, u have to make her realize ur love Maan, she is so nave and innocent Maan, how we mould she form like tat, so now it is ur responsibility to make ur Geet.

Maan : is it possible Guru coz im HELL, AND SHE IS ANGEL


GURU : SOON SHE WILL SEE HER HEAVEN IN HELL, MAAN,

Maan stares at him and hugs him, Guru kiss him on his forehead.

Guru : ok Maan it is time for me to leave

Maan : no Guru pls don't leave me, I want u

Guru : I will be always with u Maan , look after Dadi and Anni and Geet. I want see my Maan and Geet having a happy life , will u do tis for me Maan,

Maan nodes his head: yes Guru and hugs him

Guru once again kissed him and went away , Maan too looks at him how he is vanishing in te air

Maan screamed : Guru u u u

Maan : Guru I will fulfill ur promises , I will make my Geet mine .i will make Geet to realize my love for her. Geet ur mine, MAAN KI GEET , for tat if I have to show my MSK face tat too I will do to get u


Maan smirks, : wait Geet im cuming to make u mine forever.



Here in km,


Dadi was lying on te bed ad Geet giving her te medicine





Dadi :Maan still didt cum yet

Geet : no Dadi,

Dadi got worried, eyeing Geet she started her drama

Dadi : im so worried abt Maan, Geet he is going far away from us, wat will i do

Geet sensing Dadi ki restless : Dadi not like tat he is having meeting, u dont worry Dadi , pls dont get tense

Dadi : how i will not worry Geet, he is doing wta he likes , he dont care abt any one. now see he left te office at afternoon itself but still he didt cum

Geet : Dadi he will be struck in some meetings

Dadi : hmm u supporting him ahan, ok leave , u go and sleep i will serve wen he cums

Geet : Dadi wat is tis, u take rest , now only u had ur medicines, and ur saying u r going to wake up

Dadi : then wat i will do , he will not have his dinner

Geet : Dadi i will serve him, u take rest

Dadi : no Geet i dont want to trouble u, i will

Geet stops : shhh Dadi enough, now i know from whom ur grandson took te attitude by not listing to others, u

Dadi pouting her lips : not like tat

Geet : then chup chap sleep now, i will serve and give him nice dose for cuming late

Dadi smiles at her : gudngt beta

Geet : gudngt Dadi

Geet switch off te light and went out






At 11' clock, Maan enter km


Geet : stop right there MR.Khurana





Maan was shocked and thinking at tis time who is waiting for him and look at Geet

Geet : wat u think of urself, wat ever u think u will do, u wont think abt others who will wait for and get worried abt u

Maan stares at her

Geet : don't stare at me, Dadi was worried abt u, and now only she slept, , cum have dinner

Maan : and u Geet

Geet was confused : wat me

Maan : nothing , I will freshen and cum, u keep te food, saying tis he went to his room


After some time Maan came and sat in his chair, Geet stared to serve him,


Maan : u too sit Geet , and have dinner with me

Geet was shocked to see Maan asking her to have dinner with him : it is ok Maanji, I will have it later

Maan holds her hand and made her sit beside him and started to serve her plate


Maan in his stern voice : have it




Geet murmured : DUST DHANAV, suddenly wat happened to him


Maan heard it : wat wat u said repeat it

Geet : no nothing and started to eat her dinner


Maan was admiring Geet , Geet took te dal bowl, Maan too hold it touching her hand, Geet felt something and pulls her hand away as once,


Geet again hold te roti ki plate and Maan too took tat at te same time, Geet glared at him

Geet : Maanji wat u doing

Maan with innocent face: wat i did



Geet got irritates, Maan snap his shoulder and holds te water jug , at te same time Geet too holds it,

Maan : see now who took it first

Geet : i only had it

Maan : no im first

both of them , started to pulls te water jug and suddenly Geet pulled it , te water splits on her dress

Geet : oh babaji Maanji wta u did

Maan : wat i did u only pulled it

Geet glared at him and started to snap her dress, Maan too stood up and came near Geet, took her duppatta , Geet was shocked to see te way Maan holding her duppatta









Maan took te duppata and started to wipe her face , both look at each other , then he started to dry her dress , Geet tighten her fist ,


Geet : it is ok Maanji i will do my self

Maan looks at her, Geet turns her gaze

Geet : i will clean te table

Maan turned others side: hmmm

Geet cleared te table, and Maan too helped her

Geet : it is ok Maanji I will do but stopped with one glare from Maan


Both cleaned te table and Geet and Geet try to go , but Maan holds her hand, Geet look at him shocked and try to get her hand from him





Maan came near her , and standing so close to Geet , Geet felt burning,


Maan : gudngt Geet and left her hand and went to his room,


Geet was shocked and saw her hand , which he was holding and looks at him who gave her a smirking look before climbing te stairs



Geet (st) : wat happen to him suddenly, she came out of her thought hearing Maan ki voice


Maan : Geet bring me coffee i will be in study

Geet : coffee at tis time

Maan : hmm and he went off


Geet : DUST DHANAV , coffee at tis time, only ghost will have, hmm

Geet took coffee , went to Maan ki study room and knocks,

Maan : cum in Geet

Geet : Maanji coffee, she gave , before she turn to leave , Maan

Maan :Geet sit

Geet sat

Maan : do u have any work

Geet murmured : at tis time peoples will be sleeping but see here he is asking any work

Maan : Geet im asking u,

Geet : hmm no

Maan : good , now type tis

Geet was shocked : wat

Maan : why u dont know to type

Geet : no not like tat but

Maan : then type, im feeling tired

Geet : hmm, she took te laptop and started to type


Maan relax on his couch stretching his legs on te table, sipping his coffee and admiring his Geet.


Geet felt a burning gaze on her and she looks at him and asking like wat

Maan nodes nothing and closed his eyes

after some time , Geet finish typing and looks at Maan who was sleeping





Geet : he is so tired , then wat like a machine he is working


Geet made him to lie properly on te couch and covers him with duvet, switch off te light and went to her room..


Maan open his eyes, and smiles I LOVE U GEET





















PRECAP : MAANEET

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thanku mohi for te editing pic.muah

Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow..superb update
Love this maan
Can't wait for the nxt update
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Posted: 12 years ago
superp update...love guru and maan's convo..finally maan realize his love for geet..now geets turn
..wonderful..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
so finally maan ko iqal aa gayi

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