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vrinda22 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
maan made them think he left them
now he will save geet with his securities
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
loved the update
maan is very shrewd
continue soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting 2 c wht maan has in mind!!
superb...
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Posted: 12 years ago
KNEW THAT MAAN HAD SOME PLAN UP HIS SLEEVE
HE CAN RECOGNIZE HIS GEET'S VOICE
Edited by punam2712 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update...
how can a father do this...


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Posted: 12 years ago
  • aoww the start was tooo touchy, sheessshhh Maan feeling so alone and worn out not able to find his Geet and here she is struggling all that with non else then her own father !! Shit how can a father do this to her own daughter, i have no words for it, i cant even word it, hell i wonder aise bhi fathers honge duniya main !! If yess i have never seen such crap, i am highly blessed may be I have done good that's why i am born with such a beautiful blessing off my maa papa as my parents who more of my besties than any other frnd, sheeshhh what was that !!

    I thought Geet was aware of her feeling but nopes even Geet is a stupid, yet cant say anything know it is damn diff to understnd ur own feelings with ur bestfrnd, we cant just co relate..sheeshh dont she know the power of the MSK ?? If she know she would have known no one can touch him !! Wo bhaag kyu nahi jaati...again heart is the reason to overshadow ur brain !!

    Aaahhh is Rohan ka khun karne ka mann hai n dat to wid that so called fathers of her's shit !!

    Hushhh meera ne btaa dia Maan ko nahi to pata nahi kya hota !! Finally Maan waha pahunch to gaya !!

    I loved the convo n ur way to xpress how was she feeling for Maan, n how was he concerned for her, Just Loved It

    and then the bang on end...LoLz i just Love MSK...mmuuahh

    ab jo bhi hoga sahi hoga coz MSK hai apni mishty k paas

    ooOps casanova hai apni junglie billi k paas heheheheh


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Posted: 12 years ago
n sorryyy for late reply 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

hi friends hw r u all ..?
hope every one enjoyed ..
here i am back with another updated of FIL ..
sorry i know i am veru late but just cant help ...
studies ...net n electricity issues r not helping me at all ..
bye the way i had an awesom physics test ...
now today is english test ...
pllzzz dua karna mene kuch bhi nahi parha hai ...

here it is ..

Friends In Love ...😳
part 9 ..


Maan (having a smirk) : PLAN TOU ABB CHORO HUYA HAI ADI …WOH TOU SIRF NATAK THA …

Its exactly 15min. …. Mr.Chaudhry came in geet's room to assure rohan that MSK has left along with police force and now everything is in there control …after a long convo regarding the drama they will be creating in front of rohan's mother Mr.Chaudhry left the room leaving behind Rohan with a hungry eyes wandering on a sweaty scared geet ….while daai jan was still captivate in his men's grip struggling under their strong grip …..praying for her dear child's safety ….

A fearful silence was prevailing in the room …..with sweating geet scared for the worst situation in her life ….scared witnessing the lusty gaze of her would be husband …cuddling in herself …closing her tearful eyes praying for some miracle to happen …remembering the assuring eyes of her best best ..holding her heart in her tied hands …mumbling maan's name … shooting numerous prayers to her babaji for help …just to save her dignity ..to save her from that lustful gaze of that pervert standing in front of her … to freeze this moment n get her disappear some where from this material world …



Indeed this was the most horrified sight in front of her she could ever witness …the lustful gaze of Rohan taking the hell out of her .. the cunning smile on his face while talking with his mother on call making her tremble with fear …

While on the other hand outside farm house all the Guards from KC were surrounding the farmhouse making sure that none of the guards would notice the change in the air …n steadily covered the house making a well planed trap by non another than our own MSK ..

Maan : adi guards ko ache se brief tou kardiya hai mene but still ill be close with them in order to have a chk that nothing goes wrong .

Adi : but sir that will be utterly dangerous for u to be the mid of our n choudhry's guards …

Vicky : that's right bro …wahan fire hone ke chances hain n aap iss tarha guards ke saath rahe tou ..

Maan : tou kuch nahi …kuch nahi huga ..aur waise bhi hum yahan geet ko bachane ke liye aaye hain ….aur mien kisi bhi halat mien koi risk nahi lee sakta ..commessioner ke saath yahan aakar mene itna tou confirm kar hi liya ke geet iss hi farmhouse mien hai …n she is fine …

but I know it very well ke yahan se geet ko nikalna itna asaan nahi hai …humari ek galti aur geet ki jaan ko buhat bara khatra ho sakta hai …jo insaan apni hi beti ko kidnap kar ke Rohan Garewal jaise insaan ke saath uss ki shaddi plan karne jitni ghatiya harkat kar sakta hai wooh geet ki jaan lene se pehle bhi ek baar nahi soche ga aur mien kabhi Chaudhry ko yeh mauqa nahi dee sakta Vicky ….

Vicky : I know bhai ….i know geet aapke liye kya hai ..but mere liye aap bhi itne hi important hain jitne ke geet …mien aap dono mien se kisi nahi khoo sakta bhai ..

Maan : relax vicky ..kuch nahi huga …geet ki jaan bachaye bina mien nahi marne wala aur Maan ke hote huye geet ko koi kuch nahi kar sakta …KUCH BHI NAHI …

Gautam ( guard's head) : mk all is set …farmhouse ka poora out look hum ne observe kar liya hai ….decoration person ke saath andar jaa kar mene khud aapke orders ke mutabik saare loops check kiye hain ziada guards nahi hain andar we have a strong side …just waiting for ur orders …KC ke guards ko 10min bhi nahi lage gien farmhouse ke aas paas jo 7 body guards hain unn ko under control karne mien …

Maan : that's too well but yaad rahe koi galti nahi hone chahiye mien geet ki jaan ko koi khatra nahi hone dee sakta …tum ne notice kiya ke chaudhry ne geet ko kuanse room mien lock kiya huga …

Gautam : yes sir its only 2 rooms being locked up in the whole house n I heard a women's voice coming from the last room on top right corner …may thr ..

Maan : great mere signal par tum chaudhary ke guards par attack karoo ge n then mien wahan uss window se geet ke room mien enter karoon ga …but make sure andar ke logoon ko iss attack ka andaaza nahi hona chahiye …adi u be here with the cars ready if any change occurs in the plan …n vicky u will be here with the guards …n dare u come inside at any cost ..

Vicky : no way bhai mien aapko akele nahi jane dene wala …its all too dangerous ..

Maan : bachoo jaisi baat mat karoo vicky agar mujhe kuch hota hai tou geet ko tumhain hi bachana hai n more over mujhe apni jaan pyaari hai uss jangli billi ko pata chala ke meene tumhain iss sab mien involve kiya hai tou sach mien mera buhat boora haal huga ….

N don't worry bro mujhe kuch nahi huga just trust me ….mien apni geet ko bacha kar wapis lee aaonga …

Here in geet's room …

Rohan was smilling slyly …taking his steps towards geet …while geet was backing on her tied toes …shaking her head …tears were non stop-ly following from her eyes …n her attempts to get herself free from those ropes were getting even more swift with each of rohan's steps …n finally he came n sat just mili inches away from geet ..with geet totally sandwiched b/w the wall in that pervert …tracing his finger tips on the sweat drop falling from her forehead …he traced the cotton cloth tied on her mouth ..😡

Rohan : oh darling that must be hurting u na …but then what could I do u were hell bent to make that police officer believe that u are here trapped after that MSK left ….gosh geet baby the day I met u 6years back I knew that u are an intelligent person but na na na …u were using ur brain in wrong direction ….

While geet was trying her best to create as much distance as she can b/w them …her heart throbbing violently under his lusty gaze ….finally pleading him to let her go with her teary hazels …covering herself with her tied hands as much as she could feeling disgusted with his touch over her face …trembling with fear with his voice …

Rohan : oh girl wht happened scared of me ….don't be see I am going to be your husband ….but u know wht u would have clamed u 6years back the time I saw u hiding in chaudhry's house but then ur j*** uncle came in my room n took u off ………but just see the game destiny has played my mom saw ur pic in my file …fortunetly she didn't got the other girl's pics …but now coz she thinks I love u so we will have to play this marriage game …till then u behaive as a good Indian bride …okiee baby ..🤢

Listening to all what she would have to do in near future just made her even more scared …n then remembering the last times incident when she met him was the even more deadly thought …n next she saw his hands advancing towards her face …fear took over her entire existence n she moved up on the wall in an attempt to escape that touch of his …but failed n he removed her cotton piece freeing her mouth from his lips …

Rohan : but u see since its still hours for my mom to reach here …its nothing bad to have a good cozy time with my would be wife …n I suppose it is the duty of a wife to entertain his husband …n for now my entertainment will be to taste u honey …

Geet was sitting petrified seeing the dark lusty eyes roaming all over her body as if a hungry lion eyes his prey …trembling with the intensity of his voice …the commanding voice of rohan took the hell out of her …numb with the realization of her vulnerability in front of this man made her cry ..n the only thought came to her mind n heart was nothing but maan ….just a feel ..a trust …a believe that no one else can save her other than him …an un believable trust which made her scream out of fear …the only name which she was able to word out was non other than his ….closed her eyes shouting at top of her voice …

Geet : MAAN …!!!

The moment rohan hovered over geet in attempt to kiss her …a strong powerful blow came n he was blown away to hit the side wall …n next moment maan with full control fought with the 3 men present thr …punching hard on 1st man's stomach making him fall on the ground he knocked out the other with a thudding kick on his stomach then came to last one who was still holding daai jan's hand n took him off his feets cluching his throat in his hand making him chocked n next rohan came from behind hitting maan on his back which loosened his hold n daai jan ran towards the trembling geet who was still in the same moment never recognized what was happening around her n untied the ropes of her hand n legs …sweating holding her knees close to her self …

While maan was beating rohan to nth level …stocking his knee in rohan's stomach then punching him on his face making him split out the blood …n that's how geet found him right in front of her …n a small whisper came from her mouth along with another long tear trail …

Geet : maan …



But her tear stricken face … trembling form most of all the disgusting words of rohan he heard while standing on the window made him furious to the core …his eyes were blood red jaw stiffened …muscles clenched …every blow was depicting his rage …fury n anger …but this made geet even more scared fearing for him yet again looking at his bleeding hand …the teary eyes of geet became pleading ..the scared face was now depicting only longingness …trembling she was still holding her self close cuddling more n more to her self …

N the pleading longing eyes of geet made maan stop …throwing rohan on the ground he made his way towards her with heavy steps ….looking at his strong fighter jangli billi trembling …scared …the blood oozing out of her soft hands ..the cut on the end on her petal lips …the red marks all over her body …everything made him feel horrible to even think of the level of torture his best friend was going through …the mere thought of something happening to her made his entire existence tremble with fear n his breath got caught in his throat with just the thought what if he would have been late … bending on his knees sitting in front of her …he was just not able to look into her eyes …fearing to see the pain in those big duo shape hazels …the fear of self break down in such a situation halted his thinking abilities n he started to stood up ..n that's when geet clenched his hand ever so tightly n the very moment maan realized that how much she is petrified with all the events …



Without a second thought maan just crushed her into his arms …making her hide herself in his embrace …making his own heart believe that she is here with him …making the moment freeze for both of them …forgetting the worst 2 days of their life ever …feeling the peace to be in each others embrace …while geet was continuously snuggling close to him …trembling with fear …fearing If she is imagining it …scared if that rohan will again try to abuse her …petrified what her father might do with her …n maan was just holding her close to him making her believe that he is here with her …n now nothing will go wrong just to remove the fear from her …hugging her like his life depends on this very moment …trying to stop her heart wrenching tears ..rubbing her back to sooth her violent heart beats …making his hold even more tight to stop her trembling …parting her …cupping her face in his palms ..maan kissed her forehead n held on thr for a long moment …while geet held his both wrist crying …sobbing mumbling something b//w her hiccups ..

In here down stairs when thr was no response from maan that if he has landed in the correct room n if geet is safe …vicky after a long argument entered in the farmhouse along with gautam n all the gaurds of KC ..n took hold of all the chaudhry's gaurds after a bit of healthy fight …n then vicky started his plan to punish Mr.chaudhry …tied his hands n made him fall in the pool of ghee …which was placed in the wedding mandap …n his whole face was now drenched with the oily material 😆….grabbing him from his neck ..took a blade from one of his men …n shaved right side of his head …while guards were searching the house n freed sid from his room ..n gautam made his way towards the room maan landed in from the window …

While here in geet's room rohan was laying flat in the pool of blood n geet of clinging on maan …cluching his shirt in her fist …crying saying sorry nth time n maan state was just worst with each passing second seeing her like this …n geet was all the while trying to confess something to maan in b/w her sobs n hiccups just not able to get the words out of her throat …



Geet : sorry …I am sorry maan (sob) ..mien darr gayi thi …buhat darr gayi thi ..dad ne kaha (sob) …dad ne kaha ke who aapko mar deinge …

Maan(with mist eyes n painful voice) : shh ..its okiee …dekho mien aagay na ..i am sorry mujhe dair hugayi …par see sab theek hai …hum …hum yahan se chale jayein ge ..n tum plzz chup hujayo geet …plzzz shona tumhien pata hai na mien nahi dekh sakta tumhain roote huye …hum chale jayein ge yahan se ….tum daroo mat kuch nahi hoga ..

Seeing the concern n love in maan's eyes geet again broke into numerous tears hiding her face in his embrace …regretting her each word ..which she said to him on call though she knew he was not at all angry on her for saying all that rubbish but she was ….she was hating herself to have accused him …her own best friend ..

Geet (still In maan's embrace) : sorry maan …mujhe maaf kardo(sob) ….meri waja se sab huya …mujhe wapis hi nahi aana chahiye tha(sob) …sab meri galti hai …sab (sob) …6 saal pehle bhi dad ne mujhe aise hi London zabardasti leja kar rohan ke paas bhej diya tha …(sob)

Maan (still in hug furious with the new piece of info …caressing her back to sooth her hiccups ) : geet jo kuch huya uss ko bhol jaoo …abb jo karna hai who mien dekh loonga …u just don't worry ..theek hai …abhi plzz rona band karo aur chalo ill get u out of here …chalo (n eyes towards the door )

Geet (parting from the hug… scared for her father might hurt him) : nahi ….hum saath …maan dad …plzzz …dad aapko kuch …hum iss tarha kaise jaa sakte ..

Maan (cupping her face removing the tear trail from her face looking straight into her eyes) : kuch nahi huga ….mujhe pata hai tum ne sab kuch mujhe bachane ke liye kiya …par mera yaqeen karoo I promise kuch nahi huga …tumhare dad mera aur tumhare kuch nahi bigaar sakte …

Geet (pleading with teary eyes still scared) : par maan aapko kuch …mien nahi dekh poongi …

Maan : jab meri jangli billi mere saat tou kisi ki kya majal ke mujhe kuch kare …han
M don't worry mien abhi bhi tai chi practise karta hoon ….just trust urSado Singh geet ..

Geet : I do …more than my self but dad

Maan : if u do trust me then no more questions …hum jayenge wooh bhi tumhare dad ke saamne …Maan Singh Khurana kabhi peeche se waar nahi karta ..😳

N here vicky was hell bend to take the hell out of chuadhry just left him to take breaths n made his way towards sid who was having problem to breath since he was locked up in an isolated room …n the guards were just checking every knock n corner then clearing all the possible evidences which could creat any fuzz later onn …while gautam requested vicky to go back since he has seen maan fine with geet in the upper room n has unlocked it mk will never leave him if he came to knew that he permitted vicky to accompany him …but vicky was adamant that he will never leave before he see his bro n geet fine in fron of him …

The moment maan n geet stood up to come out of the room ..rohan kicked the back of maan making him fall outside the room …n geet screamed out of fear to see the turn of eveat then hurried 2wards maan …

But the moment geet touched maan's shoulder to get him stand up rohan snapped her hand n pushed her towards him jerking her already bruised hands …but next moment felt a tight punch right on his face making him fall on the ground by non other than maan …n geet hugged him tight …hiddin herself fron that pervert …while maan was seething in anger …his eyes turned red with fury n he parted geet from thr hug n eyes daai jan to handle her n made his way towards rohan ..beating him furiously he made him fall on the stair case punching him with full force …turning him red n blue …wanting to get the eyes balls out of his circuit …twisting his hand almost fracturing him with a powerful blowing kick in his stomach …knocking him out …

Geet was standing on the rim cluching it hard n her hands …seeing the rage in maan's eyes n the sight of her father ..in numerable tear made thr way out of her eyes …no matter how in human the man is but the reality remains the same he is her father …a person coz of whome she came into being …her mothers' love …her own dad …n never she could stand the sight of him being hurt …seeing the plead in geet's tear stricken face maan closed his eyes knowing she could naver take her father being hurt …clinching his fist maan made his way towards Mr.Chaudhry n turned his face harshly towards geet ..



Maan : dekho uss ko ….jis larki ko takleef ke elawa kuch nahi diya aapne aaj bhi aapki takleef par aansoon baha rahi hai …jis ki zindagi barbaad karna chahte thay wohi aapki zindagi maang rahi ….sharam aani chahiye apne baap hone par …dua hai meri ke Upar wala aap jaise ghatiya insaan ko kabhi beti jaisa itna khubsoorat tohfaa kabhi na dee …


While vicky just made his way towards geet n hugged her like his dear life … n geet reciprocated the hug ..n cried hugging him ..looking at the sight of his little brother sid sitting in a corner ashamed …n then her father who was still looking at maan with fury …all the guards who were surrounding maan ..n turned her face the other side in the hug to avoid the unbearable sight …

Vicky : thank god tum theek hoo ..pata hai mien aur bhai kitna darr gaye tha …don't worry geetu abb sab theek huga ..bhai hai na wooh sab theek kar deenge …hum chale jaeinge yahan se …u just don't worry ..

Its 1hour since then …

Maan is still watching the most peaceful sight he could ever have in his life …his jangli billi sleeping in his arms …resting her head on his heart …contented is the word for maan …..having her close with him …for him ….to see the fearful expression of geet is now almost gone …the way she was trembling is no more …she is in a deep slumber due to the extensive exhuation she went through n the mental trauma was way too much for her to handle …n the effect of pain killer also but for maan this is all what he wanted …

Everything what he planned went accordingly …going thr along with commessioner …clearing the legal way ..then noticing the address of the most deserted place in the outskits of delhi he knew it is rare to find any human thr ..planning the whole trap to get geet out of thr then leaving with guatam n KC guard thr to take those father n NRI to one of maan's dungeon whr they will be kept for the a couple days …till he gets a suitable form of punishment for them to make his best friends life nothing less then hell …

But for now his attention was to make sure geet is safe from all the legal issues … n get her out of this shocking phase …which he knew is going to be a difficult one knowing the sensitive nature she possess n how reserved she can get even with him …he was still not sure what exactly will he do to get her out from those fearful memories …….in all this the only thing clear in maan's mind was that no ways he Is going to let geet lone from now onn …what ever it takes but he will never leave her alone to face this mean world …

He was still in his thoughts when geet winced n twitched her brows …n maan guessed she might be remembering the same dreadful event …making his told tight on her back eliminating the minimal gap b/w thr body maan cuddled her more into him …making her sure that no one os going to harm her anymore …assuring her senses that he is thr with her …n in few minutes geet relaxed feeling the warmth of maan's embrace ..snuggling closer adjusting her head more in his crock of neck she again drifted to a peaceful sleep …maan smiled feeling her relaxed n kissed her hair …tightened his hold n adjusted his head leaning back on the seat …feeling the lost peace all over again …with his jangli billi safe in his arms …

After few minutes …a black car came in front of maan's car with a very fast speed making vicky stop the car …n the guards from the other cars rush towards the front …maan was alert if they were by any chance from chaudhry's guards …n glanced geet making sure she is still sleeping …n took a relief breath seeing her in a deep sleep …then saw a guards standing in fron of his door ..opening the window the guard informed maan that the person wants to talk with him n left… maan was still confused while vicky was not less but then asked maan to proceed n be careful he will be here with geet …

Maan : aur iss baar kuch bhi hoo tum car se bahar nahi aarahe ho samjhe ..!!

Walking few step maan found a middle age person ..by looks he was looking in the mid 30s dressed in Armani black suit …french beird ..looking a decent person …maan looked at him with an indimidating look trying to figure out who is he …n that's when the other person spoke ..

Person : I am Vineet Singh ..geet ka maternal uncle ..usski maa ka bhai aur geet ka mama ..

Maan (with least intrest) : jaan sakta hoon iss tarha meri car ko block karne ka maqsad kiya hai …

Vineet : well MSK se milna itna bhi asaan nahi hai aur daai jan ki call ke baad tum se milna zarori hugaya tha ….1 hours pehle daai jan se baat hui mien delhi ek conference ke liye aaya tha …but to tell u the truth geet ko dhondne aaya tha …coz who mujhe bataye bagair Italy se India aagayi thi ..

Maan : daai jan se baat kar ke aap jaan chuke honge ke geet mere saath kyun hai aur kaise tou mujh se milne ki waja …

Vineet : yeh bhi jaanta hoon ke geet tumhare saath kaise hai …yeh bhi ke kyun hai …aur yeh bhi ke tum dono ek dosre ko pyaar karte hoo ..😲

Listening to the last set of words maan looked at him surprised …tongue tied for a second ..confused …looking at the little smile that was playing on vineet's face …n then looked away thinking for a reasonable explanation for thr relationship …n that's when vineet continued ..

Vineet : relax young man …geet tum se pyaar karti hai yeh tou mien 6 saal pehle hi jaan gaya tha jab uss ne apni izzat se bhi ziada ihmiyat tumhari zindagi ko di …

Maan instantly looked back at him …furious with the thought that all this fuzz happened in the past also n he wasn't thr to save his jangli billi …anger rushed his vein clenching his fist turning his knuckles white ….he was again remembering the frightened face of geet …n asked in a dead cold voice ..

Maan : 6 saal pehle london mien kya hua tha geet ke saath …😡

Vineet : relax ..jo luch bhi hua it's a past ..abb uss pqar ghussa huna ka koi faida nahi hai …jo kuch aaj hua tha samajh lo 6 saal baad waqt ne apne aap ko phir repeat kiya hai …uss waqt bhi chaudhry geet ko zabardasti london le gaya tha rohan ke paas uss ke room mien chor kar chala aaya tha ….yeh keh kar ke agar geet ne uss ki baat na maani tou who geet ke best friend yani ke tumhain jaan se mar de ga ….

Maan's face lost his color with the revealiation …the fact that his innocent friend was being trapped …n that too in the name of his life just made him halt in his track …not able to fantome the thoughts …the dreadful sight of geet with rohan played in his mind n he hit the tree with full force making his hand bleed …

Vineet : yeh sab karne se kuch nahi huga ….6 saal pehle mene geet ko bacha tha …par court mien yeh prove nahi kar paya ke yeh sab chaudhry ki planning thi ….magar geet ko London universities se parhai karne par majboor kar diya tha ….aur iss hi liye itne saloon tak geet bach saki …
Par iss baar tumne geet ko bachaya hai …aur meri tarha tum bhi chaudhry ko Indian law ke saamne culprit prove nahi kar sakte …aur who geet ke dad ki hasiyat se case ko tackle kar sakta hai …

Maan : mere hote huye geet tak chaudhry ka saaya bhi nahi pohanch sakta ..

Vineet : I am not a fool …buhat ache se janta hoon ke chaudhry aur rohan tumhari custody mien hain …par kab tak …kab tak rakh paaoge unko aur maanlo ke life time ke liye rakh bhi liya tou geet ka kiya ..han geet tou akele hi reh jaayegi na …

Maan : wooh akeli nahi hai …mien uss se kabhi akela nahi horne wala …mien rahoon ga humesha usske saath …usska saathi ban ke …har mor har kadam par ..

Vineet : aur jis din tumhain apna jeevan saathi mil gaya uss din ….

Maan shot a glare towards him …n looked away ..

Maan : koi bhi insaan geet ki jaga nahi lee sakta aur aapko geet ki chinta karne ki zarorat nahi hai ….mien apni dost ka khayaal khud rakh sakta hoon ..

Saying so he started walking towards his car leaving the deserted place …while vineet started talking at the top of his voice …

Vineet : DOST wah kiya dosti hai …jahan dost apni dost ki har dharkan ko pehchanta hai …uss ki aankh mien ek aansoon bhi nahi dekh sakta …jis aawaaz se jaan sakta hai ke who sach keh rahi hai hoot …khush hai dukhi … jis ke liye apni jaan ki bhi parwah nahi karta …

Mujh se nahi kam se kam apne aap se tou sach bolo maan singh khurana … ya phir jhoot hai who concern jo tum geet ke liye dekhate hoo ….natak hai who sab jo tum ne aaj tak kiya hai geet ke liye … sach tou yeh hai ke tum dono ka righta hi bi bunyaad hai …

Maan stopped in his track n turned towards him with great pace …standing in front of him …grabbing him with his collar …

Maan : ek aur shabd nahi ….mere aur geet ke rishtey ke bare mien kuch bhi galat bolne ki galti mat kareyega …warna mien bhol jaaonga ke aap get ke mama hain …aur rahi baat ristey ki tou hain karta hoon mien geet se pyaar 😳…buhat pyaar karta hoon mien uss ko zindagi bhi wahi hai aur zindagi jeene ki waja bhi 😃…magar iss ka matlab yeh nahi ke meri dosti khokli hai …6 saal ke pyaar ke liye 14 saal ki dosti ko nahi khoo sakta mien samjhe aap …aur dobara kabhi mat kehna ke geet ke liye mene jo kuch kiya who dekhawa tha 😡…kyun ke sirf ek wohi hai jis ke saamne mien kabhi dikhawa nahi kar sakta ..👏

Vineet smiled at his victory to make him confes knowing the power of love when it is been abused …putting his hand on maan's shoulder with an understanding look started saying for which he was here….

Vineet : itna pyaar chah kar bhi apne dil mien chupa nahi paaoge tum …ek na ek din poori dunya jaan jayegi ke jis insaan ko log cold heart rutheless business man samajhte hain who kisi ko itna pyaarkarta hai …

Tou iss se pehle ke dunya wale geet ko jaa kar batayein tum khud hi bata doo

Maan looked at him with uter surprise ..n guessed he actually wanted him to confess his love …

Maan : geet mujh se pyaar nahi karti uss ke liye mien aaj bhi sirf usska best friend hoon …n honestly I am happy being that ..geet ke saath tou hoon ..aur geet ki muskurahat se ziada aur kuch nahi chahiye mujhe …

Vineet : maan ek larki jo 17 saal ki umar mien kisi ki jaan bachane ke liye jo sirf usska dost hai apni jaan apni izzat tak bhol jaaye …tou ussko koi kya mane ga …dosti …

Geet aur tumhare rishtey ko dekha jaye tou Shayad jawaab hai hain …kyun tum dono uss waqt mile jab geet apni zindagi ke ek bilkul naaye pehlu se mili jahan who kisi ko nahi janti thi …tum uss ke paas aaye …uski zzindagi ka hissa bane aur phir sab se ache dost bhi …
Tpu ek pal ke liye mien yeh maan sakta hoon ke geet apne best friend ko bachana chahti thi …17 saal ki ek nadaan bachi jo aadmi ki lusty feeling ke bare mien kuch nahi janti who yeh kar sakti thi ..

Par phir kya …24 saal ki jawaan larki ….London mien rehne ke bad bhi kabhi kisi larke se relation tou door ki baat ek free casual friendship bhi nahi ki ….kabhi kisi ko lekar kuch feel nahi kiya …kyun …har baar har problem mien tumhain yaad kiya kyun maan …

Aur phir ek din bas sirf kuch mail ke zariye who yeh jaan jati hai ke tum uss ko miss kar rahe hoo …ya phir shayad tumhain usski zarorat hai …yeh kaise rista hai ….kya ek dost miles door reh kar bhi yeh jaan sakta hai ke uss ka dost uss ko yaad kar raha hai …

Aur yeh jaante huye ke India aana uss ke liye maut nahi bulke maut se bhi ziada boori zindagi laayi gi who yahan aayi …sirf yeh jaan ne ke liye ke tum theek ho ya nahi ….ek dost ke liye uss ne apni zindagi apna carreer sab kuch dav par laga diya ..bina ek baar bhi soche huye …

Aur bina tumhare kuch bole tumhainkuch bhi bataye huye geet ko itna yaqeen tha ke tum agar usski zindagi ki sachaai jan gaye tou tum poori kushish karoo ge uss ko bacha ne ki …..itna vishvas …sirf ek dost par kiya jaata hai kiya ….maan ek dost dosre dost ki kahi huyi har baat ko manta hai samajhta hai …par kya ek dost dosre dost ki unn baton ko bhi samajh sakta hai joo ussne kabhi kahi hi nahi …kya aisa ho sakta hai ke jab khud geet ki zindagi uss ki izzat …uss ka maan samaan sab kuch dav par laga hoo tab who tumhari zindagi ke bare mien soche ….sirf ek dost ke bare mien …

Maan geet ne har pal ..har lamha tumhan pyaar kiya hai …uss ki har saans iss baat ki gawahi dee gi par agar tum yeh soch rahe hoo ke who khud tum se aa kar kahegi tou bhol jao ..kyun geet ko tou khud bhi nahi pata ke who tum se pyaar karti hai …

All the while maan was stunned with the realiazation that actually she lobed him ..not only loved but showed him at every step …remembering her attempts to make him feel light after getting to know what happened to dadi .. her smile just to make him believe that one day everything will be fine …her blushing face when he was staring her in that red saari …n her surrender to his touch …maan's face instantly lite up with the fact that she actually love him ..n a small smile came on his face with the thought how stupid he is for not noticing it all …but then the last set of words made him disappointed n he looked back at vineet …wanting to know that y geet will never confess her love …

N vineet continued …

Vineet : maan geet ko apne ghar mien kabhi koi pyaar nahi mila …uss ke dad ne pyaar tou choro kabhi ek insaan bhi nahi mana geet ko …sid 2 saal ka bhi nahi tha jab geet ko hostel bheja gaya …apne dad ke ghusse ke baad jo pehla ehsaas uss ke dill tak pohancha who tha tumhari dosti ka …uss saath ka jo tumne uss se diya …uss khushi ka jo geet ko uss ke best friend se mili …hostel ki uss dunya mien jahan doo dost sirf ache class mates ..studying partner samjhe jaate hain …wahan geet ne pyaar jaise ehsaas ko mehsoos tou buhat baar kiya huga magar jana nahi …aur uss ke liye pyaar ke who saare jazbaat dosti ka naam lete gaye ..

Kyun jis ehsaas ko uss ne sirf apne dost ke saath mehsoos kiya who uss ko aur koi naam dee hi nahi paayi ….hostel ki bahar ki dunya mien tou koi tha hi nahi jo uss ko pyaar deta ..jo uss ke aansoon ponchta …jo uss ki hassi ki waja banta …tou jab ek ehsaas uss ne kabhi jiya hi nahi tou kaise who uss ko apne best friend ke saath associate kar paayi gi ….tum bolo maan ek larki jis ke liye LOVE 4 alphabet se ziada kuch bhi nahi ..jis ne kabhi jana hi nahi ke mom dad ka pyaar ..bhai ka larna …ghar ka sukoon kiya hota hai …wooh kaise yeh except kare gi ke ke jo wooh apne best friend ke liye mehsoos karti hai who pyaar hai ….

Maan plzz iss kahani ka anh buhat khubsoorat hu sakta hai …agar tum chaho ..😉

While maan was completed lost digesting the new fact ..some where knew that how it would have been for geet …but then it pained to realize how much difficult life she was bearing all alone …n then looked at vineet with confused eyes not getting what he was saying ….

Vineet : agar tum geet ko uss ki feeling ka ehsaas dee laa paao tou geet ko wooh saari khushiyan mil sakti hain jo who deserve karti hai ..jo uss ki maa aur meri behan chahti thi …

Maan just couldn't say anything for a brief moment …lost in deep thought ..it was indeed a difficult decision …confessing his love would mean …to either have her for him till the last breath of his life or may to live his rest of the life withour her love …n to loose the most treasured friendship forever …which he never wanted at any cost ….not in his worst dream he would want to let go his jangli billi …but then what vineet said ..if that is true then it means geet needs his love more than his friendship …his care more then his concern ….torned b/w mind which was saying to backout n live with her forever like her best friend …her Casanova singh khurana …

Lost in his thought his body moved towards his car …and saw his jangli billi smiling meekly with vicky …but the moment she looked at him his world stopped with his moments …n he stood thr rooted …witnessing the trust she had for him ….seeing the questioning eyes …n worried face ..n then walked towards her …n sat beside geet …seeing the questioning eyes of vicky n confused look on geet's face he was about to say something but geet asked with a shaky voice ...

Geet : hugayi nakul se baat ….dadi theek hain na ..

N maan guessed vicky must have lied for his absence …but he was still lost in the words of vineet uncle …n said meaningfully ..

Maan : han hugayi ..

Geet : sab theek hai na maan …

Maan (cupping geet's face in one palm looking straight in her eyes) : don't worry mien sab theek kardoonga ….bas u have to be with me …always

Geet looked deep in his eyes she could feel the difference but still not able to understand what he meant …looking down for a moment ..n then looked back holding his hand …looking straight in his eyes …geet replied with a smile enchanting on her face ...

Geet : mien tou humesha apne best friend ke saath hi rahoongi …after all agar mein chali gayi tou Casanova Singh Khurana …sach mien kunwara reh jaye ga na …
(me:- waise reh tou jaye ga coz tumhare elawa kisi aur se shaddi jo nahi karega ..😉)

Vicky smiled full heartedly seeing the old dared devil is coming back …then shook his head at his own thoughts to make her smile when he very well know that its only his brother who can make her smile …

While maan was still looking straight in her eyes …thinking that what he is going to do is right or wrong ..

But then seeing her tired face …maan suggested her to have some rest n sleep if she is able to since the drive is still left for another 3 to 4hours …then asked vicky to follow adi's car …firslt vicky was confused but in front of geet he didn't asked anything ..

While maan was in his same thoughts the next moment from geet made him surprised …his sweet innocent friend authoritively kept her head on his chest holding his arm slept peacefully …the first reaction came from maan was shocked …to feel her soo close not that it was the first time she was sleeping like that but then the realization n acceptance for the real feeling they have made it all different …it feel soo soothing to feel her close like he possess her …like she just for him ..all for him …with him …always ..

Smiling looking at the serene face of geet maan was all the while staring at her sleeping form with utmost admiration …

PRECAP :-

There are just so many words
But I can't find one that's perfectly true.

You're the only one I desire
You're the only one in my heart
Through good and bad times
Nothing can keep us apart.

To my one and only love
That no one will ever compare
Take this simple vow …
Let this be my devotion forever.

I love you and I will never leave you
No matter what happens I'll always be true
Though times may be rough
and days may be tough
I'll stick with you through and through
until the next life... ?

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aoww the start was deadly, i was actually flying high at Mr MSK's high class sexy deadly irrevocably irrassitable man who planned all that in such a supa rocking way, aowww i so love him
he planned everything so perfectly

frst let all the conditions settle down with commissioner than took the charge and smashed everything cuming in his way to save his LADY LOVE ❤️ aowww i so love him...

Uss kutte kamine bloody Ba***** Pe***** ki iss se bhi zaida gandi halat honi chahie thi shitt he is a jerk an idiot grrr that was a blaster when he kicked him hard, i wish Maan to kill him to an extent that that bloody dog wont dare look like this at any other girl in this whole damn world

grrr wo chaudhary to!! Shit!! Heheh i loved where Vick shaved his half head and soaked him in ghee bhahaha i loved it

but still the daughter heart she possess was aoww so damn touchy still she couldnt see her father in hurt shit !!

Aoww the car scene was too cute and adorable when he snuggled her close to him to sooth her nightmares and she involuntraly held her closer to make herself confy knowing when he is there nothing will go wrong

aowww and then Vineet mamu ki entry

aowww I soo loved it ...
Edited by dazzlingdivz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

FRIENDS PLZZ DO LET ME KNOW UR pov ABOUT VINEET N MAAN'S CONVO ..
HOPEFULLY I WAS JUSTIFIED WITH WHAT VINEET SAID ..
N CONVIED THE RIGHT EMOTIONS ..

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N WHAT DO U THINK IF GEET WILL ACCEPT HER FEELING OR THR SHOULD BE A LEEP FOR GIVING HER TIME ..

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PLZZZ DO GIVE ME UR REVIEW I REALLY NEED TO KNOW WHAT U ALL R THINKING ABOUT IT ..

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WAITING TO KNOW WHAT IN UR MIND ...

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