OS: Maan & Geet - The Pier

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fantesy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

lovely os..realy heart touching...written vry beautifully...loved it...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Beautiful. The environment, the feelings, the lines they spoke, everything is just perfect. You painted the picture before my eyes. Brilliant.

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soni4eva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Simply amazin os beautifully written x

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its_me

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9
its really gud and for a changa simple
in its way but better than the most of his league

Thank you :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: KaSh-Maneet-Fan
Hiii Barfi
Awesome os
Loved it
Beautifully written
Interesting concept
Maaneet adorable
Plz do write more
Thanks 4 da pm

Thank you ladoo 🤗 but it was a one shot so no more parts after this :P

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Originally posted by: lil.mizz.smexii
Mind blowing !
so unique
so beautifully written

Thank you very much! :)

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#18

Originally posted by: sanjh89
SERENE!!!!!!!

love

SANJH

Awh thanks! :)

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Originally posted by: sweetsampa39
How can u label it to be a random thot & a random story!!!!!!! Its a soul touching moment,i dont wanna decorate it wid appreciative adjectives,jst wanna say it touched my heart...and d pic u chose,perfectly apt,told d story itself

Thank you so much! It was a random idea that just popped into my head but I'm so glad you liked it :) & the picture inspired me to have it based by a pier, something about piers are very romantic to me...