MG~ PAGALPAN~(SS) EPILOGUE pg/136 jan13th!!!

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

ohh teri starting me hi u showed our hero in negative!!!!!!!!!

waiting to know wat happen in past...

awsome start

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lehr

@lehr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Lovely update dear. Me waiting for next update. continue soon dear.

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mandymore

@mandymore

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

awsome strt...will b waitng 4 more

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

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+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

congratulation for new FF
awesome and interesting start
loved it
continue soon

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

congrats for ur new ff
awesome start
making us think is maan gud or grey shaded..

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harika

@dreamyharika

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

PAGALPAN

TEASER:

Heer: ayega? Kab aayega? Jab saari duniya ko pata chal jayega ki tu uske bache ko apne pet mein paal rahi hai? jab tu iss bache ko janam degi uske baad? Ya phir tab jab log tere bache ko najaayaz kahenge? Bol geet kab?

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Geet: diii'' aap aise bol bhi kaise sakti hain mere maan ke bare mein? Usne mujhe use kiya hoga shayad lekin uske khilaf ek aur baat bhi nahi kahengi aap. Main maan se pyar karti hoon aur uska ehsaas yeh bacha dilayega mujhe jindagi bhar see my love is with me here di geet said caressing her tummy. Kal jab mujhe pata chala ki mera maan hi mere andar hai toh maine ussi waqt faisla kiya ki maan ke ansh ko main apne se dur nahi karongi yeh maan ka hi toh pyar hai na di yeh maan hi toh hai jo mere saath hai mere andar hai

chalo this one is for all those readers who wanted me to give an other update yaar kamse kam mere likes toh mujhe mil jaane do plz will try to update kal agar i get 90+likes!!! i dont think this teaser has helped ur senses plz wait for the story to unfold yaar maan villan nahi hai i already told u maan can neva be a villan in my story😡

Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago

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harika

@dreamyharika

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

ohh teri starting me hi u showed our hero in negative!!!!!!!!!

waiting to know wat happen in past...

awsome start

thoda sa wait karlo dear

Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago