MG~ PAGALPAN~(SS) EPILOGUE pg/136 jan13th!!!

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harika

@dreamyharika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: AshleyAngelena
Wow please update soon...

Awesome job...

Please PM Me...

Please don't make Maan Villain...

i hope u dont go offline for a while coz i am updating in few minutes hangon ur doubts will get cleared with part 2

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harika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: princes939
How much tym????

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angelgurti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Hi I have read all ur FF's yaar u are very good writer😊👏🤗 Waiting Update 😍

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harika

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Posted: 12 years ago

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warning: plz skip the update or give up reading if u dont like the language i have used bt dont be mad at me as the title itself says the content

PAGALPAN

PART 2:

Heer was about to slap geet again then suddenly somebody held her hand tight.

Prem: how dare u heer? Maanta hoon geet is ur sister bt that doesn't give u rights to hit her prem spat in anger

Heer: toh aur kya karungi prem? Yeh galtiyan karegi aur main dekhti rahon? Heer replied prem with a painful look on her face

Prem: heer yeh abhi bhi bachi hai aur aise galtiyan ho jaati hai don't make an issue. Aisa kya hua ki tumne uspe haath uthaya?

Heer: bachi? Aur yeh? Bin byaa maa banne wali hai bachiya koi aisi galti karte hai? Prem was flabbergasted with the fact he just heard, geet and pregnant?? He knew how innocent she is and if she is truly conceiving somebody might have tricked her. Heer was still saying something which was not going into prem's mind. He was all lost in his thoughts thinking who it can be, he walked towards geet held her arms eva tightly and shouted kaun hai who? Kisne kiya yeh sab tere saath? Main use chodunga nahi bolo geet jawab do.

Heer: jawab yeh kya degi prem jab isne khud galti kiya hai? Prem has always loved geet so much like heer might be more than her. Geet has been a nave girl and he always used to keep her aloof from the mean world. Prem felt as if his ground is slipping, he has always been like a parent to her, he just cudnt understand that how she cud take such a step, how cud she loose herself. Bt her silence to wat heer said cleared his doubtful mind that she is at fault

Prem: chup kyun ho geet? Is ur sister right? Mujhe lagta tha ki tum galat nahi ho sakti bt then ill support u even if u are wrong geet coz I love u bataona kaun hai who? Kahi maan toh nahi?? He looked into her eyes expecting an yes coz maan was only the man in geet's life

Geet cudnt hold herself back and hugged him tight venting out her pain to him coz her the person from whom she expected for support is against her haan prem its maan lekin plz use kuch mat kehna I know who aayega mere paas plz prem I love him I love him so so much tum use kuch mat kehna thoda time dedo maan ko mujhe yakeen hai woh aayega she tried to explain her mindset bt heer was nowhere to listen.

Heer: ayega? Kab aayega? Jab saari duniya ko pata chal jayega kit u uske bache ko apne pet mein paal rahi hai? jab tu iss bache ko janam degi uske baad? Ya phir tab jab log tere bache ko najaayaz kahenge? Bol geet kab? heer spoke taking steps towards geet while geet inched backward all the while unable to bear her words. Bt then geet lost her balance fell on the bed post for a min she closed her eyes getting scared, prem held her stomach saving her to get hit the post, he made geet stand on her feet and yelled on heer

Prem: Yeh kya tarika hai baat karne ka heer? She is pregnant agar bache ko kuch ho jayega toh? Ek baar maan se kehke hume decide karna hoga ''yeh bacha sirf geet ka nahi hai maan ka bhi ispe utna hi haq hai heer

Heer: haq? Kaisa haq? Kaun sa haq prem? Jara mujhe bhi toh batado? Khud geet ne kaha na ki maan has used her bt she still feels he loves her. I say he wanted her so he pretended to love her. Use jo geet se chahiye tha who mil chuka ab who nahi aayega aur main nahi chahti ki meri behen kisi ki hawas ke shikaar banke uske paap ko apne seene se lagaye that's it geet lost the last ounce of her control

Geet: diii'' aap aise bol bhi kaise sakti hain mere maan ke bare mein? Usne mujhe use kiya hoga shayad lekin uske khilaf ek aur baat bhi nahi kahengi aap. Main maan se pyar karti hoon aur uska ehsaas yeh bacha dilayega mujhe jindagi bhar see my love is with me here di geet said caressing her tummy. Kal jab mujhe pata chala ki mera maan hi mere andar hai toh maine ussi waqt faisla kiya ki maan ke ansh ko main apne se dur nahi karongi yeh maan ka hi toh pyar hai na di yeh maan hi toh hai jo mere saath hai mere andar hai

Heer: geet!! She again lifted her hand bt this time she controlled her anger wat rubbish are u talking geet? Agar yeh tera pyar hai aisi pyar ka kya jo tujhe badnaami de? Agar yeh pyar hai toh yeh kaisa pyar hai jot ere bache ko taane de? Samajhti kyun nahi geet maan nahi aayega tu khud sochke bol ki maan ne use kiya tera? Ya nahi? Mujhe toh yahi lagta hai ki usne use kiya warna iss ek mahine mein usne who waise bhi call nahi kiya par teri call ka bhi jawab nahi diya heer tried to tell geet, observing geet she cud understand that geet is listening to her so she continued humne mama papa dono ko kho di geet aur unke bina kaise jeeye hai yeh hum dono ko achi tarah se pata hai lekin ek baat tu sunle tu chahkar bhi isse pita nahi de sakti she paused trying to gulp down take a breath to utter the next set of words, closing her eyes heer said ABORT THE FETUS!!! There ws a silence around for a long time even prem did not dare to speak anything coz maan is his cousin and if does so heer will defo feel as if he is trying to support him

Geet was shocked with those raw words of her sister, she cudnt hold back herself, she fell down sobbing clutching her stomach plz di aise mat kaho yeh maan ka pyar hai di plz di its not a fetus its love

Heer: I don't care geet I said abort and u are going to do it geet agar nahi kiya toh '''.. heer felt as if somebody started to stab her heart bt she had to coz she didn't want her sister to face humiliation from the world abort the fetus geet decide ur di?? Ur fetus??

Geet got up and spoke aap aisa nahi bol sakti aapko iss bache ko maarne ka koi haq nahi hai agar aapko lagta hai ki meri wajah se aapko badnaami hogi toh main yeh ghar chodke chali jaongi lekin bache ko nahi maarongi she declared looking with anger

Heer: haq?? Tu shayad bhool rahi hai geet aaj tu iss haal mein hai toh who meri wajah se hai, maine tujhe padhaya, likhaya, tujhe pyar kiya. Teri jindagi meri hai aur mai jo kahungi tu wahi karegi. Tu kahi nahi jaa rahi samjhi??

Geet: jaanti hoon di ki aapne mere liye kya kya kiya, yeh bhi maanti hoon ki aapka meri jindagi peh poora haq hai par di ab mere saath ek aur jindagi hai uska kya? Kya who aapka kuch nahi lagta di? Bolo na di? That's it heer backed off and started to go out of geet's room bt before she left, turned around and said I lost the battle geet par ek baat meri yaad rakhna tu job hi karegi, soch samajh ke karna ek baar tume galti kiya phir mat karna plz think abt it u have one more month phir toh tere bina kahe sabko pata chal jayega

Prem followed heer assuring geet that he wud manage her

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Armaan: maan yaar kab tak aise piyega? Chal so jaa armaan has been begging maan to sleep since a long time bt maan is nowhere to listen to him he is so much drunk tu jaa armaan mujhe nahi sona saying this he stomped out of his room holding the whiskey bottle in his hands. He came out of the mansion sat in his car drove aimlessly. He didn't know where the road was leading to after wat seems like eternity he stopped his car at a deserted place, threw the bottle onto a stone breaking it into pieces, yelled why?? Why geet? Meri kya galti thi?? How cud u blame me?? U have hurted me so much geet with ur accusions I don't feel the need to explain to u anything I hate u!!! samjhi tum I hate u!!! those last set of words piecered needles into his heart uttering them bt right now his ego is overpowering his senses so much that he has been avoiding geet since a month. She is calling him endlessly, every time she calls he just stares at his phone blankly or cuts her call. How much he wanted to hold her, love her, month of separation from his geet is like a hell on him bt then wheneva he recollects her words he again turns into a stone

Main darthi thi maan darthi thi ki kahi di ki bharosa na todh doon, yehi ek wajah hai she paused as her heart started to burn with an unknown sensation, looking at him maan, pehle bata toh dete ki tumne sirf mere badan se pyar kiya toh pehle hi tumhe apne aapko dedeti yeh pyar ka naatak kyun? U have taken me as a frnd bt I have loved u deep in my heart u were always there maan waise bhi tumhe jo chahiye who mil chuka mujhse toh ab yaha kyun khade ho? Jao yaha se!! or is it that u want me again? If it is so do tell me I am ready to give in she said clutching the spread close which was covering her naked body with her hands trying to open the knot waise bhi jiska mujhe darr tha who ho chuka I wont be able to face di anyways I am all ready for u maan kal raat ko tumne yehi maanga tha mera pyar ka sabooth tumhe mil chuka''.. haan!! tum hosh mein nahi the toh yakeen nahi hua shayad ab toh tumhe samajh aajayega hai na?? come have me!!!

Maan: ahhh!!!! How dare u doubt my love geet? How dare u? how cud u take my love to be a one night stand!!! How cud u utter those words geet? Itna samajh paayi ho tum mujhe? Kamse kam ek dost ke jaise sochti? Tumhe mahaan banna tha na yeh kehke ki u gave urself to me? Ab aur nahi I am not going to melt this time main bhi dekhta hoon kis hadh tak jaogi mera saath pane ke liye I am not going to talk to u tum kitna bhi try kyun na karlo uss din toh tumne mujhe mauka nahi diya baat karne ka toh aaj main tumhe mauka nahi donga bolne ka. Aaj ka hi din tumne mujhe ek mahine pehle baatein sunayi I can neva forget this day geet main bhi dekhta hoon TUMHE DAWA KAISE MILEGA MUJHE DARD DEKE!!!

Ab kaho PAGALPAN kiska hai?? maan ka?? Geet ka?? yaar i know many of u are actually confused with geet's behaviour she is in a state of confusion and her pagalpan for maan is making her more confused i hope u understand

maine already kaha maan is an idol man for me and for u all too so i am telling u all again he can neva be a casanova and a bad man in my story hope all my new readers understand this theory of mine!!!😡

PREVIOUS PART:

PART 1

NEXT PART:

PART 3

Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago

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angelgurti

@angelgurti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Yippe me first🥳

poor Geet 😭😭

Heer said abort the baby😡😡😡😡

Prem is atleast a bit understanding😊

Maan is also in so much pain😭😭

Hope Maan ek baar Geet ka phone pick karde toh use baache ke baare mein pata chalega please maan call pick karo yaar aur sab MU katam hoga...

Amazing update Harika👍🏼🤗

waiting for next update😍

Edited by angelgurti - 12 years ago

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Binish

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Posted: 12 years ago

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whoaaa.. ok rewind.. i chsnge wat i said before.. pagalpan fono ka hai.. par kya hoga hab maan ko pata chalefa geet is pregnant.. cont sooon hun

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princes939

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Gr8...!!!
Both r sufering...stil maan is at fault he shouls atleast atend her cal...heer is so selfish!!she is counting her good deeds done by her and sayin she has all ryt on her to decide wat she should do!!
I think geet vil leave frm her house nd later vil work in kc and she would not no dats maans company..nd there vil b encounter of maan geet!!
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