MG FF DEMON'S ANGEL Last Pt&Epilogue28/1/2013 P-98 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
superb part richa

maan is totally a shaitan

i request plzz when u update change the part no and date
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

hii richa

the update is super

love maan's madness and u portrate geetakshi beauty very well

maan ko geet ke liye gana chahiye

main tere pyaar main pagal pagal aise dhoodhta hoo jaise...😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
wow lovely part shona..phew geet is saved by her father and maan is so angry not to have geet...ab kaan kahan se kheechegi...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Wo phli baar, jb hum mile, hatho me hath ... Na dale...
Janu superb update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
*DEMON'S ANGEL*

PART - 7


MAAN is fuming. His royal blood boiling badly.

S.CHIEF:Yuvraj bat samjhne ki koshish kariye. Aapki jaan bahut keemti hai.aap 1 mamuli si ladki k liye use dau pe nai laga sakte.

MAAN put his sword on hs neck:apni slah(advise) apne pas rakho.wo ladki to ab mera junoon bann gai hai.a jb tk hum uske is rup ka paan nai kr lete hum chain se nai baithenge.isliye jo keh rhe hai wahi kro.

S.CHIEF got a cut mark on his nek wid his sharp sword:samjh gaya Yuvraj.jo aap chahte hai wahi hoga.

MAAN leve hm wid jerk nd he gt relief breath:chhavi lagao. He shout in anger.


In SANKARA tribal's place:
Darun bring both girl safly bak 2 hs place.Pratyusha go2 hr hom nd Darun dragged Geetakshi wid him in deir hut. He shouts on her.

DARUN:kisse puchh k pachhim disha k talab pe snan krne gai thi?

GEETAKSHI:baba aap mujhe dant kyu rae hai?

DARUN:to tm meri koi b bat sunti kyu nai ho?wo ilaka surakshit nai hai.or koi b waha se is jungle me aa skta hai jaise aaj wo dusht aa gaya.

GEET:Pr baba hum to bchpn se hi wha jati hai.

DARUN:chup kr.kitni bar samjhau ki ab tu bachhi nai rai badi ho gai hai.lekin akal to teri abi b ghutno me hai.

GEETAKSHI:ap isliye mujhe dante hai kyunki ma nai hai wo hoti to...


DARUN:wo aj jeevit hoti to mujhe itna chinta hi nai hoti.wo khud tujhe sb smjha deti.ab main tujhe kaise samjhau.Geet tu nai janti wo kitna bada shaitan hai.wo to achha hua ki main samay pe waha pahunch gaya wrna wo janwar tuje utha k le jata.

GEETAKSHI(hr eyes trn wet):kintu baba isme meri kya galti hai ki wo waha aa gaya?

DARUN melt immediately cing tears in his loving daughter's eyes. He cant c hr lyk dat. He step 2wrds hr nd filled hr in hs embrace.

DARUN:beti firr tu apne baba ki bat sunti kyu nai hai?mujhe b tujhpe gussa hona psnd nai hai.teri suraksha ko leke ghabrata hu.tu meri bhot badi zimmedari hai.

GEETAKSHI rested hr head on hr father's chest.she still sobbing:baba ap mujpe gussa mat hua karo hm sehan nai kr pate.

DARUN patted hr head lovingly:firr vachan(promise)de age se akele bina kisi ko bataye kai nai jayegi.

GEETAKSHI:hm vachan dete hai baba.hum ab kai nai jayenge.

DARUN thot:beti mujhe shama kr de lekin tu meri bahut badi jimmedari hai.tu nai janti lekin tu meri amanat hai.

In mid nite all tribal people were in sleep except some worriars who guard d sleeping people. Geetakshi 2 in sleep. Suddnly she felt som weight on he. She open her eyes nd sw Maan was on her. She his lustful intense eyes and get scared alot. She wants 2 shout but he slammed his lips on hers. Geetakshi wake up out of fear,bt her nightmare came true coz Maan was standing in hr room. She was about to shout but he placed his rough hands on hr nd made her shut. He made hr faint by put his finger pressure on her neck's vain. She lost her concious. Maan put her on his shoulder and made an escape from deir carefully. He sit on his horse wid her and reached to his palace. His all men also follows them and make sure no one follows them. Maan killed all the security guards to reached her. Maan reached 2 his palace nd tuk hr 2 his bedroom. He threw hr on hs bed. She ws still unconcious. Maan order hs dasi(female servant) 2 made hr wake up nd get hr ready 4 him. He went out of d room 4 hs drinks. All dasis do deir job. She wake up nd scared seeng her in a new place. All dasi force hr 2 dressup an gt ready 4 hm. But she denied and push dem all nd trying 2 escape frm dere. Bt as she reached 2 d door,b4 she open it,it open by outside and Maan was stndng dere. She scared and steps back.

Dasi:Yuvraj ye manti hi nai.

Maan made dem quite by showing his hand nd signaled dem all 2 leave d room instantly. Dey all followd hs order nd leave dem alone.Maan cm in nd locked d door.He strt movng 2wrds hr nd she steps back to save hr self from him. Bt Maan ws intoxination. He wnts hr at ny cost.

GEETAKSHI:tm mujhe yaha kyu laye ho?jane do mujhe.

MAAN:jane dunga.lekin pehle tumhe hasil kar lu uske bad.itni pyas to hume aaj tk nai lgi jitni tumhe dekh k lgi hai.

GEETAKSHI sw hm in disgust:tumari ye ichha kbi puri nai hogi.mere baba tume nai chhodenge.

MAAN laughed at her:wo to tb jb wo yaha tak pahunchenge.tumari jaan kari k liye bta du ki ye mera mahal hai or charo or mere sipahi(soldiers) tainat hai.tumari cheekhe b dur2 tk kisi ko sunai nai dengi.

GEETAKSHI sobbed nd pleads 4 mercy:jane do mujhe maine tumhra kya bigada hai?

MAAN grabbed hr nd lift hr in hs strong arms nd movd 2 hs bed. He placed hr on bed. She tryng 2 gt up bt he pinned her hands 2 d mattres and come over her.he locked hr deligate body in his hard frame.She is struggling to free hrself nd crying contibut his pressure was on hers.

MAAN:bigada to tmhri is khubsurti ne hai jisne hmara dinn ka chain or rato ki neend chhen li hai.aaj to hm tmhe apna bnakr rhenge.or duniya ki koi takt tme aaj bacha nhi skti.

He slammd hs hungry lips on hrs bt she dsnt respond 2 whch he nibbled on hr nek nd made hr cry in pain.she felt hs shrp teeth whch gave hr lot of pain.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
omg maan ne geet ko chura liya
now who will save geet
hope his father come on time
gr8 job richu
waiting 4 next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Janu superb update. Isse jyada kuch nhi kha ja sakta
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
omg ab aage kya hoga yaar geet kaise bachegi maan se?????😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
awesome up ...i hope geet thik rahe
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
omg maan ne geet ko utha liya... wo bji itne security k beech...
ab kya hoga...

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